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FanficReader920
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Title: A Lesson From the Passed
Tags: [Sad]
Views: 260
Pitch: This character study of Cheerliee is simply an emotional thrill ride. I can't really put it into words, but I can say that it's the best portrayal of Cheerilee I've read, and I think it really transcends MLP in that it's a great story that conveys the importance of teachers in our lives.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/404848/a-lesson-from-the-passed

FanficReader920
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Title: Twilight Sparkle Was Shot
Tags: [Adventure]
Views: 468
Pitch: Without spoiling anything, I LOVE how they handled the character that shot Sci-Twi. Their interactions with Sunset were amazing and their history with her is amazing to read. I also love the way she was handled at the end of the story. That's all I can say without spoiling it.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/414182/twilight-sparkle-was-shot

FanficReader920
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Title: Brain Stew
Tags: [Comedy] [Slice of Life]
Views: 893
Pitch: FamousLastWords is an amazing author, and this is one of his more underrated works. It's extremely funny and manages to keep Starlight, Spike, and Trixie in character the whole time. I personally love how he writes the three of these characters in all of his stories, and this one is no exception. I'm just gobsmacked it hasn't gotten more attention.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/410546/brain-stew

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How does the age of a story factor into recommendation? The older the story, the more likely it'll get spotlighted? Or do younger stories have a more likely chance of getting in? It's something confusing I want to clear up.

Title: Secret Keepers
Tags: [MLP: FiM][Profanity][Slice of Life][Fluttershy][Twilight][Pinkie][Rarity][Scootaloo]
Views: 292
Pitch: Fluttershy often listens to the secrets of friends and others around her. Most days, she doesn't mind at all. But secrets carry their own hidden weight.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/412214/secret-keepers

Professor Plum
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We try to wait a few months minimum before featuring a story, so's to let it gain views by itself and judge if it deserves more.

Beyond that, age is mostly irrelevant. We tend to be a bit more lenient with regards to the viewcount for older stories, but nothing major. We certainly don't give them preferential treatment over younger fics.

Matthewl419
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A comprehensive list of all the stories in this thread (that appear to be) still eligible...

Even if some are only just barely...


Statues (1426)
To Her Surprise (1407)
Falling Leaves (1267)
The Little Pegasus That Could (1003)
The One That Wrote (1010)
Growing Carrots (1349)
The Crusaders; Ice Princess (879)
Millennial Heartstrings (1360)
Dear Pinkamena Diane Pie (1299)
Gulliver's Last Travel (1387)
Counting the Days (1378)
My Little Marvel: Friendship is Mutants (1431)
What the Sun Can't See (729)
A Squire's Tail - Lunar Guards (669)
Pranking the Castle (1447)
Sham Now (921)
What Dreams Are (973)
Coils in a Clock (669)
Cupcake's Day Out (1193)
The Wonderbolts Cup (736)
Snapple Pie (1351)
Crusaders, Go! (860)
Mind of a Princess (508)
It's Hurtful Like That (875)
Rarity's Dream: And then the door opened... (1128)
Cauldron Club (1185)
When Music is Silenced (602)
My Little Investigations: The Silent Dirge (1252)
Spike's Amazing Race (735)
As the Rain Pours Down My Face (369)
Better Left Buried (933)
Howling Shadows (610)
The Equestria Games: Flight of the Pegasi (1444)
Journey to Avalon (726)
Do Ponies Dream of Pink Sheep? (1135)
Circuitous Scholarship (997)
Tick (424)
Second Chances (1079)
The Wonderful Life of Berry Punch (643)
Cerulean (659)
Where Would You Hide? (1191)
Melody (623)
Lyra Writes a Fanfiction (636)
What The Heart Wants (632)
Render Unto Them Wubs (503)
My Last Letter (1254)
Bratan (562)
The Pony Who Planted Trees (570)
Beasts and Beings - Stories of Equestria's Inhabitants (920)
Lunar Eclipse: The Rock Opera (1133)
Escargot (964)
Probably the First Time That Had Happened (344)
Nothing Could Possibly Go Wrong! (1048)
Our Weary Daughter, Rest (1037)
And We Are Not Yet Saved (934)
Scootluna (642)
Stormy Monday (412)
Through the Equestrian Gate (216)
"I Brought Cupcakes!" (1211)
Broken (1152)
Mother's Night (1310)
Luna's First Winter Back Home (814)
MLP: FIM: The Vengeance of Kul'as (936)
Ghost of a Rose (1295)
The Equine Scrolls: SkyFiM (762)
The Unicorn Wars: Equestria (347)
Tea Party With a Draconequus (961)
To Drown a Butterfly (738)
Night Rose (1456)
The Price of Citizenship (811)
Retcolt (1121)
Bratan (562)
Looking Up (713)
Rain (496)
Fly (870)
Save the Records (973)
Grey (448)
A Tale Told (876)
Corbie (469)
Trixie vs. Roadside Assistance (1215)
Hyperion (886)
Mid October (917)
Those Who Sport With Giants (492)
One Thousand Years (601)
Machina (1253)
Fly Before You Run (1049)
Librarian Twilight Sparkle, Tutor of the CMC (1194)
Blackacre (845)
An Ordinary Day (659)
Twilight is Annoyed (1298)
I Love Friday Nights (481)
The Sun Never Sets (1150)
Rarity, POW (233)
A Wilting Flower (1414)
Rapunzbelle (549)
Daring Doodle Donkey (1469)
A Note From Rarity (577)
The Sun Sets on Canterlot (428)
Flurry Heart's Eye Exam (1401)
The Pieces Lie Where They Fell (807)
And How Would It Be With Out Souls? (426)
There's Something Screwy Goin' On Around Here (685)
The Season of Grace (958)
Dearest Beloved (267)
Practical Nightmares Only (600)
Resplendence Revoked (1468)
The Marching Madness (819)
Beautiful Lives (964)
Come With Me, Luna (607)
A Good Sun Day (280)
Sierra (269)
I'm Not Her (391)
The Stink Bug (384)
Trixie's Perfect Show (391)
Happiness is What You Make of It (354)
The Radio (340)
A Familiar Feeling (831)
White and Purple (620)
Without Another Word (1082)
The Unicorn and the Crow (243)
Clouded Minds (1000)
Before Closing (397)
The World Turned Upside Down (615)
Zero Point One (655)
The Place I Feel Safest (614)
A Crow Looked at Me (540)
Guiding the Counselor (682)
Never Again (700)
We'll Never Be Far Apart (962)
The Fault In My Cutie Mark (836)
Where We Belong (584)
A King's Grand Entrance (377)
Twilight Sparkle Was Shot (534)
Brain Stew (924)
Secret Keepers (303)

Edit: Also, not listed, a 1.1 million word fic. Seriously, something that long just wont happen...


This took waaaaayy too long to write up :\

FanficReader920
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Well, at least you guys have a steady stream of recommendations to use. Better than none.

Matthewl419
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This is true. Though, I'm always down for more

Title: On Getting to the Bottom of this "Equestrian" Business
Tags: [Equestria Girls][Drama][OC][Principal Celestia][Vice Principal Luna]
Views: 387
Pitch: A strangely interesting alternate universe Earth where history has been influenced by humans touched by Equestrian magic. The world of Equestria Girls is a microcosm in the larger, normal world. A world famous physicist is drawn to this town and its secrets amid a nuclear crisis in the Cold War. Did I mention the off the wall theoretical physics?! Starts slow, but really gets going once it does.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/394898/on-getting-to-the-bottom-of-this-equestrian-business

ELily's Letter
On a cold, empty evening in Canterlot Castle, two long-estranged friends meet up to try and rekindle their friendship, but they may not have the same goal in mind.
Miller Minus · 6.4k words  ·  57  1 · 895 views

I have trouble coming up with my own pitch, so I'll just refer to the review by PresentPerfect, who rated it "Highly Recommended". I can only add that aside of being a good story it was also rather though-provoking for me. At 181 views in almost a year, this is criminally underrated.

Title: Diary of My Better Self
Tags: [Comedy][Random]
Views: 102
Pitch: First story by a talented new author. Poking fun at the Displaced formula without being mean about it. One of very few lighthearted stories about Vignette Valencia. Innovative narrative style. Unique, unpredictable choice of cast. Made me laugh a lot!
Link

FanficReader920
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Title: And the Serpent Said Unto The Princess
Tags: [Romance] [Dark]
Views: 392
Pitch: First of all, the fact this story is told via a heroic legend, rather than "seeing" it play out on its own, is a great way to worldbuild, without having any worldbuilding (if that makes sense). This story trusts its readers to read between the lines is the story and discern what really happened, to discern Discord's motivations, Celestia's reactions, essentially, what really happened. I don't want to spoil it here, as part of why I like this story is figuring it out on your own, but it's an amazing story told in an ingenious way.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/419468/and-the-serpent-said-unto-the-princess

FanficReader920
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Title: Up Where the Air is Clear
Tags: [Slice of Life]
Views: 596
Pitch: This story just sums up Rainbow Dash's character perfectly. I won't dare spoil it, but I just think the mere act of her flying as high as she can is a microcosm of who she is as a character and Rambling Writer demonstrates this perfectly.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/421432/up-where-the-air-is-clear

Title: Equestria 485,000
Tags: MLP: FiM, Gore, Dark, Adventure, Sci-Fi, Main 6
Views: 370
Pitch: Amount of world building is one of the best, also, not-so-few ideas are orginal, or at least I didn't met them before. And it's big. Writing makes you fall into territory of "one more chapter", altough it could use a little editor work for small problems.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/385770/equestria-485000

Why I think it's worth? Well, it was one time, don't know how to check it, in featured box, tittle was interesting (I like Sci-Fi), started reading, stopped when ended and asked "what? Already? I want more!". For me it is the best recomendation. ;)
Don't want to spoiler to much, but... I'm still amazed by amout of world building. It also adressess some problems like immortality of alicorns, clones and evolution, and "world draining" and what will hapen when world end up... empty.
One of my favourite stories, if not THE favourite.
(And fic that made me like Starlight Glimmer...)

Side question: how to know if somepony from your crew read it and to know his thoughts, other than comment on the story itself? Just corious. :)

Title: Dash's Secret
Tags: [sad]
Views: 22,688
Pitch: This story is really good as it builds up a past for Dash and Fluttershy that works really well into the regular show and is overall just fantastic.
Link: [https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1876/dashs-secret]

So yah, I am mostly suggesting this is not because it hasn't been seen much, but rather the author has been gone for a couple of years now. The story itself hasn't been updated for almost 6. I suggest it here because I fear it might get lost, despite how amazing a story it really is. Thank you for your considerations.

Title: What We Do For Love
Tags: [Romance][Drama]
Views: 527

This is probably the SunDagio story I've been most pleased with in the past several months. Some hiccups in the prose aside, I think it did a really good job of selling the relationship between a heroine and a villain in a way that didn't compromise the nature of the latter, and it presented a great way for Adagio to deal with the loss of her singing voice. It convinced me right away that the two were good matches for each other, which made for a gripping read when the drama started to escalate. Not perfect, but a lovely first foray into pony fiction, and one which I'd love to see getting more recognition.

Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/419330/what-we-do-for-love

Title: Metallicolt by Dark Avenger
Tags: [Adventure] [Dark] [Profanity]* [Narcotics]*
Views: 904
Pitch: I really loved this story, although it is cancelled and likely not coming back, I hope that’s OK, it’s super good for what it is. It inspired me to write my own story, and I love the idea of a heavy metal band being converted into pony.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/50401/metallicolt
Other:*Means warning tag not included, but I thought it was important anyways.

FanficReader920
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Title: Last Nightmare Night
Tags: [Drama] [SLice of Life]
Views: 298
Pitch: It's such a relatable story. The internal debate Twilight goes through is extremely similar to others people go through as they get older. Don't want to spoil too much else.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/415371/last-nightmare-night

*Reads rules*
Oh... *Looks over other authors and sees they have around and over 10k views....*
Ok, then *mouses over the "leave group" and clicks

Professor Plum
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This is a group for promoting lesser viewed stories :twilightsmile:

FanficReader920
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Title: Critical and Apathetic
Tags: [Drama] [Sad] [SLice of Life]
Views: 516
Pitch: This story explores a scenario that we never really thought of as a fan. Ponies that get their cutie marks to find their purpose in life. We have postulated before about if a pony's mark relates to something they don't want to do, but what if a pony gets a cutie mark and then when they show off their talent, people don't like it? It's a really intriguing story that has genuine emotion from Sweetie Belle and a scenario we don't normally see.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/424476/critical-and-apathetic

FanficReader920
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Title: First Cut
Tags: [Drama] [Sad] [Slice of Life]
Views: 322
Pitch: True Edge portrays Marble excellently here. He/She manages to capture her heartbreak perfectly, and Sugar Belle does an amazing job. Just a great story about two characters who don't get written about too often.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/423881/first-cut

Title: Strider
Tags: Romance, Comedy, Slice of Life
Views: 750
Pitch: This story is about a journey, an adventure that most young adults and teens dream of; being able to go out and explore the world.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/319861/strider

Title: A rewritten Past
Tags: [drama], [adventure], [comedy]
Views: 69
Pitch: A fun fick that takes place in an alternate version of the mlp universe.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/417917/a-rewritten-past

Title: Ten More Yards
Tags: Slice of Life, Drama
Views: 102
Pitch: A very interesting slice-of-life gridiron story, which is uncommon on this site, and 5aszs manages to write intriguing characters in a setting not too unfamiliar from the MLP universe. I especially enjoy reading about the pony versions of NFL players, and the author writes very interesting football matches.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/420334/ten-more-yards

FanficReader920
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Title: I Have No Mouth and I Must Scream
Tags: [Horror]
Views: 559
Pitch: Each dream does an amazing job of tackling the mane SIx's fears, which I won't spoil. In addition, the writing is done really well to where it carries it's emotional beats extremely well. I also particularly loved the ending and what the author did with Nightmare Moon, as I found it extremely clever and I won't spoil it here.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/431251/i-have-no-mouth-and-i-must-scream

Title: Memoirs of my War
Tags: [Comedy][Dark][Slice of Life]
Views: 415
Pitch: published a few months back as a Veteran's Day tribute at the 100th anniversary of the end of WW1, this anthology imagines how many different characters spent the war of Equestria against the Equallists. I found the different characters' vignettes to be both heart-wrenching and very well voiced for each character. In particular, Fluttershy and Luna struck me as profoundly in-character and on-key. This fic has stuck with me for months.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/422174/memoirs-of-my-war

Title: The Book of Ass
Tags: [Horror] [Random]
Views: 462
Pitch: A narrative only comparable to the likes of Ulysses. The Book of Ass is a story. What kind of story? That is left up to interpretation. What we can all agree upon, however, that it is, in fact, without a doubt, a story. It's a story. Trust, just read it -- there's a story. Some kind of story. Whatever kind of story it is. I don't know. It scares me a little. Just trust me when I say there's a story.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/413595/the-book-of-ass

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Title: Vinyl Dawn
Tags: [Sci-Fi] [Slice of Life]
Views: 322
Pitch: I personally like the story and the way they presented it, also a better read if you have played the game it's based on(Not required).
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/424393/vinyl-dawn

Title: Scared in a Normal Cave
Tags: [Dark][Horror]
Views: 837 (Total? Sorry if so)
Pitch: The story is about CMC's getting trapped in a cave with "Something". It's ambiance that got me, perhaps. While reading it, i really felt myself trapped somewhere in the darkness of a cave. Story gives you perspective of a character. Combined with a good amount of lonesome parts this creates previously stated effect of immersion. tldr:This shit's good.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/390519/scared-in-a-normal-cave

Its like/dislike count is only 22/0 which is a good ratio but is not that big of an amount, i don't know why people don't vote, its kind of sad even, to be fair. Also, reading that it was loosely inspired by "Ted's Caving Page" got me a little scared of possible plagiarism, but reading both i can say that this fic merely develops the core idea of "Ted's Caving Page", while having a completely new story.

Title: Knights of Bayard
Tags: [Dark][Drama][Tragedy]
Views: 378
Pitch: A historical military drama written in a very distinctive, minimalist style. The story actually manages to make knowing little about the characters and throwing out quick little references to a larger unseen context into positives and is gritty without being grimdark.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/373396/knights-of-bayard

The story's been up for the better part of two years now and has in that time managed to amass a whole 10 likes, 1 dislike, and 5 comments, which is a damned shame.

Title: Scarlet
Tags: [Sex] [Gore] [Violence] [Death] [Profanity] [Dark] [Adventure] [Sad] [AU] [OC] [Other] [Changelings]
Views: 250
Pitch: In the far future, after the reigning alicorns of Old Equestria have died off and war and infighting ravaged the land, a veteran with some skeletons in her own closet comes across a filly bunking in her cellar during a stormy night. Trying to escape from a government assassin bent on acquiring something very magical within her grasp, the filly looks to Scarlet for protection and ends up getting more than just a simple guardian.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/440705/scarlet

I edit for this story, and I believe that it deserves far more recognition than it's had so far. It's got a ways to go in terms of complete-ness, but it's already had some climactic moments that I believe will highlight what you're getting into.

Title: A Nightmare In Eidolon
Tags: [Adventure][Dark][Mystery]
Views: 260
Pitch: Ever wondered what pony-Wonderland looks like? Follow the story of Nyx the Alicorn, still trying to understand herself and how she fits in with her friends when suddenly she is faced by a new threat. Finding herself pitted into the weird, unnatural world of Eidolon, Nyx must make new friends and discover her true self in order to save the day and get home to Twilight. However, danger lurks around every corner...
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/231394/a-nightmare-in-eidolon.

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Title: Falling Rainbows
Tags: Romance, Slice of Life, Second person
Views: 358
Pitch: The author (Naliah) is always promoting others, instead of her own work. It’s honestly a surprise it doesn’t have more views. She’s a great author so, please?
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/445833/falling-rainbows

Wanderer D
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TThis is why you should never let ponies play Terraforming Mars
Rainbow Dash and some of her friends sit down to play Terraforming Mars. Things get a little out of control.
Petrichord · 43k words  ·  43  5 · 1k views

Definitely worthy of keeping an eye on it. Needs more exposure, this thing is very well thought out.

Title: Titanfall 2: Shattered Skies

Tags: adventure, Thriller, sci-fi

Views: 57

Pitch: This story has actually been rewritten three times and I feel like I didn’t get the attention it deserves because of that. So I would request this story because it may not last long.

Link:Here

Title: A leg up

Tags: comedy, random, slice of life

Views:262

Pitch: cute. That’s all I’m gonna say.

Link:Here

Title: You Don’t Have To Be Shy With Me

Tags: sex, romance

Views: 706

Pitch: Felt that this story needs some ‘love’

Link:Here

Title: The Best possible thing!

Tags: sex, romance, drama, slice of life, alt.universe

Views: 689

Pitch: this is my personal favourite not just because of the setting but also because despite what the author is going through they are still updating chapters and pushing themselves to their limits and I think that determination deserves to be rewarded.

Link:Here

Title: The Struggles of Running a Book Store
Tags: [mystery] [slice of life]
Views: 398
Pitch**: good story, interesting, a lovecraftian twist.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/426988/the-struggles-of-running-a-book-store

I guess that i wll suggest growth by gears since it only has around 500 veiws

Title: Under The Influence

Tags: [Dark] [Horror] [Narcotics] [Self Harm] [OC]

Views: 65

Pitch: This author makes Nightmare Moon scary again. Vesperal Breeze is a compelling and conflicted villain protagonist who hears whispers of the Old Gods when she sleeps. The reader follows Vesperal’s diabolical research into the Equestrian occult as she tries to understand her “gifts” and possibly harness them to slay her own demons.

Influence’s prose is professional and dense, and the slow reveal of Vesperal’s backstory gives the reader something solid to latch onto amidst the wider, more abyssal mythos that is being developed in tandem. Recurring motifs include flying vs swimming, white candles vs red wine, and lucid dreaming vs psychotic consciousness.

This fic is actually the second installment in Vesperal’s story, but it’s the one I’m recommending because it’s more action-oriented than the first. This is especially true in the climax when Vesperal must battle her first supernatural foe.

TUnder the Influence
Vesperal Breeze dreams darker.
Jaded Hearts · 9k words  ·  21  2 · 960 views
FanficReader920
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Title: A Fading Tradition
Tags: [Sad] [Slice of Life]
Views: 393
Pitch: This takes place before Pharnyx's introduction, but does a great job at keeping him sympathetic, but true to his character. Introspective stories like this are always an interesting read and this one was a great one about a character we don't really see that much of.
Link: A Fading Tradition

FanficReader920
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Title: Zealots of Canterlot
Tags: [Romance] [Slice of Life] [Tragedy]
Views: 150
Pitch: I have to imagine the author has gone through something like this himself because each and every word in this story is laced with an intensity that I haven't seen in a long time. The second chapter is really where this story shines, as Sunset gets a moment alone with Sci-Twi's corpse, and that chapter might be one of the most emotionally intense ones I've read in a while. It realistically portrays someone mourning over another's suicide extremely well. I can't recommend this one enough.
Link: Zealots of Canterlot

Title: Old Mare Luna
Tags: [Dark] [Adventure] [Drama]
Views: 871
Pitch: Old Man Logan but with ponies.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/436295/old-mare-luna

For those who love comics and bad futures, this is the story for you! And since this bad future is set after season 9 and even has flashbacks to the season 9 premiere, I'd say it's a bit relevant.

Title: Threshold
Tags: [Drama][Dark][Mystery]
Views: 342
Pitch: This is an interesting story about time travel, alternate worlds, and a sense that things that you think the character should remember they don't. It's a little like Steins;Gate with the caveat that the main character has no clue about what is going on.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/409387/threshold

Title: Moon Rise
Tags: [Sex] [Gore] [Violence] [Death] [Romance] [Horror] [Slice of Life] [Human] [Celestia] [Luna] [OC]
Views: 368
Pitch: It's Russian-to-English translation in progress, there are not so many of them; the story, while being "[Gore] [Violence] [Death]" and so on, really is highly romantic tale about two souls, who found themselves out of their element - cheetah, who had to live human's life in cold city made of concrete and glass, and pony princess, thrown to another world, without her magic, raped, tortured, almost broken - and miraculously saved by that strange creature. The story is really good in Russian, maybe it will found it's readers here?
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/430915/moon-rise

Title: The Best and The Worst
Tags: [Dark] [Drama] [Mystery] [Crossover] [Alt. Universe] [Twilight] [Celestia]
Views: 609
Pitch: In this fic, Celestia takes Twilight on a tour of Cheyrnobyl, and uses it as a lesson in how far humans will sometimes go. Celestia is in full mentor mode here and she really shines. The world building is great, the characters are in character, the grammar is great.

Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/445579/the-best-and-the-worst

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