Babs has had a horrible day and runs away from home after an incident with some bullies.
Written in about two hours, this is a first person one-shot inspired by the song Everybody Hurts by R.E.M.
Read, Comment, Enjoy
-MasterFrasca99
Occasionally, I write things. I have to admit I'm pretty bad at it. Occasionally, I edit things. Same story there really.
Babs has had a horrible day and runs away from home after an incident with some bullies.
Written in about two hours, this is a first person one-shot inspired by the song Everybody Hurts by R.E.M.
Read, Comment, Enjoy
-MasterFrasca99
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... dammit... as much as i wanted to read more, there isnt... this feels like the start to some epic tale... please do continue this story... im begging you. THIS NEEDS A FOLLOW UP.
There NEEDS to be more,this is just too good to stop now
It's canon that Babs Seed has a sister. At the end of "One Bad Apple," she promises Applejack she'll talk to her big sister about the bullying.
Other than that...there were a few mistakes, but this wasn't bad. I felt it definitely needed a lot more than a few thousand words, and doesn't seem to resolve. You still get a thumbs-up from me.