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Czar_Yoshi


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Equestrian culture loves cutie marks. Filly Starlight Glimmer hates them and never wants one. So, she leaves Equestria.


Inspired by Imploding Colon's Austraeoh.

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Inspired by Imploding Colon's Austraeoh.

Does this mean it's going to be really long, and that you won't respond to any comments?

8252518 Really long? Maybe. I have no idea how long I'll be able to keep this up. But never anywhere near that long. And I have no intention of ignoring comments.

Mostly, it means it's going to be a daily updating adventure fic.

Hap

A pleasant chapter. Kind of scary, seeing as she's still just a filly.

Also... weeks in a cave? Even for a unicorn with the ability to create light, that sounds exhausting. And carrying weeks worth of bread and cheese in a saddlebag seems like an awful lot of weight for a kid. And that's not even counting how lucky she is that she didn't get lost or fall in a pit or something.

Why doesn't she just levitate herself? That's one of the most useful things we've seen any unicorn do in this series.

8259636 She doesn't know how to do that yet. But she'll definitely figure it out some day.

Hap

Huh. So... she's removed her own cutie mark? Hasn't gotten one yet, and drew one onto her fur?

Though, if she'd removed it already, that could explain why she's having trouble with magic (you know... beyond just exhaustion).

Hap

She scarfed the berries by the dozen. Small, bulb-shaped, and incredibly sour, they made her tongue puff up as she ate, but she didn't care.

I thought for sure she'd poisoned herself. Damn, girl. You gotta be more careful.

That was too much like getting attached, and she had to prevent herself from caring too much about anything in order not to find her cutie mark.

Okay, I see. She drew on the equals sign, and is trying to avoid getting her cutie mark.

This is a great story, but just one comment about it- breathe vs breath

She will go far with her determination

I love this, Have her meet the Hollow Knight

Not letting anything deter her I like it

More, please, we love it!!

Hap
Hap #14 · June 30th · · · Camp ·

green patch of grass on the far side of the late that was

lake

Interesting developments.

8266342 Well, luckily, it's a daily, so more should never be that far off!

Hap

the sun warmer her from within

warmed

I wonder how many lakes in the world sink into caves.

Hap

šŸŽµ don't go chasin' waterfalls...

Hap

Well... I was going to say that pitching her boat while the wood is wet wouldn't work, because the sap wouldn't soak into the boards. The whole thing would peel off in one piece.

But I guess that doesn't matter, does it?

Hap
Hap #19 · July 1st · · · Tumble ·

This doesn't seem safe.

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Hap #20 · July 1st · · · Alive ·

Augh! This is it? I didn't think I was catching up that quickly.

Well... I guess I'm waiting, too.

You're almost there, Glimmer! Maybe. Hopefully :x

Hap

The thing was peeling. Her wonderful, hard-spread tree sap was all coming off, a flimsy, brittle sheet hanging from the tightly-spaced boards like a scab waiting to be picked.

I hate being right, sometimes...

Hap

Maybe it's because I'm a paranoid mf'er, but I'd be worried I'd fall asleep in that boat and drift out into the ocean.

I'm interested to see whose company she's landed in, where unicorns are so rare.

Hap
Hap #24 · July 4th · · · Held ·

Sweet chapter.

But never anywhere nearĀ thatĀ long.

3 million words later...

Blanket too OP, pls nerf. :trollestia:

no trace of a cutie mark whatsoever

Hap
Hap #29 · July 5th · · · Mares ·

Interesting.

"Given that you're a unicorn, I'd have expected you'd be more surprised that these two have them."

:ajbemused:

8280737 Is there some unfortunate implication here I'm missing?

Just suspicious of everything, waiting for it to all turn out to be terrible.

Hap
Hap #33 · July 7th · · · Home ·

This was an adorable chapter, and this

While it was even darker than the ground floor, the darkness had a completely different feel: rather than being fast asleep or resentfully woken, it was drowsily awake, waiting for someone to arrive before it could turn in for the night.

is a beautiful piece of prose.

Hap

The adorableness continues.

Just as Starlight finished purging her worry and started setting her train of thought on a more interesting track, though, Maple snuffled and sat up. "All right," she said, blinking. "That'll do it. I'm awake now."

Welp, I hate Maple. :trixieshiftleft: My 'two more minutes' inevitably turns into three more hours. :raritydespair: Friggin' morning people.

You paint a very interesting picture.

Hap

Interestinger and interestinger...

all the other ponies she saw were earth ponies, and they were all mares

:trixieshiftright:

Hap
Hap #39 · July 12th · · · Splash ·

You have a talent for writing "adorable."

8252518
It probably also means all the characters and locations in the story change name three times when they are introduced an he never goes back to fix any mistakes.

mysteeeerious :trixieshiftright:

Hap
Hap #42 · July 14th · · · Him ·

Ouch.

Hap

The plot thickens.

I'm making an exception this one time and actually reading something off my Read Later shelf.

So far, I think I made the right call.

I'm not sure I've ever read the concept of overheating horns. I like it.

There are three ponies from a small town who know each other, yet they don't remember where the others live? This sounds weird to me.

Does she still have Sosa's journal, or was that lost in the fall?

Hap

her freshly-dried cur still spiky in places

I don't remember her having a pet dog, or it getting wet?

:P

I didn't quite understand it the first time the rolling eyes were mentioned. But slowly the amount of eye-rolling in this town gets ridiculous. What is this all about?

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