Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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This story has been great. Watching a flawed Sunset and Twilight together has made for a good story. I also can’t wait to see what happens when Sci-Twi and the Rainbooms meet.
Mmm, so we're seeing here that Sunset can feel magic manifesting when the girls summon/call out/embody their Elements. I also noticed she kept rubbing her forehead when she was relating her story to VP Luna. Was that a sign of magic too, or was it more of a nervous tic?
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Im glad you're enjoying the tale! And i suspect the scenario where they meet will be somewhat amusing for everyone reading...
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Probably more nervous tic during those nonmagical moments when she is talking about being a pony. She does miss her horn, after all.
Amazing chapter. I love how you made Rainbow in this story. She's so complex, as is Sunset. I can't wait to read the next chapter. And for good measure.
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Please, you'll be the Great and Powerful Moonrise's favoritest author.
Just got to your story off my growing faster than I can keep up with it reading list, and I must say you've crafted quite the lovely take on the aftermath of the first movie.
Things just feel more coherent this way, not to mention the ways you've fleshed out Sunset's cultural differences as well as the various psychological concerns.
Definitely earned my like and track, I'll be keeping an eye on this.
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Im super glad you liked the little look into Rainbow’s head—shes one of the ones i feel that suffers the worst from “poor characterization” in some of the various FiM episodes, where shes reduced to one or two flat character traits. (All of them get it to various degrees depending on the episode and who is writing it, but Rainbow is one of the ones that suffers the most from it.). The benefit of writing (and giving myself the leeway of a much higher rating) is that I can take that time and effort to make each of them real characters, real people, to take what we are presented with in canon and use it to flesh out full psychological profiles for each of them. (Sunset’s alone is like 10k words and counting)
Glad youre enjoying, and i hope you continue to like what uou read as things develop!
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I always thought that there was more depth than we see, depth that is hinted at between the end of Equestria Girls and Rainbow Rocks, and in a lot of ways, this first arc of the story is meant to fill in what isn't seen in that time frame. Well, except for the Sunset/sci-twi relationship. That was solely because I legit see real potential and chemistry between them, even in canon.
As for the psychology of a Sunset and pony culture...that, hilariously, stemmed from my beta-reader
/editor/co-author and I picking apart stuff and discussing the impact some of the species differences would have on the evolution of a culture and society. Things that will continue to come up throughout the story, so I’m glad you like those!
Glad to see Rainbow take the initiative and start making things right.
Sunset's fear of losing Twiggles was just heartrending. The fact that Twi's the one safe anchor in her life, and the one person who she knows she's got a completely clean start with, makes the thought of them being separated really painful to contemplate.
And hopefully the humans (I'm reluctant to call them people) behind that group are going to get theirs.
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You don't have to worry about that I love the direction you're going with it an once it's completed I'll most likely reread it. Keep up the good work.
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Yeah, when youre in a place like Sunset is emotionally, one person can make all the difference, and losing that connection can be one of the most terrifying prospects imaginable. But, hopefully things will start looking up, hmm? Maybe. *quietly shoves the rainbow rocks transcripts under the bed.*
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The pink one is, unfortunately, like most humorous characters: she often gets pigeon holed into being comic relief and something is lost from it. I never forget that shes going to be humorous if she can, but this is also the character who learns everything possible about those around her so she knows how to make them laugh and what to be on the lookout for. Shes got an observational skill that seems to border on preternatural, and a mischievous streak as well. While she may not get as much direct screen time as some, i am going to continue to try and write her as more than slapstick.
So does this story ever go into what happened with the Spring Fling with Rarity vs Sunset? I vaguely remember a mention of an apology for something but never actually what had happened. Cause from what I understand from Canon is that Rarity and Fluttershy were the ones hit the hardest by Sunsets bullying.
Not sure if it would actually be a good time for any kind of mentioning it now though as you are fairly far into the story.
Finally coming around to reading this. I've been up all night reading (apparently it's seven in the morning ) Anyway I wanted to say that there have been some things in this so far that made my heart squirm in different ways but this almost made me start crying for some reason wow. Really enjoying it so far!
Ah, the old "you mess with one of us, you mess with all of us." Sunset's gonna need some physical defense in the form of RD and AJ if she's unwilling to physically retaliate herself. After all, she only uses that on those who deserve it like those teens around the orphan house. Makes me wonder, with Rarity and Applejack have daily routines with Sunset, will the others?