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One thousand years ago, two sisters reflect on what they've done, and what they still have to do.
I'm British, so some of the spellings may be different. Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.
Edit: Saw the story in the Popular Stories box, thank you all!
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I really do love this take on the inner thoughts of the two sisters.
Excellent! Added to Sad Luna.
6403037 Thank you!
Wohoo! A monologue. Yay, I thought I am the only one, who makes them. This was awesome. Short, simple, cold. Like facts, snapping at you. A great job.
So cute. It is wonderful, how Celestia's thoughts are so full of love and regret and mercy. It is the opposite of Nightmare's. That is great.
6403756 Thank you, This is the first story that I've completed on here. I'm surprised that the feedback has been so good.
Normally don't make too many comments on stories, but this story was pretty beautiful. Very well done.
6404733 Thank you, That's really kind of you
6404764 something else I noticed is that each chapter is 500 words each, which must have taken some planning and rewriting to achieve that
6405309 it was a personal challenge, something I will probably try again if I write another story. The idea is actually that of Crystal Wishes, who has done the same thing on a story reaching nearly 80 chapters, with every word count ending in 00
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You ain't new, but you're awesome.
I don't think there's anything else to be said.
6408423 Aaw, thanks! I really have been here for a while, haven't I
This is excellent!
6545230 Thanks Anzel! Glad you could take the time to read it.
Just want to notify you on here (instead of pm) that your story is going to be reviewed by me now instead of whoever was reviewing your fic. Sorry for the inconvenience!
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Its fine, thank you for offering to review it :)
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Two sides of the same coin, both of them presented in excellent detail. Well done.
Interesting but very shirt for both letters.
Waw really good story. Ilike your interpretation of Luna's banishnment and how painful it is. The word counts are a nice touch as well.