Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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Well Twilight now has a real friend at Crystal Prep so congrats to her. Also nice to see that Twilight's parents have figured out there's something very wrong there and aren't backing down.
Twisting facts and truths to fit the story you want to hear vs. letting others come to their own conclusions? What sort of evil, sick, twisted monstrosities would do something like that?
Twiggles, sweetie, if there is a paper trail showing that it was Cinch who's neglect resulted in your leaving, they're not going to care, because it was on the Bitch Queen's head that you left, not your inability to perform.
Speaking of the Bitch Queen, looks like she's gotten so used to everyone being under her thrall that when she's blindsided by someone who isn't, she doesn't know how to react. That's the problem with using crutches for too long. You forget how to walk and run without them.
Glad to see that there's a touch of Loyalty in CPA.
Hope Lyra talks to her again
Wonder how long it will take for the nerd to mess up and Lyra figuring out she is in even better company than expected . .
So, calling it now? That water that Twilight found herself wanting to drink has been putting the majority of the mental whammy on her and folks. This is why you never accept food or drink from the Fae folks. But between Sunset's magic burning the control away and the anger Twi's parents have, it takes away the one bit of power that the Fae have: Subtlety.
Still worried about Twi being around there, if only because she's still magically susceptible to what Cinch is doing and is under her sway enough to find wanting to obey and expect her Principal to be in control. The fact that Night and Velvet aren't has gone a good chunk of undermining that power. Here's hoping that's enough for Twi to squirm from from her grip.
Either Sunny's aura on Twilight's parents is still lingering enough to keep shadows at bay or Twi's parents have their own light.
I still love Rubicon's version of Indigo, one that seems to be very similar to Rainbow, and not some twisted shadow of her that I believe the rest of the Shadowbolts were supposed to be to the Rainbooms.
Mental-Sunset's right, Wallflower has really only been a friend in name only, where as Indigo has been anything but that. And as Sunset has discovered after the Formal, having a bit of muscle on your side has its advantages.
Common Indigo W. As for C*nch, boy am I overjoyed to see her get fucking verbally obliterated. It makes me H A P P Y.
Also, Mental Sunset is definitely starting to be a little more wink wink nudge nudge.
Suri though... I can't imagine she'll take this well at all.
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Indeed, I provided the hints to the audience. However, that was from the PoV of Cranky, and that knowledge is not something the girls necessarily have. Hence the conversation they are having.
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Hehehe. We're getting there.
Although everyone does seem to forget that back in one of the much earlier chapters, Dash clues in to Sunset having a friend she's not telling anyone about and promises to keep it secret.
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Yes, Twilight has a new friend. And yeah, her parents arent stupid, or blind, its just that some things take time to sort, and anything involving legal nonsense or bureaucracy is one of them--and trust me, schools are so riddled with bureaucratic nonsense that its amazing teachers get any teaching done.
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...I cant tell, are we talking about demons, the Fae, or lawyers at this point?
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Lol. This. The girls are a lot of things, but SUBTLE is not one of them. Poor Twilight would have friendship overload.
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Theres stuff planned and written, actually. :}
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I see someone paid attention in their "how to interact safely with the fae" class.
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Curiouser and curiouser, isn't it? What is keeping the darkness at bay?
Indigo is meant to be a character in her own right, similar to, but different in ways from Dash. We have a backstory and everything written up for her, for her family, and how that plays into the girl that is shown here: someone who is brash and a little obnoxious, but means well and follows through when she commits to doing something.
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Mental-Sunset is certainly doing something. >.> what, exactly though? And why?
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There's a difference?
First, glad furball is okay.
And wow, those Equestrian berries do good work on the parents. It seems they are running into some resistance clearing Twilight of all her darkness. I wonder if that has to do with her personality wanting to be a bit submissive to some.
Flirting with the voices in your head. There is a story in that itself.
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Not really. ;P
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We are also glad our little Spooky is okay. Didn’t appreciate the vet bill, but glad hes unhurt.
Mmmhmm. Between Sunset’s magic and the magic treats, it seems like Velvet and night are thinking clearly. As for Twilight…well.
I wont comment on the bit about her being a less assertive person.
:P
The Shadow Bolts always seems like the elements gone slightly wrong. Well, most of them. Sunny being twisted Generosity didn't show well.
Indigo's issue is to whom her loyalty lies. Even now, if ordered too by Cinch, I'm sure she would betray Twi. She would feel horrible about it, but she would. And it wouldn't even take much magic, at the moment, to make her do so.
Give it a week and that could change. Then it will take quite a bit of magic.
This chapter put a fairly feral grin on my face. Great to see Cynch on the back foot, Sunset's magic doing some heavy lifting, and Twilight starting to build an actual support base inside CPS.
That's it, no walls of text, I promise
Twilight's finally making some real friends in that hell of a school, and the magic altering get mind seems to be less effective, I ask myself if imaginary sunset is really that imaginary.
I set this story aside so I could build up some back log for a few weeks and binge all at once. The cliffhangers were killing me. Queue me sitting at home just cackling constantly as I finally read these last few chapters.
Mental-Sunset has graduated to being flirty Thats a Tulpa...