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Chapter 26 revised · 3:04pm Oct 29th, 2018

A revised and rewritten version of chapter 26 of SAPR is now up, along with several other chapters to further the current arc.

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I see. Well, you could show us what Sunset's doing after the start of the rebellion, or even a look into Starlight's mind, where she might be hoping the rebellion succeeds, and wanting to kill Celesto ("You did this to me! Now, I'll make you pay!"). Also, explain what happened to Daring Do. Maybe have Lightning sacrifice himself to protect the Mane 6 from Eve, to prove he really has changed. Bonus points if Rainbow Dash is the one who fights Eve after she kills Lightning. And, what happened to the Zebras piloting HANNIBAL.
Other than that, have fun on your other story. (I know what it's like to lose interest in other stories you're working on)

I...I'm honestly not sure. I appreciate that there are a few people like you who still enjoyed it (although I'll not deny that part of the reason that my motivation flagged was a feeling that in general people had lost interest) but the more I look back at it the less satisfied I am with the story.

There are still things that I like (in particular everything where characters remininisce about Twilight I'm still really proud of) but there are also lots of thing that I don't like such as how diffuse it is and how slow the pacing is.

Plus I'm pretty heavily to a new story at the moment which is taking up all my energy.

So the answer is...I just don't know right now. I'm sorry that I don't have a better answer for you but there it is.

So, are you going to continue Starfleet Nemesis?

Thanks for the fave of Fall of Starfleet: A new Hearth's Warming Day

Thanks for the favourite

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