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This story is a sequel to Dragonball MLP


Peace has returned to the inhabitants of planet Equis. However, the same could not be said for the planet Earth. In the midst of the threat from Cell, An enemy thought to be dead has stolen the Dragonballs and taken them off world. Now, the planet faces a new calamity with its very balance being thrown into chaos. Goku, as well as the other Z-fighter's, must travel back to planet Equis to retrieve the Dragonballs before it's too late. Old friends are reunited, and new bonds are formed in this new installment of Dragonball MLP!!!

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I hope Goku and the others will find a way to stop her

Great chapter and start. I look forward to read more of your Mlp DBZ crossover stories and chapters, ultrapoknee.

i hope spike and scootaloo are ready for the showdown.

great first chapter but now they only have one week before the earth is gone is once again chrysalis will need to become as strong as super perfect cell if she's going to get revenge and how the heck are the z fighters going to get to equis get the dragon balls and get back to earth in time shazammitylam

You plan on bringing Scootaloo and Spike back as well?

and another thing won't yamcha and tien be going to equis as well and what about android 16 shazammitylam

oh yeah and how is goku supposed to have a rematch with the princesses in this story if the z fighters only have a week to get the dragon balls before the planet dies shazammitylam

..... Okay. I know just whot to say. *Sigh.* (Takes in a deep breath)




IN HONOR OF DBGT! THIS WILL BE DBWT! BECASU WE CAN'T HAVE ACTUAL WORDS AT THE ENDING! .... Unless you count Super.

Comment posted by pinkiepierocks deleted Mar 3rd, 2017
Comment posted by pinkiepierocks deleted Mar 3rd, 2017

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Only way bring all Goku family and friends saved life need it when someone have a chance wishes dragon Ball bring back to life first but cannot bring back to life seconds after Dragon Ball bring back to earth right time .

7992660 great first chapter but now they only have one week before the earth is gone is once again chrysalis will need to become as strong as super perfect cell if she's going to get revenge and how the heck are the z fighters going to get to equis get the dragon balls and get back to earth in time and another thing won't yamcha and tien be going to equis as well and what about android 16 and how is goku supposed to have a rematch with the princesses in this story if the z fighters only have a week to get the dragon balls before the planet dies but if you haven't already planned it i think i know how the z fighters will get to equis goku teleports him and the other z fighters to king kai's planet and ask him to point them to where equis is if he can and then when goku finds it he teleports all of them there is that right please respond shazammitylam

7992660 Sorry, I saw 'World Tour' and thought of how GT stands for 'Grand Tour.' Also the whole Dragon Balls not being on Earth make it go 'BOOM!' reminded me of the worst DB series that is only slightly better than the horrible movie that shall never be said.

7992660 and i want to hear your opinion this would you consider lightning dust's hatred for rainbow dash be like eddie brock aka venom minus the whole symbiote thing please respond to this and what i asked and suggested previously shazammitylam

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7992660 can you use this opening

7994928 You know its funny this song never clicked for me. I mean its an ok song but it never caught my fancy. I wasn't really planning on making an intro theme either. But if I did it would be limit break x survivor. That song iw catchy as hell.

Comment posted by pinkiepierocks deleted Mar 5th, 2017
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7994982 Head Cha LA was mostly designed with representing both the change in both tone and focus in series from its Dragonball roots. About reaching new heights of power all the while experiencining the joys and pains of growing up. Yet finding new wonders around you to better cultivate for tomorrow. I admit I did always enjoy this song but it later grew on me. Each their own I guess. Also yes Limit X Break Survivor is a great song. It kinda feels like a mesh between Dragon Soul and WE GOTTA POWER!!

Also while this was an excellent return to this storyline, I feel the need to point something out. If they only have acess to two wishes currently, both used by Chrysalis, and causing them to be transplanted off world. Which of course leads to the current issue. Shouldn't the DragonBalls once on Planet Equss having scattered worldwide due to the wishes being fulfilled, (not just Equestria), becoming inert due to turning stone, and not being active until a year's time conflict greatly with the seven days time limit for Earth's demise due magical imbalamce?

Just accord to me earlier and now I felt to mention it. Speaking of Equss since Chrysalis has been on Earth for roughly four years since the last story, then must have left a huge power vacuum amongst the Changlings. Well that is unless they ended up starving to death, hunted down as criminals, run by second commands, or are reformed under King Thorax's benevolent rule. The last of which I hope turns out to be the case, since he was completely absent in the last story. Plus beings friends with Spike too helps. Though imagine if he did end up "ascending" it would not be as easy compared the actual Season 6 finale.

Anyways I wish you luck on your writings regardless.

7998437 Why do you think its called World Tour. Once Chrysalis hits Equis, the Dragonballs will scatter across the globe. However, Equis will have a profound effect on them. I'll explain more once we get there. I left Thorax out the first story for a reason and he will make an appearance in this story.

7998437 Also, don't forget about the time dilation between planets. That plays a big part with the deadline for the Earth.

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7998503 Oh yeah duh. That is very true I forgot the possible time difference. Regardless they will need to keep in regular contact with Earth to constantly to keep track of its progression. So I guess Goku will be forced to transport them via Instant Transmission since the spaceship will be too slow in comparison. Well if he has enough energy to pull it off that is.

Hmm I had a feeling you did not forget yet I had faith you would have given a valid reason why regardless if planned on using him or not. Well that is all and I will not pester you anymore. Thank you for answering. I wish you luck on your future writings then.

7998503 naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiilllllllllllllllllllllllll limit break x survivor is a really catchy song and great first chapter but once again chrysalis will need to become as strong as super perfect cell if she's going to get revenge and another thing won't yamcha and tien be going to equis as well and what about android 16 and if you haven't already planned it i think i know how the z fighters will get to equis goku teleports him and the other z fighters to king kai's planet and ask him to point them to where equis is if he can and then when goku finds it he teleports all of them there is that right and i want to hear your opinion this would you consider lightning dust's hatred for rainbow dash be like eddie brock aka venom minus the whole symbiote thing and could you explain something how long has it been for equis in the past 5 years for earth and do the inhabitants of equis age differently from earth because it would be weird if the z fighters got to equis and everyone they knew are all old like roshi minus the princesses since their immortal also who do you think will win the next death battle because frankly i want venom to win please respond man shazammitylam

7998503 and another thing how is the next chapter shazammitylam

Comment posted by pinkiepierocks deleted Mar 6th, 2017

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But Chrysalis only one villain not enough . Can you make new villain and is she finally learn use ki energy please let me know .

8000366 I never said Chrysalis would be the only villain. And yes she has learned how to access her Ki energy. I thought that was obvious. She's been on eEarth for 5 years.

8000375
Sorry my bad . But Twilight failed to learn that ki how is possible .

8000407 Twilight failed because she has learned magic her whole life. That's like switching a computer technician to a physical instructor. Is it possible? Yes! Will it be easy? No! In order to access it; she would have to turn off her magic to do so. Chrysalis had a much longer timeframe to learn how to access it

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Is Luna and Celestia going to be in this story?

Comment posted by pinkiepierocks deleted Mar 7th, 2017
Comment posted by pinkiepierocks deleted Mar 7th, 2017

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Can you tell me Goku still keep super saiyan form walking around Equis like this or can he transform back to normal . If he really still super saiyan form nopony can't recognize him .

8001649 okay how much of the chapter is done and limit break x survivor is a really catchy song and great first chapter but once again chrysalis will need to become as strong as super perfect cell if she's going to get revenge and another thing won't yamcha and tien be going to equis as well and what about android 16 and if you haven't already planned it i think i know how the z fighters will get to equis goku teleports him and the other z fighters to king kai's planet and ask him to point them to where equis is if he can and then when goku finds it he teleports all of them there is that right and i want to hear your opinion this would you consider lightning dust's hatred for rainbow dash be like eddie brock aka venom minus the whole symbiote thing and could you explain something how long has it been for equis in the past 5 years for earth and do the inhabitants of equis age differently from earth because it would be weird if the z fighters got to equis and everyone they knew are all old like roshi minus the princesses since their immortal also who do you think will win the next death battle because frankly i want venom to win also why is tirek on the cover and another thing if you can can you show us an image of celestia in her transformed state and i even have an idea about when goku has a rematch with celestia if in equis time they have much longer then a week to get the dragon balls and it involves celestia's healing factor having limits thing i mentioned earlier okay so goku is fighting celestia in her transformed state with him as a super saiyan of course like in his fight with frieza he notices as the more and more pain he inflicts upon her it's taking her longer to heal and that he senses she isn't absorbing as much solar power as before and that's when he realizes that's her weakness her healing factor has limits and if hit by extremely powerful beings such as himself can overtax it as well as dispersing the energy she's absorbing without her exploding so wanting to rap this up he charges up the kamehameha while she charges up her own attack then they unleash it with goku's overpowering hers and like in his fight with hit during the universe 7 and universe 6 tournament he charges to her at breakneck speeds and slams his fist into her gut and slams her into the ground in which at that point her healing factor is completely overtaxed and reverts back to her normal state at first confused as to why she isn't healing and how she was knocked out of her transformed state then goku walks up and explains to her how he saw her weakness like with frieza in Resurrection F does that sound good and are your pms working now with the new story out please respond man shazammitylam

8003102 I'm like 1,030 words in. I will answer most of your questions in the chapter.

8003108 what about the other things i said some of those definitely can't be answered in the next chapter

Comment posted by pinkiepierocks deleted Mar 7th, 2017

so its been 5 years since Goku left Equis huh and it looks like the story with frieza and the androids played out like it was supposed to and now Goku and the gang have 7 days to go to Equis, get the dragon balls, stop Chrysalis, and get back in time to stop cell? oh man this is already interesting I wonder what's changed on Equis in 5 years oh well guess we'll find out soon I hope we see more epic battles between Goku and some new villains or maybe the princesses or Chrysalis ether way I'm excited to see what happens next can't wait!!.

I'm sorry but from your last story Goku could sense malicious intent, and you didn't have changeling magic change Ki energy in the last story. So can you explain why this is suddenly different? I get you were going for a plot device with chrysalis, but you kind of made yourself a plot hole there.

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