Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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Oh, fuuuuuck! Given the time needed for the chapter to be come out, it was well worth the wait!
You got me really fucking emotional with this chapter!
D'aww, that was cute.
I'm glad Sunny didn't pony up during her musical number, otherwise she would have some 'splainin' to do.
The pairing of those sleep shirts certainly have some connotations.
Twi is going to die once Sunset comes clean about what she is... or, perhaps what she was.
You didn't need lyrics to describe Sunset's performance of her song and you showed that here. Well done! Sunny better get ready, because Twi's about ready to pounce!
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I was thinking the same thing. It was adorable, but that could have gone so very wrong for Sunset.
gawwhhh this chapter definitely feels appropriate with valentines day coming up
The silly date things were indeed cute. I appreciate that even with the song in mind, you focused more on the emotions and the crowd and the response without writing a single word of the lyrics.
That was an incredibly cute chapter, and what a powerful ending too!!!
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Its a nice break from the drama, haha.
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Things are progressing apace. As for how Sunset’s secret pans out, you’ll see soon enough.
I suspect it will be at least narratively satisfying, since Im working hard to make what happens feel like a natural progression of events and character personalities/flaws WITHOUT judicious application of the stupid stick.
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HAHA.
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Yeah, temptation sucks.
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First, let me welcome you to the audience! Its so nice to learn that people are still stumbling across our little project!
While I will admit the story will deviate from the movies as it goes further from the Fall Formal, we did try really hard to work with the canon information as a form of…world building scaffolding. When paired with our own tendencies to pick apart things and also extrapolate logically, its allowed us to create a rather in depth setting that still allows the reader to see the bones of canon within it.
I am glad you enjoyed it enough to stick around! And I’m admittedly curious to know what theories and suspicions you’ve developed, as well as how close or far they are from what we’re doing, lol.
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This actually makes me happy to hear, because one of the areas I’ve been particular about has been how we handled Twilight being written as on the autistic spectrum. I’m a big believer in that a writer should do research on something before writing it, especially things like cultures or psychological quirks/disorders/struggles, and that people’s real world struggles should not be used as toss away plot fodder. Its insulting, demeaning, and you actually lose out on some great narrative opportunities.
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*casually plays with your feelings* mission accomplished then, haha. Gotta make the readers have emotions.
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Maybe she didnt pony-up, but that doesnt mean things didnt happen, heheheh.
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Shes going to have a reaction all right.
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When it comes to a song that the entire audience already knows by heart, the lyrics werent the important part. How it affected Twilight and the rest of the audience was, as was how Sunset looked and felt.
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That would have been…awkward, lol.
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Serendipitous, isnt it?
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You guys know the lyrics. I didnt need to rehash them. What mattered was the emotions, the audience reaction, and how Sunset projected her soul on the stage while Twilight was watching.
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Gooooooood. Then I got across what I wanted with the chapter. Bruhahahah.
First things first, glad your mom is okay.
Second, soooo many things going on here that are great right from the title. Carne Vale or farewell to the Flesh. Obviously some horror movies love that, but in this context one can say it can read as farewell to the fake shell of flesh I wrap myself in to hide who and what I truly am from the rest of society. I shed it to be me.
I hope those T-shirts are real. If not, have them commissioned because they were great!
And an entire fandom just quivered.
And lastly, Sunset up on stage pouring her heart and soul out through her music. As you say, she may not have fully pony up, but with glowing and waving hair and glowing eyes, yeah, some of her magic was at work. I assume they are staying in a hotel? If so, judging by that last line I have a feeling Twilight is not letting her girlfriend go for the rest of the night.
Huh, never thought to cross my mind before, buy an emotivore with a penchant for music.
On one hand, tied to Luna is a meme, but on the other... siren.
The conundrum of exactly what Sunny's origins are are gonna drive me up the wall.
Course, watch everyone's guess work be wrong and she's actually a sentient goldfish cursed to pony form by discord because why not.
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As far as the movies go I'm actually glad for the way the story is branching off after Rainbow Rocks, even when I was younger I cant say I liked the third and especially fourth movie nearly as much as the first two. Even if the Friendship Games wont be anything like the third movie I like the direction its going with Sunsets' magic and the 'Old World' creatures much more.
Now when it comes to theories ...