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Scarlet Frost has had more than enough death and violence in her life and has spent the last several years living quietly as a librarian and scholar in the New Equestrian city of Swanrun. Sadly, it seems that death and violence are not yet done with her, as she is about to discover.

After a chance encounter, Scarlet is forced to leave her home and flee for her life alongside a mysterious orphan filly named Primrose. Now being hunted across the land she once went to war for, Scarlet will have to use every resource at her disposal just to stay alive. And if she is going to make it through this, she must confront the ghosts of not only her own past, but those of this long-broken world as well.


A special thank you goes out to my editors, Mister Hypothetical and Chromio!

Chapters (6)
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First

So from what we know, the Equestria of old had pretty much been wiped out by the Changelings, leading to some kind of war...

And now a new Equestria has taken its place... One, it seems, we have much to learn....

Tracking beacon activated.

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Indeed, and if you look at the map, you will notice that 'New Equestria' is far to the west of what used to be the Equestria we know from the show.

No, Old Equestria fell into ruin because of a race known as the Changelings.

So in this universe, Changelings are a race of ponies? Interesting...

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Er, no, they're still just changelings.

JMP

Hmm...wonder what Scarlet's connection to the Changelings is. From the teasers, we know they're still around, but it seems the war that Scarlet fought in was against the Griffins?

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From the teasers, we know they're still around, but it seems the war that Scarlet fought in was against the Griffins?

That is correct. This is explored more in future chapters.

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But then why did you call them a race, and not a species?

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I dunno. Why does D&D refer to elves and dwarves as races when they're totally different species? Why does the Elder Scrolls series refer to Khajiit and Argonians as races when they are completely different species?

In the context of high fantasy, which this story is, 'race' and 'species' have a tendency of being synonymous when it comes to civilized creatures.

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Yeah, but that's word corruption. Science Fiction has "sentient", Fantasy has "race". A better question would be; If you know that it's erronous, why did you still use it?

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Because in the context of the genre it's not a problem. Not to me, at any rate.

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Do you regularly try to interpret words in ways that ignore the context around them, or only when you're in the mood to pedantically misunderstand terms that literally everybody else has no trouble with?

JMP

Primrose was a runaway if I remember the previews right. Wonder if she has a specific goal in mind.

I wonder if "the Five" are the alicorns of Old Equestria. The bust of Twilight described her as a goddess, so I think it's fair to guess at a connection with the others.

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I wonder if "the Five" are the alicorns of Old Equestria. The bust of Twilight described her as a goddess, so I think it's fair to guess at a connection with the others.

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No, but I am a stickler for proper, universal word usage. Why do you ask?

Looking forward to seeing where this goes. Feels like Fallout Equestria which makes me curious what happened with the Mane 6 and what about Thorax

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Heh, I have typically pitched it to others as 'It's kinda like Fallout: Equestria, except its High Fantasy / D&D."

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i love fallout and i'm hoping we will get to see a good changeling i like it when there good thou i wish they didn't do the hole every changeling is good i like it when there is only a select few that are against the bad i like it when the odds are against the good yet they prev-ale. (i dont know when to use my punctuation. lol :facehoof:)

Huh, I had a feeling Scarlet used to be a soldier, but I didn't know she had actually participated in the last major war...

And just what is it about Primrose and that lamp that's gotten the higher ups so damn scared they'd send an assassin to murder a filly?!

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And just what is it about Primrose and that lamp that's gotten the higher ups so damn scared they'd send an assassin to murder a filly?!

Well, that is the whole mystery of the story. :raritywink:

JMP
JMP #22 · Saturday · · · Silent ·

Well, whatever Silent and the other Nightblades want with Primrose can't be good. I liked the little modern history lesson from Scarlet's book. How long has it been since she went back to civilian life?

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Out of curiosity, did you read the blog posts that served as previews? They started with one aptly named, "The Veteran".

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How long has it been since she went back to civilian life?

Look no further than this exchange for your answer.

“Yes, you have the right of it, Frost. I am here on business, but it can wait for a time. I haven’t seen you in… how long has it been? Seven years?”

“Eight,” Scarlet clarified with a wince. “It’s eight years as of two weeks ago.”

JMP
JMP #24 · Saturday · · · Silent ·

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That long? From the first chapter I'd assumed Scarlet had only recently became a civilian again since it sounded like this was her first job back. The war was 8 years ago? I guess it'd have to be some time for textbooks to talk about it...

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From the first chapter I'd assumed Scarlet had only recently became a civilian again since it sounded like this was her first job back.

She had taken some time off for reasons as of yet undisclosed.

Well now, just what did little Primrose do? I look forward to finding out.

Oh ho, she prefers dual blades? Good choice of weaponry on her part, makes her fighting style more versatile.

But just what is it about that lamp that's so important? There has to be some sort of piece to this puzzle....

JMP
JMP #28 · Saturday · · · Treason ·

I wonder if these Nightblades were actually that. I remember from the previews that there was at least one Changeling around and hunting Primrose. The lamp is very curious, I must say.

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there was at least one Changeling around and hunting Primrose

Wot. I don't remember writing anything like that, and if I did, then that was a mistake as that is not a thing.

JMP
JMP #30 · Saturday · · · Treason ·

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...nevermind then. I was remembering things wrong, clearly.

I really enjoy this, reminds of an idea I hade about A criminal who found an orphaned foal and decided to raise him so he could try to atone for his crime. By helping preserve a life. After he took one away.

I don't have much to say other than compliments, so, Yeah. I like the world you're setting up here. can't wait to learn more about it, and see what happens with Scarlet, and Primrose.

So now we know that the lamp has something to do with Old Equestria...

Question is, what?

So many questions about that lamp. Eh, as long as Will Smith doesn't pop out of the thing and start singing…

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as long as Will Smith doesn't pop out of the thing and start singing…

That will not happen, I assure you.

JMP

So that lamp is clearly very old. Is there a rough time frame between Old and New Equestria? Wonder what purpose that lamp could have served. I thought Primrose might have been fibbing a little bit about it being a family heirloom (I thought maybe she stole it or something), but maybe not. I don't think she'd have a reason to lie when Scarlet destroyed her life saving her.

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