Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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Awesome chapter!
On the next chapter, please add a comedy scene during the family dinner with Sunset discussing harming the jerk violently and Twilight's parents agreeing with her, making Twilight freak out.
Perfection at the end of a long week... for the readers and the characters! I'm glad the make-up went so well. A strong friendship does make for a strong relationship because you have so much foundation to draw from besides just "ohhh ahhh, you so hot!" I do like how Sunset laughed off Rug Muncher because, yeah, pony girl covered in fur EVERYWHERE it would not make a licking (pun full intended) bit of sense. I still see friction down the line when the family intends to try and have Twilight transferred, but that is a fight for another night. Annnnnd Cadance brings it on home with the mentioning of the hickey. Great chapter.
Hey sorry to ask but have you done a request
Damn it Cadence. Shame Twilight couldn't tell Sunset what she was doing near CHS, Sunset could investigate the area to find the disturbed earth as if something was dug up there and question Twilight about it and get the suspicion about it.
Wallflower would probably try to use the stone to make Twilight forget Sunset ever existed, hopefully Twilight continues to do her video logs.
Wallflower being homophibic is so weird to me beacuse in every story about her that i know she is some flavor of lgbt (usually lesbian)
Idk something that floted in the tiny lake that i call my mind
As always keep the good work!
Finally this Charade will end but cute chapter. Also again, good on Fizzberries being able to fix dark magic poisoning.
But it is a bugbite. A lady bugbite.
I'm surprised Sunset still hasn't connected the dots to CPA and the darkness.
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Glad you enjoyed it!
As for the second part of your comment, two quick things to mention:
1. We...dont really take requests, particularly for the main story. There's already three of us on the team, and that means there's already a lot of jokes, ideas, and bits of dialogue suggestions that end up on the cutting room floor. While I'm considering the idea of freelance writing for $$$ quite seriously, I feel like this story already has enough going on.
2. We aren't writing this in a hurry/as its posted. Our buffer for what has already been mostly hashed out and even gone through the initial edits and work arounds is anywhere between 15-30+ chapters ahead of what is being posted. This is so a chapter can still go up most weeks, even if I've had a rough time (as I'm the one doing most of the writing legwork.) While we do one final editing pass before posting each week, its mostly just checking grammar and punctuation, and to make sure we've not missed any funky wording, or missing phrases or what have you.
Apologies if you're disappointed, but I assure you, the fun stuff for the next chapter should make up for it!
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Trust me, going back through the chapters before I post them is always a bright spot in my week too!
Yes, strong friendships are the backbone of most healthy relationships that last. No one can survive on a diet of candy forever, after all.
And yes, "Carpet/Rug-muncher" is a uniquely English language slang term. Other languages have their own variants of "derogatory slurs" but they are often culturally relevant in some way. Such as Italian insults often using food (My grandfather had one that translated to "You are an eggplant without seeds" to tell a man he was a limp-dicked idiot.) As a result, Sunset is...just..."whut?" and her first thought (cultural) to what it could mean is to think of goats--who will attempt to eat anything. Like carpet.
Equestrian goats don't seem to be winning any intelligence competitions after all.
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If you mean like the request someone posted earlier today in the comments, as I said, we don't take requests. (Reasons stated above)
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Shhhhh. We'll get there.
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I actually talked about that in the author's notes of one of the recent chapters. The long and short of it amounts to: "Wallflower is not actually homophobic, as she personally does not give two shits about the queer community one way or the other. However, she is a petty, smart-mouthed, vindictive teen girl, and Sunset being in a relationship with another girl is 'Low-Hanging Fruit'--that is, an easy target." Its not any different than if Sunset was overweight, or had a lot of bad relationships with dudes, or if she had an acne problem, or was flat-chested. These are things that are EASY to insult and harass and bully someone about, because they can't really do a lot to refute it or change it most of the time.
The only thing more emotionally and socially ugly than a high school mean girl is a middle school mean girl.
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Not that anyone buys it anyway, lol.
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Hehehe. Good one.
She's getting there.
The build up to this was agonizingly brutal but the payoff was So worth the wait. The fluff in this is heart-meltingly adorable.
I love this fanfic soo much! Its like drinking hot chocolate on a cold rainy day!
My heart....
I have no idea why it agitated me a bit that Twilight left out the serious fact that Wallflower left Twilight alone out in a storm miles from home. Though having Flash drop that part of the bomb of what happened might be interesting. Still the ending was cute.