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New Lunar Principality


Siege Luna! Siege Luna! Siege Luna!

Sep
12th
2018

Need non mecha fan beta readers · 7:25pm September 12th

I'm doing a second draft of a short story. A lot of non-mecha fans where confused with the first draft because I wrote it without anticipating much confusion from those unfamiliar with the tropes of mecha. I'm attempting to make the second draft to be easier to understand for a general audience.

Mecha btw being giant piloted robots in war setting.

It's 4 pages long, 2318 words. Written with an omniscient narrator. PM me if interested.

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