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Does this mean it's going to be really long, and that you won't respond to any comments?
8252518 Really long? Maybe. I have no idea how long I'll be able to keep this up. But never anywhere near that long. And I have no intention of ignoring comments.
Mostly, it means it's going to be a daily updating adventure fic.
A pleasant chapter. Kind of scary, seeing as she's still just a filly.
Also... weeks in a cave? Even for a unicorn with the ability to create light, that sounds exhausting. And carrying weeks worth of bread and cheese in a saddlebag seems like an awful lot of weight for a kid. And that's not even counting how lucky she is that she didn't get lost or fall in a pit or something.
Why doesn't she just levitate herself? That's one of the most useful things we've seen any unicorn do in this series.
8259636 She doesn't know how to do that yet. But she'll definitely figure it out some day.
Huh. So... she's removed her own cutie mark? Hasn't gotten one yet, and drew one onto her fur?
Though, if she'd removed it already, that could explain why she's having trouble with magic (you know... beyond just exhaustion).
I thought for sure she'd poisoned herself. Damn, girl. You gotta be more careful.
Okay, I see. She drew on the equals sign, and is trying to avoid getting her cutie mark.
This is a great story, but just one comment about it- breathe vs breath
She will go far with her determination
I love this, Have her meet the Hollow Knight
Not letting anything deter her I like it
Beautiful
More, please, we love it!!
lake
Interesting developments.
8266342 Well, luckily, it's a daily, so more should never be that far off!
warmed
I wonder how many lakes in the world sink into caves.
🎵 don't go chasin' waterfalls...
Well... I was going to say that pitching her boat while the wood is wet wouldn't work, because the sap wouldn't soak into the boards. The whole thing would peel off in one piece.
But I guess that doesn't matter, does it?
This doesn't seem safe.
Augh! This is it? I didn't think I was catching up that quickly.
Well... I guess I'm waiting, too.
You're almost there, Glimmer! Maybe. Hopefully :x
I hate being right, sometimes...
Maybe it's because I'm a paranoid mf'er, but I'd be worried I'd fall asleep in that boat and drift out into the ocean.
I'm interested to see whose company she's landed in, where unicorns are so rare.
Sweet chapter.
3 million words later...
8266937

Blanket too OP, pls nerf.
Interesting.
8280737 Is there some unfortunate implication here I'm missing?
Just suspicious of everything, waiting for it to all turn out to be terrible.
This was an adorable chapter, and this
is a beautiful piece of prose.
The adorableness continues.
Welp, I hate Maple.
My 'two more minutes' inevitably turns into three more hours.
Friggin' morning people.
You paint a very interesting picture.
Interestinger and interestinger...
You have a talent for writing "adorable."
8252518
It probably also means all the characters and locations in the story change name three times when they are introduced an he never goes back to fix any mistakes.
mysteeeerious
Ouch.
The plot thickens.
I'm making an exception this one time and actually reading something off my Read Later shelf.
So far, I think I made the right call.
I'm not sure I've ever read the concept of overheating horns. I like it.
There are three ponies from a small town who know each other, yet they don't remember where the others live? This sounds weird to me.
Does she still have Sosa's journal, or was that lost in the fall?
8304588 Still has it.
I don't remember her having a pet dog, or it getting wet?
:P
I didn't quite understand it the first time the rolling eyes were mentioned. But slowly the amount of eye-rolling in this town gets ridiculous. What is this all about?