After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Did you accidentally change Thunder's last name to Shock? Or is it a different OC? I've just noticed it throughout the story and I wasn't sure if it was the last name that was just misspelled or a different OC altogether.
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Yeah that was a mix-up.
6695293 Alright, just making sure, because you had said Thunder Quill the first time he was introduced, and the second in the chapter where Naruto proposes to Rarity, but then Thunder Shock is said when Naruto is talking about non-snooty nobles, and then in the Grand Galloping Galla It's Thunder Shock with Candy.
so it seems to me that out of all the Mane 6 Rarity has had the largest growth in combat ability as of this chapter. Sure Dash and AJ may have her in straight hand to hand combat and brute strength, but Rare's magic and swordsmanship are pretty top notch from this chapter's battle. Her use of gemstones are a neat technique that show's promise in its creativity and know Rarity she'll have more uses for such a spell. Still hard to believe Rarity uses a rapier as her primary weapon but its grown on me as I picture her striking an Olivia Armstrong pose from FMA: Brotherhood; she certainly shares the confidence to do so.
Vanity's backstory was a brutal but efficient way to tie in some call back characters-Twinkleshine and Bone-back into the story and allow for some more drama in this last battle. Twinkleshine did sort of vanish after making 2-3 appearances early in the story and having her return was a nice reintroduction to her character and the regrets she has carried with her since the rape happened. It does make me feel somewhat bummed for the crazy bitch that was Vanity but at the same time her character has annoyed me the most within the story for being such an effectively evil character.
Wow now I feel bad for her
I'm guessing this is the same Bone(Breaker) from the Chapter "Attack on Ponyvillie!",
and i'm guessing the "illegal performance enhancing drugs" are/were "Prism Berries".
Where it says "Rarity appeared between her and vanity", shouldn't it be "between her and Twinkleshine"?
I understand why she did that, it was vengeance. Ir doesn't make it right but I can understand why.
Rarity's development over the story has been amazing, she's stronger, smarter and more skillful in her craft in finding and using gemstones. You were right, this was pretty dark. Vanity story was just tragic, at least eventually Bone got his but he was responsible for creating the condemned monster that Vanity became while Twinkleshine took this bad experience and work to make sure it would never happen again. The fact that Vanity wanted revenge for what happen to her and her only friend and beloved babysitter is understandable but the way she went about it was the worst way possible. Twinkleshine still loves her and its a shame that Vanity can't see that she just wanted to help her. If she's still alive, maybe Twinkleshine can help her, she's probably the only one who could save her. Even if Vanity's a dark reflection of her, Rarity has plenty of friends and family that won't ever let her fall.