Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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anything with the crystal prep girls that are not complete monsters?
Yeah about that....
FUCK! HOW!? HOW DO YOU GET SMUT CHAPTERS TO SEND ME TO TEARS!? FUUUUUCK!
you can lead a bacon horse to water but you can’t make her get over her mommy issues
And of course, Twilight was too preoccupied to notice Sunset's magic blast and pony-up
insane post nut clarity
These are always cute and hot at the same time. I'm not here for these chapters, I'm here for the main story. I need to see what happens at the games.
But...
These are really well done. I enjoy them as much as I stress that I'm not getting to the action of the story. Err, the other action. The fight. I wanna see the fight!!
I was genuinely worried her horngasm was going to set the wall or curtains on fire. Then, I was worried Twilight would freak believing she had seen her girlfriend with glowing eyes and shadowy wings.
And lets be honest, a quicky when no one is looking is a young love must! Though, the "oh, you both have wet hair, we'll just pretend to not notice that or your glowing smiles" should be next. Velvet would notice.
Sunset, you almost completely ruined the moment. Can't let fear control you and with a partner THAT smart, don't dare insult their intelligence or treat them as less than equal.
Sunset... don't be so pig-headed now! When the "demon" inside is making as much sense as your lady love, then you've got a problem!
This was a sweet chapter overall.
Could be worse, at lest she is getting a step out of it. Most stubern fools do the one forward and two back dance. So Sunny is ahead of the curve.
the way i screamed at seeing this chapter + the name
'why do i feel like sunset would try skateboarding as well' - said my friend who is too scared to comment on anything but wanted to add it in
im practically as stubborn as sunset is at this point omfg (i had a full blown argument with this middle aged teacher at 9 because they were saying that a word i used was wrong and i won after around 8 days. dont mess with the autistics smh/j )
AHAHAHDEUISDFGVHUVIHUDERU THAT WAS SO CUTE TUEUIEREIUFJWI4UYHURIJHRUITGOUJHUIg (me and who)
sunset stfu sparky is smart enough to handle herself
live laugh love stupid little voice
the water at my school tasted like soap all the time, you could not run away from it
twilight leave the flirting to sunset (no but the sentence dying off is so true)
i did a funny thing called 1 step forward 2 steps back but then the occasional 3 steps forward
Sunbutt Jr., you've got issues.
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Several, all involving Indigo. She's become a rather useful secondary character, actually.
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Sunset is Twilight's biggest cheerleader...at least until Pinkie gets involved. Then its Pinkie. Because...well. The Pink One is not to be trifled with.
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The right balance of emotions and softness and twisting a knife. (Also about 30 years of practice.)
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Aint that the truth.
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To be fair to Twilight, she had her girlfriend rather enthusiastically sitting on her face while she was eating her out. In my experience, your field of view is rather limited, especially if you take your glasses off first.
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Yup. Women can have it too.
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All chapters serve the greater story, I promise. :P And the fight is coming.
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Heh. Horngasm.
Yeah, Velvet and Night are gold medalists in 'pretending not to notice' at this point.
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Sunset has so many issues she's basically a publishing house.
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I blame her support network for the reason she's making progress at all. Velvet, Cady, and Luna are basically unspoken MVPs at this point in the tale.
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I fear you may have me at a disadvantage. Skateboarding? I'm assuming this is something related to the title of the chapter?
(The line is actually from a song--I've used several bits from it, actually, in different chapters. Most of my chapter titles are song lyrics, quotes, or references. In this particular incident, the song is "Unstoppable" by The Calling, first introduced to me by way of an Angel Sanctuary AMV way back in like...2003? Its a good song, and it...fits in some of these chapters, the vibe from the song.)
This Video, actually. Someone decided to reup it.
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My friend, she's got so many issues that she's the damned publishing house at this point.
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nice
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oh no no no sorry is just me and my friend were talking about this (as one does) and they randomly mentioned it and i thought it was an interesting idea - meant to quote it but reading something at 2:43am does that to you
I... I'll just leave this here because I think it's important to say all of this. I very rarely leave comments anywhere, preferring to observe and read. Plus, I was also inspired to do this by the fact that you repeatedly mentioned in the notes that you like to read the comments left and I know firsthand that a good review stimulates inspiration and continued work. By the way, I wanted to leave a comment somewhere in the middle of the fanfic, but... I’m not sure how the notification system works on this site, but I wanted you to see exactly what I wrote. Actually, what I wanted to say... to be honest, it’s difficult to convey in words how much your story is imprinted in my heart (especially considering that I’m writing all this through a translator since English is not my native language XD so if somewhere my words sound not entirely correct, I’m very sorry!!) But it seems I’m chatting a little...
Hmm, this fanfic is truly wonderful and very interesting. Every facet of the way you describe the feelings and actions of each(!) character delights me and I have talked about this with my friends more than once, so much I wanted to share my feelings. How do you harmoniously introduce secondary characters into the story that help reveal it from all sides, how do you make parents and other adult characters not cardboard but who they really are (which is not done in most stories about teenagers, as you yourself have mentioned more than once)
I didn’t dive into this story right away, but as soon as I realized that it interested me, I plunged into it headlong and couldn’t tear myself away. I read it every day for several chapters and I'm not sure but I think I finished it in about a couple of weeks and am looking forward to the continuation! I should also note that the way you described the human Twilight here makes me feel a kinship with her and feel sympathy since I also suffer from a kind of social phobia (not as strong as Twilight’s, but some of the situations you described involuntarily immersed me in my own memories and how I tried to cope with anxiety from things that other people don’t even think about). Once I was in a situation that caused me a lot of stress (in fact, lately it seems to me that I’m not getting out of a state of stress at all due to very major changes in my life) and I found it very ironic how some events or phrases from your fanfic corresponded to situations that happen in my life or answered questions to which I myself was not able to find an answer. My friend, in turn, commented on this as “how can you read such emotionally difficult work when you are under so much stress”, this made me smile because I have dealt with stress in this way since childhood: I read fan fiction and well-researched fan fiction like yours helped me forget about my problems and relax mentally. To some extent, this became a kind of psychotherapy, since I noticed that after reading at least one chapter, I could find the strength to begin routine activities, when previously I could not bring myself to even go to the shower, it was so exhausting. I even took note of some of the things and thoughts you described, and once when I started to worry very much in public, I hyperventilated and I tried Twilight’s method of calming down slow breathing and it really helped! So it’s no exaggeration to say that your fanfiction has a very positive effect on my mental health, it’s very interesting, no detail seems superfluous and it’s truly amazing! I also wanted to add something about "Lullaby for a Princess". This is one hell of an amazing move! I love this animation and couldn't help but go watch it after you said that this is what Sunset was humming all the time. If you think about it, it really suits her, in some ways she and Luna are very similar... Thank you very much for this masterpiece! I'm looking forward to the continuation.
I also took some time to draw some fanarts, I really hope you like them
👉👈
https://derpibooru.org/images/3335679?q=artist%3Ayuris
https://derpibooru.org/images/3335676?q=artist%3Ayuris
https://derpibooru.org/images/3335671?q=artist%3Ayuris
https://derpibooru.org/images/3335661?q=artist%3Ayuris
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Okay, wow. I was not expecting this on a rainy, yucky Tuesday evening, and it totally blew me away.
First, thank you so much for taking the time to comment and share your thoughts--none of us begrudge anyone who prefers to just be a lurker and read only, particularly since I'm exactly that kind of fanfic reader myself. It means a lot every time a reader does go through the effort of leaving a comment, especially one that is long and thought out, and yes, we do read through them all. They definitely provide a boost of 'feel good brain chemicals' for us.
The system notifies me of all comments left on the story, just for future reference, :}. And you're fine, as far as the translator goes--even if the grammar order is wonky, the ideas communicate just fine (points for the English Language being a disaster as a language, I guess.)
We are so glad you're enjoying the story and the characters. We always approached the writing with wanting the characters to feel like real people you could relate to...or at least empathize with as thinking beings, just like you might with a friend or a cousin or even a neighbor. Part of that comes in looking at a conversation as if it were two people really talking, part of it comes in actually coming up with who these people are, who they were in the past, and how they became who they are now, because...if we know the answers to all those questions, we can decide how they would react. The fact that you noticed the difference, felt like they had real depth and shape to their personalities says to me that we succeeded! :}
I can appreciate that it was "a story you couldn't put down," since from the very beginning, this has been "the story I would love to read." (I think I've read Rubicon more times than anyone EXCEPT maybe Resurgent Wanderer, lol.) I can assure you that we have lots more writing coming. Bruhahah. (I also recommend the various side stories for the same universe we have on the account. All the stories I have up are part of Rubicon somehow.)
Oh, man. Twilight has always been a bit of a struggle for me--she's very different than me (I've a lot more in common with Sunset or AJ than Twilight) and the way she's written in this story has always been a team effort with the bulk of the work done by one of my partners who can relate to her easier. There was also a lot of research into mental health and experiences with people who suffer from various types of social anxieties, to get her to feel 'just right' and its a constant balancing act for us in the story. The fact that her narrative, and the descriptions of her social anxieties resonated so strongly with you...those things tell me that we have managed to find a balance with her that shows both the reality of her struggles and hopefully a respect for those who genuinely struggle in similar fashions.
That the narrative helped you find answers in your own history or gave you a measured, grounded feeling of 'oh, its not just me,' or even helped you in some way with your own mental health in some way is perhaps the greatest compliment we could ever receive, and it brings home a lesson I learned many years ago in a fanfiction: "When you put a story out there for people to read, you cannot know what it will mean for them, what it may become for them. It may be the one bright spot to a very dark day, the way they get through something, or even just make them feel like they aren't alone anymore. Knowing that, treat both your writing and your readers with respect."
*chuckles* Yes, I can assure you that no detail is superfluous. Everything in the story has a point of some kind, really. There are no wasted words or empty chapters. They all matter, even if why it matters doesnt come up again for a hundred chapters.
Heh. The Lullaby for a Princess thing...I don't think anyone knows just how much I was excited to reveal that little "Gotcha!" moment, that this song, this lullaby from Sunset's earliest memories that Celestia hummed and sang....was meant to be the actual Lullaby for a Princess song. I thought about revealing it early on in an author's note, but never could find the right moment, and then when we went through the story development in Arc 2 with Sunset coming to grips with her life in the human world and her attachment to a human family, I saw the opportunity and went for it. Revealing it was soooo satisfying. There's so much to parallel Sunset and Luna, and its full of such delicious irony, I couldn't resist.
Just so you know for certain, updates are weekly, usually some time between Thursday night and Friday evening for me (That's United States times, btw.)
Last, but definitely not least....
OMG, the fanart is AMAZING! We were not expecting anything like that, and it made our night, all three of us! Thank you so much for such a treat! I have to admit I laughed so hard I cried at the picture of them with the shirts and the image of Twilight on Sunset's shoulders. So on point for the humor. I'm now happily linking the derpi page links to everyone I know, gushing over the fanart! Other than one of my co-writers and the ladies who did our cover (and are doing a second commission for us), this is pretty new for us. :}
Wishing you all the best,
The Rubicon Team!
*Insert Sunset Stamp of approval here*
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Damn, I'm so glad that you liked my art and that I was able to please you with a comment^^ And yes, I actually read the author's notes and noticed that chapters are released every week, as I said earlier: I needed time to draw the art so I managed to read two more new chapters during their release before posting my comment. And I also started reading your other stories! The backstory with Celestia is very touching!!!