Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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Sorry for the delayed reply! Busy week.
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If the tingling persists for more than four hours, call a doctor.
In Sunset's defense, she's still learning how to people in a way that doesn't involve being a huge bitch. I imagine the concept of compromise is new.
Cadence...what are you doing hiding in the laundry like an oversized cat?
Yes, magical talking ponies are descended from predominantly herbivorous prey animals. Though this was less prey instincts and more the whole 'erogenous zone' thing.
Because of you, I have the image of a human form Sci-Twi giving a pony shaped Sunset belly wubs, with Sunset wearing this goofy, blissed out expression akin to a dog getting the same treatment.
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The Rarijack is present, but its not the main focus of this story. That isn't to say we wont see more with them--its just that the nature of their relationship is that it doesn't broadcast itself loudly. Its steady, dependable, as much a part of them as breathing, and it doesn't need to prove itself, if that makes sense. It will, however, be the focus of a sidestory I have planned.
sunny hasent realized yet that more curvs= happy girlfriend
Thanks for the chapter! Please take the time for yourself! It’s not good to over work and burn yourself out!
Take your time, I prefer quality over quantity anyway.
Won't hate, just disappointed at no updates, but that's on me, you do what you need to do
Thanks to everyone for their feedback on me taking a break in December! It’s appreciated more than you know!
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Oh yes. Twilight definitely appreciates Sunset’s “assets.”
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Yeah, i try not too, its just that December is the month where “EVERYTHING HAPPENS”, and i dont get a lot of breathing room. Its like a Griswald Family Christmas at my house.
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I do too, but i dont like to leave people hanging either.
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It would only be for December, to be fair. Updates would resume in January, once i survive the holiday hell.
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I’m not 100% sure what this is in reference to. What was bizarre? I mean, Chapter 2 is...not that far in, so that helps narrow it down, but I’m just not sure what you found bizarre?
No updates in December because you're taking personal time? The horror, the travesty! How dare you take personal time while I'm pissing away the lockdown enjoying all the personal time in the world. It's all mine, you cant have any.
Honestly though, take all the time you need to be you my dude. Treat yourself good and right,we'll be here when you get back. I just enjoy the good vibes of my second favourite ship fic bopping around. Its good shit, and I'll be more than happy to accept January updates as a belated Cgristmas gift.
Grousing about the consequences of eating well, and the effects of her paramour's family making sure she's not borderline malnourished? Sunset's contempt for her ground ape form never fails to be entertaining.
Nice to see that Sunset's willing to trust Rarity with where she lives. Shows that she's growing to trust the girls.
And if you need the time, take the time.
I haaaaaate clothes shopping. I seriously have 20 year old shirts because I like them and they are "mostly" still presentable. I did have to get new pants this year, sadly.
And come on, Sunny, who DOESN'T like boobs in the face???
I also try to maintain a 3-4 chapter buffer in case things come up or I hit a wall. Take all the time you need.
I’m really liking the Rarity POVs, getting that outside look of Sunset while aware of her alien status. Also I’m fine with you taking December off if you feel you should. A month without updates would be painful, but bearable lol
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*laughs* Yes, how dare i have a life outside of horsewords? :P
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Sunset Not Like Monkey Body: News at 11.
And yes, she's getting there. Slowly but surely.
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There is a reason I live in jeans, tshirts, and sweatpants. Clothes shopping is a pain in the ass.
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These alternate perspectives are fun to write, and present the chance to show the perceptions of other characters, rather than dividing everything into "Sunset" and "the reader."
Lol, I wonder how Rarity got a pair Applejack's pants.
In all seriousness though, I love the story and I like the snippets of Applejack and Rarity being in a relationship.
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Don't forget her hind leg kicking weakly in reflex :V
So Sunny was really underfed... or Velvet's cooking really is miraculous 👀
Now I know this story is going it's own way... but I'll admit "Homeless Sunset" stories are my literary cocaine for some reason and I can't get enough of them...
*concern*
Dayum~
HAH!
I think I might have mentioned before, but I'm loving the fact Rarity's become Sunset's confidante and Best Friend (with no romantic feelings attached). I don't think I've seen it often before in other stories (they either become lovers or are not that close) and here it's just a joy to see them interact.
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I imagine it went something like “Applejack, darling, give me your pants.”
Followed by “Yes, dear,” as AJ tossed them over.
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Yes. Thats the exact image.
Mmm. ‘Miraculous.’ Sure, you can go with that. ;). Part of it is definitely the dietary shift. Sunset is from magic pony land, where all their food is fresh and isnt the kind of heavily processed mess that is in human grocery stores. When she shops for herself, she shops for the familiar: fresh fruits and veggies, simple grains like oats for oatmeal, or the less sugary, less processed cereals, fresh breads from the bakery, that sort of thing. She’s not likely to gorge on fatty junkfoods or buy the prepackaged stuff thats high in preservatives and would taste like crap to her. Even a lot of her sweet treats come from a local place, rather than prepackaged junk. It makes a huge difference. Add that to a lack of the common meats which have all kinds of hormones and other chemicals in them that arent good for us because of how the industry for meat animals works, and Sunset wasnt so much manourished as she was lacking an excess amount of fat in her diet. An increase in those plus an increase in calories has let her fill out and go from lean with few reserves to “curvy.” Though im sure her girlfriend wont complain.
Mmm, i see homeless Sunset a lot and its not a bad thought, but i had a bit of a different idea in mind long term. You’ll find out.
Look, ive seen Sweetie Belle try to cook and “help” Rarity. You cant tell me her room wouldnt be a disaster.
Yes. Sunset is stacked—ironically this is not me taking liberties. If you pay attention, her walk cycle is animated in such a way to show that she has a curvy figure (she struts like a bombshell in high heels, even when shes not in heels). And its a different walk cycle that some of the others. Its most noticeable in Legend of Everfree when she and twilight are facing the camera and walking.
I really like the idea that Rarity can be a good friend to Sunset. We see show care and concern as well as a shrp emotional intelligence and high perception, which i think would play well with Sunsets personality. It’s something that will continue going forward.
Sexy? All I got is this
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