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Marcibel


"If you want to get better at anything, you have to be able to enjoy being bad at it."

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Octavia never thought love as a fickle creature, but then again, she also thought her life would be lived out in Ponyville, with a special somepony by her side. Instead she ended up moving to Manehattan, alone with growing resentment to the past.

Until one afternoon, Octavia meets a young mare named Coco Pommel, and a deal is struck to give it one more go and see if something is left.

And because she isn't her.

Pre-read by Arcticbrony

Proof-read by Moldyshishkabob

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 10 )

This sounds very interesting.

Hmm, this looks very promising. I do love stories about Coco.

I like it. Can’t wait for more.

I think this is outstanding!

I love Lyra. She's that one friend you have.

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A lot of the time; I am that friend:derpytongue2:

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Thanks, hearing that makes me feel better about the story. :raritystarry:

Lovely ship story, wish there was more! :twilightsmile:

I love that opening.
Wonder if CoCo shouldn’t have used her mouth with the measuring tape. Just to be more precise.

Not complaining, a lovely short story, but I am a little confused about the sex tag, I mean the only thing would be Lyra's rather peculiar sense of humor, but when I see that tag, I tend to think that there is going to well actually be content of that nature rather than merely raunchy jokes.

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