After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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5578543 How about now?
I could swear I've read that exact massage scene before. Did you delete a chapter and fit it into this? I'm not a fan of deja vu, so if I could get an answer of where I saw this. That would be fantastic.
6266581 This chapter is very reminiscent of "A Second Chance" by Jay-The-Brony he does something similar in the chapter "Planning for the Stage", great minds think alike and all.
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From my preview chapter its that scene.
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I read that story quite a while ago, haven't checked back. The idea inspired me as I already noted or planned on avoiding the whole CMC subplot for looking for their cutie marks as I felt the plot would have been overused.
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He was talking about my massage scene from the previews of Best Night Ever so a completely different scene. I don't think that story has a massage scene unless its in a chapter I haven't read. I haven't checked back for new chapters.
Aww Twilight was about to have a little fun. And then Spike had to run in and kill the mood.
6267743 you made this episode seem so much better then the original, great work. The only thing I find nitpicky is Dinky's cutie mark. I personally think her talent would have to do with magic, but that's just me. You still made this seem better than what it originally was.