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Silver Melodies


God has blessed the world with three things: Pizza, Internet, and Ponies. It has been scientifically proven that, without these things, life would cease to exists, for sure.

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Silver Melodies is finished. Her life has fallen apart, and now she's left to wonder what she could've done different. Why doesn't anypony like her? Why doesn't anypony just want to be her friend? Not even her family?

So, i know I already made a sad story about Silver Melodies, but I had to make this one. Unfortunately, and I know a lot of you will hate me for it, this story is more of a rant. Everything in this story is 95% accurate to my feelings and what I'm going through as I write these words, save for a few exaggerations. So... yeah, I'm sorry.

But I hope you still like the story.

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So, i know I already made a sad story about Silver Melodies, but I had to make this one. Unfortunately, and I know a lot of you will hate me for it, this story is more of a rant. Everything in this story is 95% accurate to my feelings and what I'm going through as I write these words, save for a few exaggerations. So... yeah, I'm sorry.

Oh hawt damn.
It was good, though. I love how you write. :3

my reaction throught out the story
:derpyderp1:
:rainbowhuh:
:applecry:
:fluttercry:
:raritycry:
:raritydespair:
:fluttershysad:
I make Midnight Dash the same way....the feels, my keyboard is wet....

3902705
hey, idk if youd care, but would you like to collab with a story with our ocs?

3902712 Absolutely! As soon as you're ready, i'm ready!

3902724
oh, im quite surprised you said yes!:twilightsheepish::twilightsmile:

3902730 I'm always ready to collab with other authors. Especially when it involves our OCs. :pinkiehappy:

3902738
ok then, because im pretty sure midnight can relate to silver

Yikes this is indeed sad! I hope there will there be further chapters/sequels detailing her whereabouts after leaving. Of course I'm the type who hopes to see it eventually get, well un-sad.

3902851 Well, I it might be possible to do a sequel, or even a prequel, but I don't know. Also, if I did either one, chances are, it would end sadly. That's just how I enjoy writing, making it end sadly, with no happy ending...

I tend to be a depressing writer. :ajsleepy:

Jeez, you're a great writer and a consistent one two. I got to check out the rest of your stuff.

3912981 Thanks! Glad you like my stuff. :pinkiehappy:

I can relate to most of what you wrote here, so I know how most of this feels. :pinkiesad2:

This reminds me of when I was six and my mom married to an asshole. One who treated me like crap. Great story by the way. Brought back memories of all the times I've wanted to run away.

4174355 Um... is this sarcasm?

4174516 No it's not, but my mom got divorced from him. thank god

4174730 No, I mean, did you really think it was a good story? Or are you making fun of it?

4174800 I really did mean it was a good story

4174939 Okay. Thank you... sorry, I hope I didn't seem rude...

4175019 You didn't seem rude at all

Buck you, man. I was listening to Awake by Tycho while reading that and I almost teared up. *ahem* Manly tears, I mean. Still sad, though. :fluttershysad:

4194555 Of course... liquid pride... we all shed it... glad you liked the story!

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It was great. Just upsetting. I wasn't listening to anything sad or I would have broke down

4243975 I'm going to start recommending songs to listen too while reading my stories to make you peoples cry...

Instead of disappearing into darkness, she could discover her destiny with your other oc

4345359 She ran away, because no one liked her and her brother was always gone...

4345432
I meant that after she ran away. Sorry if that offended you.

4345498 Hmm? Why wold it offend me? It's all good.

But her brother wouldn't be able to find her, because she ran far away from her home...

4345566 The reason I apologized is because at my home, almost everything I say offends people.

4345865 Ha, same here. But don't worry, I wont judge you for what you say... unless you say some really mean things... but you didn't.

Well depression isn't a feeling actually, it's an illness, having to do with feeling of sorrow, abandonment, pretty much all that you said. So depression is mainly a lot of feelings together. Sorry about this, I just can't stand it when people misunderstand the meaning of depresion. Good fanfic by the way, though. I wouldn't have done better. Sorry.


(I like to put this at the end of my comments since I am weird so yeah) :derpytongue2:

4563997 Ah, thanks for clearing that up... glad you liked it!

Silver Melodies: scapegoat for everyone on the f:yay:ing planet, evidently. Well, I've seen a couple people in high school who went through this sort of story, and as such, I can safely say that this is pretty accurate on both accounts (for both silver, and the world that's beating her down). With both cases (in my high school), the sg eventually ended up leaving (one for Andress, the other for the afterlife). When they left, however, the school simply found another scapegoat, creating an endless cycle. I always wondered what they thought before leaving, and this story gave me a pretty good answer. I'm glad I read this story. Good going. Cheers :pinkiesmile:


(PS: :fluttercry:)

4590513 Thanks! I know quite well what it feels like to be the scapegoat and what it feels like to back out and run away... I'm glad I was able to paint an accurate picture for you.

Ho-ly snot, that was a tear-jerker. Wow. :fluttercry:

9.5 out of 10. :pinkiesad2:
I'd be Silver Melodies's friend.:pinkiesad2:

I don't really like the format, but the story itself was really good...and easy to relate to...

5556709 Well don't be sorry! I understand people like different things, and not everyone will like everything about my stories. It's all cool :twilightsmile:

5557603 I can't help it....

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