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Hairy Konquerer


Dislike: troll fics, trolls(more than anything else in this world)

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Nightmare Night is a few weeks away, and The Mane Six decide to go on a little camping trip to ease their mind from all the stress of these attacks against Equestria. Joined by Princess Celestia and her old friends, Wirewolves from another world. However they're surprised when one of their enemies comes forth to make some amends and join them.

Queen Chrysalis has had nightmares of this green glowing burlap sack holding dice and singing the same song to her for a few moons now.
her mechanical friend has recommended she accompany our heros and Celestia on their hike away from home.
Little do they know of Chrysalis's dream being true and the hilarity and show stopping tunes in this great fic involving some of your favorite characters and everyone's favorite Boogie man.

Rated everyone all though there will be character deaths and none of they will be gorey with blood and stuff

Like with everyone here I own none of these characters except for my surprise villain OC as well as my Wirewolf OC's if you spot or read mentions of a few you've heard of i salute you.

if you don't know what a wirewolf is, here's a picture to jog your memory or help you imagine the appearance. [img]http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100702065004/disneyvillains/images/9/98/WireWolf.png[/img]

Season 1-whenever the show ends, the 2017 Movie (which I saw it was awesome)and the Equestria Girls movies are canon in this but not some of the comic arcs. However some comic arcs (such the Dark Water Arch and #57.) are canon. Reflections, the Revenge of Queen Chrysalis, Nightmarity, every arch featuring the Mane Six fighting some villain up to the Reflections arch and adding the Sombra return arch(Which I never cared for) aren't canon in this, as well as Fiendship is Magic, aren't canon, except for the Siren and Tirek comics.

4/11/17 Update, All chapters being reivised, as well as semi rehaul on description and title.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 19 )

I must say that you put ogies song in here makes you the best love that song # gamblingbogiemanisbest

...Did they just killed Jack?:twilightoops:

No he's still alive and will appear much later

That was one of Oogie's lackey skeletons.

also,

you thought that was jack!?:rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

This... This is a brilliant idea. NIGHTMARE BEFORE HEARTH'SWARMING EVE! AHAHAHAHAHAHA!

I read Nightmare Night fiasco and thought with twilight first fighting Oogie it was to cliche so i used Celestia and no one went in with her so nothing really distracted her.

4775680 Thanks I want to get that cleared up. Also, don't spoil the story for the readers.

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I'm glad to see you went a different way. Cliche or not :pinkiehappy:

Looks fun, let's see what happens :pinkiehappy:

Awesome!

*cough* Okay first things first when I saw this I began to panic because I worried that it was a copy of my story, Nightmare Night Fiasco, and that you could upload faster so i'd be called the copycat :raritydespair: Thankfully it wasn't.

The story seems interesting and I want to see more of Oogie and learn more about the mechanical character a lot more.

My one issue would be that you sometimes capitalize some words when it's not needed. Also you need to space the lyrics out a bit more, if I didn't know the song before hand I wouldn't be able to tell when Chrysalis starts and Oogie starts in the last paragraph.

Apart from these things I enjoyed the story and look forward to seeing what happens next :pinkiehappy:

Oh and have a moustache :moustache:

this right here is the

Mechanical Character

or wirewolf

so no one's checked my author's note and taken the challenge yet?:twilightoops:

you can just comment here and now. i don't really do that private email stuff

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To what exactly? I just rehauled some of it if that’s what you’re asking

I never read this, I don't read here much anymore, but the fact you used Oogie's Revenge as the thumbnail...

Respect. :rainbowdetermined2:

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