After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Here come Nightmare Rarity.
From the way this chapter started I thought you were teasing us with a fun prologue for the arc before things got dark; guess I should have know it was just a foreboding start.
Naruto and Rarity's day at the beach was a fun read from start to finish. Even though Rarity seemed to be fine after Luna's sessions certain things here kinda gave off a vibe that there was something clearly wrong with the fashionista. I thought at the beginning that the whole scene was going to turn out to be a nightmare that hooked us in a sense of calm but it turns out that that prediction was wrong. The clop was probably the best between the two so far in the story and that's saying something considering the threesome awhile ago lol.
By the point we reach the party and its aftermath I was thinking that this chapter really was just going to be solely filled with fluff before the story took a dark and painful twist. Of course once I let my guard down and thought that, yeah it would be fine, Shadowfright's nightmares struck the group. Even though we only caught glimpses of the girls nightmares they must have been twisted to almost break them. It was a perfect distraction to weaken the group and distract Luna so that Shadowfright could strike and claim its new host.
Out of all the nightmares we've read about from Rarity this was probably both the most realistic and the most frightening. Instead of a boogyman, Rarity saw her personal fears come to life and was helpless to stop them. After many a sleepless night this nightmare broke whatever defenses she had up to pieces. Shadowfright is a cruel bastard and I have a feeling that by the end of this arc he'll be in a world of pain before his death.
6429066 here comes the BOOM