• Member Since 27th Jan, 2015
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No Raisin

"I love deadlines. I love the whooshing noise they make as they go by."


Twilight, in the midst of her last days, rediscovers one of her favorite fairy tales.

Cover art by Skyline19.

My submission for the Monthly Contest Club.

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Comments ( 10 )

C-C-Crippling depression

This was a good story.

Fear not, the dark, my friend. And let the tears of unkempt sadness from reading this story begin.

Wow. I was expecting some really high emotion ending that would leave me a little sad. I wasn't expecting just raw loneliness. You captured grief with that one my friend, better than most stories do.

By the name of the history, you were inspired by the new álbum of Mount Erie right?

8114471 i was actually going to mention it, because if so thats an amazing choice, the album is very hopeless which really fits

8114471 Could it be anything else? :pinkiesad2:

I could hear her breathing in the night. It was took loud. No mare of your age should be struggling to take in air like that.

Why cant i hold all this feels...

Death is real.

Man, why does it have to be today that I find this. Today my Great Grandmother passed away, and now I find this? It's ridiculous. Anyways, good story, keep up the great work.

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