Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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From...the holiday short I wrote?
That'll be revealed in Supernova.
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*evil laugh* or worse. Her brother will find them and then things will be incredibly awkward while Cadence laughs like a madwoman because she thinks its hilarious.
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*smirks* don't get too ahead of the story. :P
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Treehugger is.... *makes a face*
Let's just say that I was kind of rooting for Discord in that episode because people like Treehugger I just want to punch in the face.
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You raise a lot of good points about the Pies. :}
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Has it been that long? oof.
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To be fair, she has no frame of reference. Also, she suspects they may know about HER having more-than-friends feelings for Twilight, but not that its mutual or that they're more than friends.
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Mm. Its a curious thing, that strange dark-sight of hers, isnt it?
What is a "Bob-Cut?"
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Karen, Sunset literally had to call the cops on a Karen
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Not a fan of hippie stoner type characters? How about Shaggy?
So much to look forward to. I do wonder what kid from CHS was manning that fast food window though.
How old is Twi in this? You said she jumped two grades, but I don't remember how old she should be.
Welcome back! You and the story were dearly missed. I love these insight and character-building chapters so much. I'm so so so excited for the plot train in a few weeks! I've never wanted to be hit by a train so bad
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Twi's about 16, I believe.
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How dare you make me excited for things I want to know, I'm watching you!
YOU MADE ME DO THIS!!!
Glad to see you back! Can't wait for the ... as Rarity would call it, "A FASHION SHOW!"
I especially like how mental-Sunset is interacting with Twilight being a voice for ways in getting real-Sunset soaked. It's funny cause Twilight think it is her own self-conscious creating a manifested version of her girlfriend to help keep her grounded when we all know Magic is the real cause. I'm excited for what comes next.
And this is how we know this is fiction. XD
Lots of plot ahead?
Damn the torpedoes, full steam ladies. We'll gee 'em blood'n'vinegar tae gee us another glimpse o' our our lassies bein' all adorable'n'relatable. Puir good vibes an' a fair well helping of skelped arse fer the wee shadowy gits plottin' agains' 'em.
Aww, glad to see Twigles getting to have a fun day out.
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This is correct. Bob-cut is what we decided to call Karens in universe, as a nod to the Karen hairstyle.
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I...dont do well with them, no. And Tbh, I'm...not a huge scooby-doo fan in general. I understand what it is and its target audience, which is very much not me, but I find it formulaic, predicatable, and uninspired in most of its incarnations. Its the equivalent of mental junk-food to me. Edible, but not providing any benefit.
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He was trying to figure out why the Princess was wearing glasses and why she didn't say hi.
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*chuckles* I'm glad to see everyone is still excited, despite how long this story has become.
I fairly expect people will go ballistic with what's about to come down the pipeline.
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I'm a terrible person, playing with your emotions, I know. *hides carrot on a stick* Just the worst.
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Yes, that was the joke. It went through about a dozen iterations before we settled on the flufflepuff reference.
*rubs paws together* i'm excited to see the comments explode with whats coming. and yes, there does seem to be something...otherworldly about the mental sunny.
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Or just taking place in 2014. :P
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Thank you for making me laugh. I needed that.
And yes, lots of plot ahead, including one thing people have been on the edge of their seats for, and a huge plot point reveal. Oh, and villainous evilness. And five chapters of double date. And the return of Glamour Shot.
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Even if about half of it was Cady embarrassing her. :P
Cyborg Amazons from Alpha Centauri sounds absolutely horrible and I want to see it. Makes me think of Ice Pirates or Barbarella.
I'll have to admit most of my knowledge that I have when it comes to women shopping for intimates comes from my wife or from my college friend, Autumn, who I borrow a lot of personality from in my writing of adult Sunset. Seriously, put her in a red and yellow flame wig and she IS Sunset Shimmer. Watching Twi and Cady interact was enjoyable. Also, I find it interesting that Sunset and Twilight are researching ancient human myths and lore in their spare time. These two nerds.
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I'll be honest, I was fair well sloshed when the chapter came out and I posted that, quite frankly, I'm shocked it's legible XD. Still, a phenomenal chapter as always, and I think, fairly sure, the end of the date is where I'm going to put a marker, and do what I've done before, start a re read.
I did the same thing with the new years scene too.
Take care of yourself Maj, and as always can't wait for the new chapter, you guys do great work.
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I wanted the movie titles to sound as ridiculous as possible. Im glad I succeeded.
Truth be told, i hate shopping. Im not a good example of being female. But i have heard some hilarious tales over the years and been privy to a few trips to Victoria’s secret when i was in high school and our mall had one.
And yes, our two dorks have been reading mythology for a while now—its come up a few times, that they like reading together, and myths are a subject they can both enjoy.
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Youre a much better drunk typer than me, friend!
I am glad youre still enjoying the story. Its running a lot longer than i thought it would, and I wirry that people might get bored with it. Or intimidated by the length.
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I don't think you should worry about the length of the run as long as the quality is there, you know?
Like, oh no, big long story maybe scary to some, but honestly, it's quality storytelling, quality characterisation, quality writing, and I'm personally happier with engaging, enjoyable, lengthy stories than I am with shorter ones that leave me wanting more out of the worlds pace.
I also think you've done masterfully in always having us readers get a little bit of bone to chew what with some of the constant 'big questions' bopping about. You know, the 'When will Sunny and Sparky hook up', or the 'when will Sparky come out", and 'when will Sparky meet Sunnys friends'.
Even if they take a bit to start rolling you overlaps the topics and interweave them so that we always get the next step of the story, the next bone to chew while waiting. Never giving too much info, but always giving just enough to tide us over until the next chapter gets released.
That and the slow drip feed and ever growing presence of the BBEG has been exciting as fuck. It's rare for me to get so dis-excita-pointed that a Fictional BBEG isn't real and giving me a reason to beat their face in, but man I haven't even truly met the bastard and I'm already excited to see how much their evil disappoints me of their behaviour which then excites me cause then I'll like want to beat their ass but then disappoints me because man, I should really work on my defaults for choosing violence XD
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It means a lot to hear you say that, because wow, what a confidence boost about my Storytelling abilities. Despite me having things in common with Sunset’s personality, I…dont always believe my work is up to snuff. I know I’m writing “the story i’d want to read” and that its done wonders for my own abilities as a writer and storyteller, but sometimes I look at it, at how so many other stories do way better, and I doubt myself. Like…theres even the sting of how a couple of those people on this site who comment on literally every sunset or sciset story have never even poked their nose in here…
And i feel childish about it, being stung that some of them have never even bothered with any of my work, especially with how many wonderful readers I do have, that comment weekly without fail… i feel ungrateful and stupid, even as I find myself in my own head with wondering if I am really any good. (The plight of the creative soul, I know.)
So hearing this really boosts my spirits, more than i can effectively explain.
And yeah, i try to pace reveals, tidbits, character interactions…i want every chapter to have SOMETHING important in it, even if its just someone else’s perspective of our grumpy little unicorn. Because…i read even more than i write, and sweet goddess, i despise filler in literature. Or uncompelling characters. Or purple prose that says fuck all.
As for our villains….
I can say without a doubt that what follows after the correspondence chapter is going to absolutely blow your goddamned mind in the best way. I fully expect people to go apeshit over the course of the 4-5 chapters there. I have made full use of the two decades long RP with my spouse involving angels and demons to lean hard into how to write monsters, and whats coming up is one of the first times I actually have taken the gloves off and sought to capture the concept of “utter, irredeemable evil.”
Cousin Donny and his Furnace have nothing on us.
Or just a random CHS student wondering why the pony princess is doing a ride-bye of the local Hayburger equivalent.
yeaaaaah... about that....
Funny how Cadance didn't mention that said school is the same one Sunset goes to. I mean, didn't Sunset just go through how she was offered the Friendship Games team leader position, or did she not name-drop Celestia and Luna's names? (or did Twilight just not make the connection here?)
Given that this fanfic is very long and still being updated meaning it may be a long time between the reader reading each chapter, I would say that skipping these recaps isn't the best idea. Plus, giving characters a chance to recount the same events to different characters in different ways might further reinforce their personality and relationships! Of course, a recap doesn't need to be long-winded, but a little one would be appreciated.
Anyway, love the story :)