Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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I wonder if how much of that dream was Sunset's, and how much of it Sunset was picking up from Twilight.
Also, did Sunset have claws and a tail in that dream?
I wonder if Cadance could give Sunset any advice on how to process her emotions.
Steeeeeamy. Yeah, they were both on the edge of popping their corks. Of course for a magically charged pony girl with a perchance for destruction and possible demon half thaaaaaat could be baaaaad. It's like Hulking out with more magical fire. And while I feel bad for Sunset having to constantly hold that grip of control I truly feel bad for Twi who REALLY wants to let go and feel said release. And will naturally blame herself for pushing even though it was subconscious.
I'm more surprised Sunset didn't wake up with a tail and pony ears. Still that dream definitely shows the Demonset is all for protecting her nerd.
Sounds like the darkness that is Sunset's demon half is starting to react to the fae's influence. That's bad.
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How much indeeeeed.
And yes, yes she did.
Perhaps a talk with Cadence will happen.
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To be fair, I can't blame Twilight for being all worked up. She's basically dating a girl whose physical attraction stats are an 11/10. For...reasons.
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Sunset's subconscious: This one is MINE. Get your own.
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Hmmm. A lot of things are happening.
*ominous music*
Not a fan of the raunchy chapters going off recently, but it does give some insight.
My inner psychopath is just containing himself for now, because when I see that smug prick's face again...
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I'm sorry you feel that way, but I'm not sorry for the chapters themselves. The growth of intimacy between Twilight and Sunset (as with any two people in a relationship) is both natural and healthy, even if they are struggling with it in their own ways at the moment. More than that, I can honestly say I am not writing smut for smut's sake, or for anyone to use as 'happy alone fun time assistance.' Every moment in this story is carefully considered and discussed by me and my two partners, who are the other part of the Rubicon creative team, and what is being included is, in and of itself, important to the story itself, be it for long term plot, character development, relationship development, or because its providing some form of foreshadowing to later events somewhere in story. I can say that it will not become the sole focus of the story--I've read books like that, where a good story is derailed at points because 2/3 of a 700 page book becomes nothing but sex scene after sex scene, and as a reader, that BOTHERS me....but at the same time, I'm not going to shy away from it.
Again, I'm sorry that the inclusion of the physical intimacy is making you uncomfortable...although I don't feel its fair to refer to them as 'raunchy,' when I've worked very hard to tie the physical intimacy back into the affection, care, friendship, and trust the characters have for each other, and also been pretty meticulous about my word choice, narrative description, and dialogue to not send this into weird 'porn' territory. I do hope that the inclusion of the intimacy of the characters does not deter you from continuing to enjoy the story as it unfolds.
As for the second half of your comment...I'm...not sure exactly who you're referring to with your comment? What 'smug prick?' I cant tell if you're referring to Cinch, their master, Wallflower, the boy in the hall, etc.
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I have a hell of a temper problem that I only control out of my pure stubbornness and how I had to teach myself to calm down. It's also because I do karate and you have to learn control when fighting others.
Sunset being that close to losing control is something I am absolutely terrified of happening to myself - I nearly killed a guy once.
I relate to Sunset a lot as in personality (not the orphan part) so reading this kinda made me feel seen if that makes sense? To me temper issues in media always are either supposedly a joke or just used as a plot device.