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ultrapoknee


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Bonus Chapter 2: Published.

Bonus Chapter 3: Standby.

New Story: Standby

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Apr
26th
2020

Chapter's up. · 7:43am April 26th

Hey everyone. The new chapter is up. If you didn't get an update it's because of my April fools prank. I used the same post for the joke with the chapter. In hindsight, I should've made them separate.:twilightblush: Anyway, enjoy it.

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You crazy spammer.

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Thanks for the love. I caught that mistake myself. I did fix it, but it didn't save. I'll edit my first story before I post the third installment.

Hey, I wanted to say I love your Dragon ball MLP story, but there is one thing I just have to point ut. Normally, I'd commenton the chapter, but since it was uploaded so long ago I just wanted to make sure you read this. During Goku's battle against Dragon Lord Torch, You had him use Kiao-Ken. While this is fine, you messed up in the multipliers. You went from straight Kiao-Ken to Kiao-Ken x2, then to times three before finally times four. This is actually a mistake I seem to see in a lot of Dragon ball fanfics. There is no such thing as Kiao-ken x2, it goes straight from Kiao-ken to x3. This is because The initial Kiao-Ken is already a times two multiplier, So it would make no sense to have a Kiao-Ken x2. I honestly don't know why so many people make this mistake, when in both the anime and the manga there was never any Kiao-Ken x2, just the original then x3, etc.

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Apr
26th
2020

Chapter's up. · 7:43am April 26th

Hey everyone. The new chapter is up. If you didn't get an update it's because of my April fools prank. I used the same post for the joke with the chapter. In hindsight, I should've made them separate.:twilightblush: Anyway, enjoy it.

Report ultrapoknee · 30 views ·
Apr
26th
2020

Chapter's up. · 7:43am April 26th

Hey everyone. The new chapter is up. If you didn't get an update it's because of my April fools prank. I used the same post for the joke with the chapter. In hindsight, I should've made them separate.:twilightblush: Anyway, enjoy it.

Report ultrapoknee · 30 views ·
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