Octavia never thought love as a fickle creature, but then again, she also thought her life would be lived out in Ponyville, with a special somepony by her side. Instead she ended up moving to Manehattan, alone with growing resentment to the past.
Until one afternoon, Octavia meets a young mare named Coco Pommel, and a deal is struck to give it one more go and see if something is left.
And because she isn't her.
Pre-read by Arcticbrony
Proof-read by Moldyshishkabob
This sounds very interesting.
Hmm, this looks very promising. I do love stories about Coco.
I like it. Can’t wait for more.
I think this is outstanding!
I love Lyra. She's that one friend you have.
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A lot of the time; I am that friend
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Thanks, hearing that makes me feel better about the story.
Lovely ship story, wish there was more!
Not complaining, a lovely short story, but I am a little confused about the sex tag, I mean the only thing would be Lyra's rather peculiar sense of humor, but when I see that tag, I tend to think that there is going to well actually be content of that nature rather than merely raunchy jokes.