Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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Establishing limits is definitely important. Now I wonder if those embers of magic are some magical bonding of the oath Sunset just made, or if she accidentally just gave Twilight magic... Or maybe it’s something else entirely! I’m so curious lol.
This chapter was really beautiful. The level of trust the two of them have in each-other is really just so lovely. Though, as you mentioned in the author's notes, and from what we saw, Twiggles not dealling with her trauma isn't going to end well.
Thanks for the chapter!
It's easy to get caught up in the physical need that your body is telling you. I'm glad to see them trying to feel their way through this. I had a girlfriend who we got intimate a little too quickly and later when we were trying to actually be a couple we kept butting heads because we didn't talk things out as much as we should have. Water under the bridge now.
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Yus, boundaries and limits are super important in a relationship. Knowing whats okay and not okay with a partner is necessary to keep a relationship healthy.
As for the magic.. well...youll see...
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I really wanted to convey the sense of how strongly the girls bonded—while this universe currently lacks the “turned into she demons from too much magic, lots of bad feelings, and not enough friends” as an ice breaker and commonality, they did meet up at a point that was highly stressful when both of them were alone, distressed, and emotionally vulnerable. That set the stage for this kind of trust, for so many reasons.
And no, Twilight not dealing with her trauma in a healthy manner is a definite problem that will cause more problems. Stuffing all that nastiness into a box and shoving it into the corner of her mind is bad for her.
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Hope you enjoyed it!
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The hardest part is finding the balance really—the characters are teenagers, yes, but at the same time, they are trying to take it slow because they are both fairly intelligent, rational people, who are more afraid of losing the connection between them than anything. Its always been this pet peeve of mine, to read a story where people go from their first meeting to “i love you forever” in a span of a month. Yes teens move quickly but the ones who move that fast are broken up a week later. Its not love, its not healthy, and it sets unrealistic expectations to people who think thats how healthy relationships work.
And i think, at the end of the day, i want the various relationships—romantic, familial, and platonic—to feel like they could really happen, to have a wide variety of interpersonal interactions, especially those that are outside the “norm” and say yes, these are all real and they are valid. Its also why the relationships have flaws, even if you dont see them, and some interpersonal relationships are bad. (*cough*Rarity’s parents*Cough*)
Im just glad people seem to like the slower burn, more natural progression of the relationship between the girls. Part of me was worried that the tag and the rating would bring people here who were eager for them to get to the main event, as it were.
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Wow! Rereading it? Im flattered! :)
Mmm... my foreshadowing sense is tingling...
Pssst... hey, Sunset, ya remember that conflict that's tearing you inside? wink nudge
Cadance pops up from inside the laundry hamper "I've been summoned!"
Mmm... I wonder if this is her prey instincts resurfacing a bit... (assuming ponies evolved from prey animals).
Belly rubbbssss!
Now I really want to see Sci Twi (still human) getting to see Sunset as a pony~
Other people have commented on SciTwi's avoidance so I won't repeat.
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That Cadence line had me snort soda out of my nose. Well played.