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New Lunar Principality


Siege Luna! Siege Luna! Siege Luna!

Sep
12th
2018

Need non mecha fan beta readers · 7:25pm September 12th

I'm doing a second draft of a short story. A lot of non-mecha fans where confused with the first draft because I wrote it without anticipating much confusion from those unfamiliar with the tropes of mecha. I'm attempting to make the second draft to be easier to understand for a general audience.

Mecha btw being giant piloted robots in war setting.

It's 4 pages long, 2318 words. Written with an omniscient narrator. PM me if interested.

The products of my possible insanity
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I'm not writing fanfics anymore, since I'm focusing on original works specifically a book.

But I can be a proofreader or beta reader if you want?

Hey, it's been awhile since we last talked, were you still interested in The Unexpected Tyranny of Dusk Shine?

when are you going to upload the next chapter
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