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Amethyst_Dawn


A good story displays a moral, the best ones attach you to the characters who display them.

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This story is a sequel to The Changed Medic


After her covert operation was compromised: Rarity is sitting alone in her cell, reflecting on the events that lead up to this...

What was she trying to prove?
Does she have the strength to fight on?

Does she even have something to fight for?

Cover art not owned by me, I just put a title over it.

3rd Story in the Wartime Continuum.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 68 )

I'm hooked, give me more! :pinkiecrazy:
Plz don't kill Octavia though. :pinkiesad2:

7428795
Don't worry, more will come! :twilightsmile:

Poor earth pon-ays! :raritycry::twilightangry2:

7428799
I know, right?

I'm thrilled you're enjoying my work. :twilightsmile:

7428801 :pinkiehappy: I hope Rarity pulls through :fluttershyouch:

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7428795
No promises... :trollestia:

Seriously, though, still thinking of a good ending. This could go either way. :raritywink:

Ooh that was suspenseful!!!

7429039
Thanks! I'm glad you like it. :twilightsmile:

I had a feeling hitter sounded like Hitler

7430196
I'm glad people made the connection! :twilightsmile:

Now the story comes into its own. I'm glad that information about why the war has happened has come, and some details as to who's fighting and why.

7431315
Thank you. :twilightsmile:
There is yet more to come!

7431679
Thanks! I'm glad you like my work. :twilightsmile:

Curios, I believe you you meant curious, when they found the skulls in the house, you said the curios filly.

Awesome brilliant, I absolutely love all of this! Keep up the good work, I hope you release a new chapter soon!

7446865
Thanks for pointing that out!

And I'm working on part three: Last Stands as we speak!

[name] tugged on Rarity's sweater, and nodded her head: causing her mane to bob a little. She picked up a stick with her magic, and started writing in the dirt

I think you forgot to replace [name] with Seamist Pyre.

Other than that, not a bad chapter.

This will certainly be interesting...
Also:

Germareny

That's a new Equestrianization of "Germany" that I haven't seen before. The last time I saw that country referenced in a fic, the Equestrian version was named "Germaneigh"... Both work, it just threw me for a loop.

7448213
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :twilightsmile:

Also:

Germareny

You would not believe how long it took me to come up with that. :rainbowlaugh:
Thank you again.

7448225 You're welcome.
And I'm not sure if "enjoying" would be the right word... Not that it's a bad story, just that what it's about is kind of uncomfortable...
Which is probably the point, but it creates this weird paradox in my head...

7448230
If you liked it enough to come back and read the next chapter, I'd say you're enjoying it. I use the term loosely.:twilightsmile:

I also seem to be able to cause paradoxes for you... is that a good thing? :trixieshiftright:
If not, I do apologize. :fluttershysad:

7448250 Fair enough.

And yeah, it kind of is.

Wow, I didn't expect this much! I love it!

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I'm glad you're enjoying it. :twilightsmile:

7466550
Thank you! I hope you enjoy what I have in store.... *Evil Laugh* :raritywink:

I wish I could fav this story twice

Finally! It's amazing! I freaking love it! It was amazing! Just- I- AHH I CANT EXPLAIN ITS AWESOME

Not a bad chapter. I enjoy some instances of mirror images like this.

May God bless you as well!

7586258
Thanks!
But what do you mean by "Mirror Image"?

7586269 By that, I mean comparisons with historical stuff and fan fiction (the fact that Hitter = Hitler and the situation is that of WWII). I could also add the War between the Provinces series by Harry Turtledove, which features a fantasy version of the American Civil War.

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Ah, nice to know! :twilightsmile:
You learn something new every day! :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks! I'm glad you like it. :twilightsmile:

Is all I have To Say. :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

7750025
I'm glad I didn't disappoint. :twilightsmile:

Oh, yes. Rarity survived her "death"...

Heh heh. Nice one.

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What? You didn't think She'd actually shoot herself, with her 'condition' and all, did you? :duck:

Thanks! :twilightsmile:

7750691 I doubted it, but the following events made me wonder... for a while.

Oh. And what happened to Pinkie? :pinkiesad2:

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Mission accomplished, then. :yay:

And I haven't decided yet... :raritywink:

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