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MasterFrasca


Occasionally, I write things. I have to admit I'm pretty bad at it. Occasionally, I edit things. Same story there really.

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Babs has had a horrible day and runs away from home after an incident with some bullies.

Written in about two hours, this is a first person one-shot inspired by the song Everybody Hurts by R.E.M.

Read, Comment, Enjoy
-MasterFrasca99

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

... dammit... as much as i wanted to read more, there isnt... this feels like the start to some epic tale... please do continue this story... im begging you. THIS NEEDS A FOLLOW UP.

There NEEDS to be more,this is just too good to stop now :fluttercry:

I didn’t want to live with a drunken pegasus father who was never proud of me and a Unicorn mother who was more worried about going to parties than spend time with her only daughter.

It's canon that Babs Seed has a sister. At the end of "One Bad Apple," she promises Applejack she'll talk to her big sister about the bullying.

Other than that...there were a few mistakes, but this wasn't bad. I felt it definitely needed a lot more than a few thousand words, and doesn't seem to resolve. You still get a thumbs-up from me. :pinkiesmile:

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