Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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Well one more great chapter to add to a great story. All the girls are together and all that is left is for Twilight to meet the girls. Thing are looking good, but why can’t I shake the feel this emotional roller coaster has a few more drops left before the end.
Thanks for the update! I'm glad to see things turning for the better for Sunny (at least for now). And just how Celestia was able to get through to her and get her to stop (or at least tone down) her self-flagellation - that broke my heart a little. Not going to lie, I'm itching/hoping to see Pony!Twilight's/Pony!Celestia's side on this.
I hope she informs the parents on why they are suspending the kids, sure they have a few words or angry shouts to deliver to their kids.
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Hehe. The end? Oh trust me, we are just getting started on this ride. Sunset has so far to go yet.
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Oh, i have a whole sequence of things planned for Princess Celestia, in regards to her relationship with Sunset. Just gotta be patient.
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Its standard procedure for parents to get an explanation of why their child is receiving disciplinary actions at school. At CHS, that job is Luna’s, and i assure you, she took pleasure in handing out the consequences to the worst offenders.
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Personal headcanon: Pinkie's an Eldritch Being who chooses to appear as a pony (or human) because it amuses her, or to quote another story:
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I like to imagine that all Pinkie Pies in the greater multiverse are like electrons. There’s really just one pinkie, she just exists in all multiverse simultaneously.
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Just because it's such an obscure reference: that quote is referencing Star Control and the Orz specifically: https://wiki.uqm.stack.nl/Orz
Celestia squashed Anon a miss before it even started.. or applebloom knows the risks and still goes for it
Nice to see Sunny getting a break at school, for a few days at least while the students figure a way around the new restictions,
It's really understandable that she'd do so, but wow is Principal Celestia getting quite the slanted view of life in Equestria. I guess that's what happens when you only have one and a half data points to go from.
I like that she brought up Princess Twilight in her speech. Best way to drive home a point about abberrant behavior with teenagers is to make sure they know that their "respected peers" would not condone their behavior either, it's not just an adult thing.
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Hahah...oh man, i havent thought about That game in years!
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Principal Celestia responded to deal with a situation like that before it got any worse. In this case, the CMC were pretty uninvolved in the bullying—Scootaloo was, as observed, in Sunset’s corner.
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Ah yes. Teenagers. Give them a rule and they’ll find a way to circumvent it. I’m not sure that would go well for them though. Celestia’s pretty pissed.
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Human Celestia does have a slanted view, but part of that is because she is unaware of a few important factors, the most noticeable among them the temporal distortion between the two worlds. But in the end, thats part of the tale, how she and her sister perceive the situation affects how they react.
And yes, using the name of the person who united the school and took out she-demon shimmer, someone everyone respects, had a more powerful impact than the disapproval of adults.
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I'm just saying. Here's hoping anon a miss never happens or even if it did. It won't be CMC as culprit. As you said Scoots is in Sunset's corner and may saw what the others did is crossing alot of lines and Sunset doesn't deserve that much of a backlash
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Like i mentioned, I didnt care for the Anon-a-Miss plot for a variety of reasons, chief among them poor characterization of the main cast. So i can firmly say that the stuff we see here in first arc is the closest you will see in this story to that plotline. Straight up.
I have much better plans in mind for things to twist Sunset up six ways from Sunday, whether its her own psyche or external forces. In fact, I always find inner demons to be a much more fruitful generator of character stress and conflict than some halfbaked contrived plot that requires characters to either go against their natures or be forced into wearing the “stupid hat.”
Well, glad the guillotine blade has fallen, and heads are starting to roll. Now, hopefully Sunset gets a little time to recover before the next horror-show comes her way.
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Right there with ya.
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I like to imagine that while Luna and Celestia are caring administrators, they have a line of “do not cross” and that in this case, the level of nastiness and targeted aggression crossed that line, especially in the case of Gilda and Garble, who escalated things to physical assault. After all, even at her worst as queen bitch, if you pay attention, Sunset never physically touches anyone. She manipulates, blackmails, frames, and blusters, but she only glares someone into their locker, she doesnt shove them.
And yes. Inner demons can be fun for plot, more so than outer demons. Though i do enjoy mixing the two, hehehe...
Great chapter. Tbh I'm surprised that Sunset told about the locker room incident. Though I'm glad she did. I hope that you make a reference to Nightmare Moon in the next chapter. Are you planning on a Twilight Velvet and Celestia scene. Or maybe a Cadence scene? That would be some very emotional stuff, I think. Cadence could let Velvet and Light know about that. Just a suggestion. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing what you do with Sunset.
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Well, i wont spoil the details of it, but the next chapter is an interlude from Sparky’s perspective. As for scenes involving cadence...theres a Cady interlude coming up where we learn a little more about human cadence’s life.
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If my knowledge of three years of spanish hasnt entirely deserted me, then:
“Gracias, amigo!”
Though what google translate might do to butcher my writing is a terrifying thought indeed.
Muy buena historia me gusta como escribes 😍
Most anon-a-miss stories are a trainwreck... Nothing but revenge fics against the mane six for "abandoning" Sunset, some of them bordering on torture. Usually they're incredible hypocritical too.
I'm glad you're not going that route (although I will admit I wouldn't have minded if things were just a tad easier for Sunset, but that's personal preference). Anyway, I'm currently catching up and I've been greatly enjoying this story so far.
Okay. The human Celestia in this frightens me.
Amazing chapter
Why would the students give a shit that Princess Twilight Sparkle, an alien pony ruler, would disapprove of their actions?
Not gonna lie, I started out liking this story but it's starting to turn into the "uWu Sunset" fest.
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A good few of them would care due to her having potentially saved their lives from a threat they had never seen before, and bringing down the person who'd been bullying a large portion of them.
VERY ANGRY MOMLESTIA
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