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Amy Clockwork

Writer and Project Lead for Then the Shadows Whisper, FiM Fiction Enthusiast and Reviewer, Lover of Ponies

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The Sword Coast by AdrianVesper
8 out of 10 - Great
- Interesting Character Development
- Excellently Written Action Scenes and Visualization
- Choppy Dialogue
- Fascinating World Building but Not Without Some Huge Exposition Dumps
Read it here. Read the full review here.

Cold Light by Scramblers and Shadows
8.7 out of 10 - Definitely Looking Forward to More
- Brilliantly directed
- Great scene visuals & intro
- Well done dialogue & characterization
- Interesting narrative
Read this story here. Read the full review here.

On Time for a Change by LordSmokedMeatsandFishes
3 out of 10 - Much Improvement Needed
- Weak Characterization of Main and Canon Characters
- Lacking Scene Visualization
- Poor Pacing
- Solid Dialogue
Read it here. Read the full review here.

Awaken, Scootaloo by xjuggernaughtx
Score: 8 out of 10 - Great
- Solid Depiction of Canon Characters
- Thoughtful Symbolism
- Deep Dialogue
- Interesting Themes
Read it here. Read the full review here.

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Thank you :twilightsmile:

I shall waggle my finger at you most dramatically

:rainbowlaugh: I'll make sure to keep that in mind.

In the epic and everlasting language of my most wise and wonderful cousin: "W00T!" I do hope you start feeling better, though. By all means, don't make my story a priority until you are in top shape. If I find you're reviewing my story when you're supposed to be bedridden, I shall waggle my finger at you most dramatically.

Hi! I have an answer!

I should have the review done in two weeks. :rainbowhuh: It's a long time but I've been bedridden for the last week with a fever, and the sudden cold weather isn't exactly helping. :pinkiesick:

P.S. This is also the reason why I haven't sent you the usual notification. :twilightsmile:

P.P.S. It might be done sooner.

I has query.

When I noticed that Trixie vs. Equestria was slated to be the next story up for review, I might have mentioned it in my blog 'cause I was excited. :twilightblush: Now I've got people PMing me about when the review's going to come, and I hate having to say "I don't know." So – at the risk of sounding whiny – I forward the question you. I assume the answer will be something along the lines of "when we're not busy with real life stuff," but at least this way I'll be able to quote you on that. :eeyup:

1328234 Good to know! I hope you didn't mind, but I sent you a message. Wouldn't want your comments to be full. :twilightsmile:

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