Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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Greatest love story never told, nice. Damn, I haven't watched Slayers or the sequels in about 10 years... Of course my excuse is primarily because we have them on VHS.
And here we have Sunset doing what Sunset was meant to do: being a leader.
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Snips and snails were stooges, but they were involved enough that they too saw punishment, just not to the same severity as Sunset.
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Im glad you liked the bit about Spike. Originally there was a scene meant to be there, but it ended up being an idea i liked so much that its become its own interlude and starting point for a minor plotline all its own, one I look forward to telling. As for the girls, yes, they were a bit caught up in all the shit and didnt notice Sunset’s suffering, but...at the same time, Sunset, who has been shown to be a very good manipulator, has been actively trying to keep from them how bad it is.
And Slayers is fun, definitely holds up to rewatching. (Rumor has it they are making more Slayers, based off of some of the original novels that didnt already get made into arcs for the anime. (Ive also just hurt my own brain by analogizing “if Sunset is akin to lina, does that cast Trixie as Naga the White Serpent?” And then I pictured Trixie doing the Naga laugh. And it hurt. Ow.)
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Mmmm. That would be a problem, wouldnt it? Demons are bad news, and even I would feel bad for the Sirens if they were subjected to that. Wouldnt end well for them, because I’m fairly certain demons are higher on the proverbial food chain.
And yes, Sunset can be an amazing leader when she’s not being ruled by her ego or crippled by self doubt.
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I know. sunset and her stupid little voice can be quite blistering with their sarcastic comments, cant they? Im also glad the joke from Rainbow about Rarijack made you laugh. (I suspect when i eventually do the Rarijack side story you’ll appreciate it)
Now that she can think clearly again, or after the event when things calm down, Rarity might be able to think back and notice how much Sunset's been hiding from them this whole time. The upcoming "realization" moment for everyone is going to be sooo cathartic. I may have read Rainbow Rocks takes a few times now, but the last few chapters have been really visceral nonetheless in what the whole situation did to Sunset. Which will make the aftermath all the sweeter of course.
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Either Trixie doing Naga's laugh, or Naga doing third person, either is a painful thought, but realistically, they are kind of similar.
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Oh yes. The "upcoming realizations" are something like 25 Chapters long. While I consider the Interlude that will be wrapping up Rainbow Rocks to mark the "end" of the first arc, there's a "bridge" between the first and second arcs that is basically the "falling action" for the first arc and setup for the second. Believe me, there's going to be a lot of impending emotional gut punches.
*shudders* I'm now horrified, because I have accidentally pictured Trixie cosplaying as Naga. Ow. Ow, my brain.
Agreed that is one of the best lines, but it’s sad for me because I’m finally caught up, I have never been so sad
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Glad to see youre still enjoying the story!
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Im glad everyone seems to have enjoyed that Quip from Dash—it was fun when I wrote it, and I liked the idea of her secretly giving her bestie some shit, even if AJ couldnt hear it. Plus its a reference to the short story I have outlined about Rarity and AJ entitled “From Always to Forever.”
Dont sweat being caught up too much. I try to post weekly, so updates are fairly regular.
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That’s good to here, you also got her personality super correct in that line so good going and thank you for writing this great story
Excellent chapter. This story just keeps getting better and better.
Finally, oh FINALLY Sunset is realizing that leadership and tyranny are not the same thing. It feels so rewarding to read.