Student and Teacher, Servant and Mistress, Citizen and Ruler, Friend and...Lover?
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The purple unicorn woke up with a yawn, eyes weary and unaware. She nuzzled closer into the arms of her mare friend, Princess Celestia. The regal alicorn put her head around the neck of her faithful student, snuggling her muzzle into the mare’s purple and magenta striped mane. This made Twilight giggle and push the Celestia away from her.
“Wake up Celly, it’s time to raise the sun,” Twilight Sparkle responded to her silly mare friend’s actions, making a moan escape the other mare’s mouth. “But Twily… Can’t you raise the sun today sweetie?”
This got a laugh out of Twilight. She pushed the princess towards the balcony where she raises and sets the sun each morning at dusk and each evening for her younger sisters’ moon to rise in the nights sky.
Celestia scowled at Twilight then chuckled, “Okay then, you got me dear.”
The two mare’s got out of bed as Celestia walked towards the balcony, her yellow magical aura surrounding her long alicorn horn, leaving Twilight to make the large bed, fit for Celestia herself, luckily it was big enough for the both of them.
As the purple maned mare turned to the mirror after making their bed, Celestia gasped. But Twilight didn’t hear her mare friend.
“Umm… Twi darling? L-little help please?” the alicorn shouted inside from the balcony. Twilight approached the princess with an steady smile on her face. “What is it princess?”
Celestia hesitated to answer for a second, but she knew her student was an understanding mare, so she explained to her why she needed her.
“I’ve got myself in a bit of a pickle…”
“What do you mean?” the unicorn replied.
She nervously laughed then blurted it out, “The sun won’t rise! My magic is being weird!” she said quite informally to her usual manner of addressing ponies, even Princess Luna at times.
“Well, I suppose I can help you, now can’t I?” Twilight’s horn lit up, as did the regal alicorn standing beside her, as they slowly but surely raised the sun together, the princess’s large wing wrapped around the smaller mare’s body.
“Thank you for your assistance Twilight, I knew you would be able to help me. I love you dear,” she praised her mare friend and most faithful student.
“I love you too, Celly…”
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Edit: Fixed my own dang typo...
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They're doing better than you at the moment. XD
Cute chapter, though the dialogue and situation felt a bit forced.
It was cute and I liked it. New Contributor!
Wut.
Yey
(It's Phantom here)
6052020 Ahm workin on it :) (its Phantom Heart)
When it comes to this ship, I have always believed that there wouldn't be the presence of that "student-teacher" relationship that they already have.
Granted, it would take time to change that mindset, at least for Twilight, but it seems clear based on their behavior that they are very comfortable with each other romantically and perhaps even sexually.
If that's the case, then why does Celestia still think of her as her "most faithful student"?
The theme of this chapter is cute, but it seems to have been poorly executed. It was rather rushed, was lacking in details concerning their thoughts, body language, and emotions, and the language ranged from awkward to incredibly awkward at times.
I look forward to seeing any and all progress you make.
Also in the author's note portion, the "their" should be "they're".