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Tick

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The ones born with a ticking in their head are fated to be above anypony else. It comes with a price, though. One must learn their fate before the time runs out.

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Crystal Secret

Crystal Secret #1 · Jan 3rd, 2013 · · ·

A simple little story, it's a nice little escape. Unlike most one-shots this one is truly one of a kind. It's an original idea and I enjoyed reading.

The Guy on Your Right

The Guy on Your Right #2 · Jan 3rd, 2013 · · ·

Interesting story but a bit too fast. Take your time on explaining some details to make it more clear for the readers but still, great story. Keep on writing.

dormagio

dormagio #3 · Jan 3rd, 2013 · · ·

Coooooooooool.

Seether00

Seether00 #4 · Jan 3rd, 2013 · · ·

Sooo... biological clock and the message is to have kids?

Kazune

Kazune #5 · Jan 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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You can interpret the story that way.
Basically, it's about self realizing. The first time the ticking stopped was after she was "showed her worth". The ticking returned when she realized there was something missing in her life. She could have gone a different way, but I chose to give it this ending.

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