Writer, Editor, and Shipper of Good Ships. Your typical cotton candy haired lesbian. Yes, I have pronouns. No, you can't have them.
I have been seeing him for a while. I don't know what to think of him. Nopony else sees him that I know of, and he doesn't really do anything. He just watches with those big, black, creepy bird eyes.
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Just something random I made up in ten, maybe fifteen minutes. A free-verse poem following an OOC, lovable pony--enjoy!
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Because why not? I have a few other stories to keep focus on, but this wouldn't shut the hell up in my head. Sure didn't take me long to finish, either. I was always a fan of poetry and have done a bit in my time. Except when we have to do a sort of rhythmic poetry; I can't rhyme to save my life. Now to bring ponies into it!
Let me know what you think, criticism, praise, anything! I'm all for it.
A free-verse poem... You don't see many of those nowadays. As for the poem itself...
I very much enjoyed it, even with it ending as it did. Well done.
1948765 Glad you enjoyed it, albeit its sad ending. How I write things is that I usually try to make them as realistic as possible; as in, rarely do I ever do happy endings on any kind. So, sorry Pinkie.
I said I was sorry!
So Death in the form of a crow comes the Element of Laughter? And with no scythe? Aw
dark but very enjoyable 
1949194 Crows are a familiar symbol of death--I know especially because we read about it just recently in English class. Which is probably why this came to me.
1950587 agents of Death itself they are indeed, very well written
1950679 Thanks.
This is...
um...
I want to say cute, but that doesn't seem right...
It's really good though, and I love it
1961782 While I wouldn't exactly describe this as 'cute' either (I don't quite think of that word when a sad tag comes along, but that can be often debatable; you never know), I seem to have a tendency to get comments like that in most of my other stories. Hmm. Either way, thank you.
i hate this story! its too sad
1990933 *hands you a tissue*
1991157 *grabs tissue* sniffle >A< oh pinkie! NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
And then there were five....
That was really good.
SERIOUSLY good.
This was interesting. Bittersweet. It's short, but there's a surprising amount of depth and detail for so few words. I think I may have even noticed The Five Stages in here, if only briefly. Might give this a few rereads later.
5273877 Gosh, thanks!