Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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And somewhere, out there in the city... A cute little nerd is reading her instruments and pondering what it could all mean. I love stupid little voice because as I'm sure many could admit we all have some degree of that.
Uh oh, Sunset, run for it!
That said, a worthy end to what one might call the opening movement, to follow the theme of the chapter. The pieces have been set, and the game shall now commence. I eagerly, and nervously (for Sunset's sake), anticipate seeing where you go now that things are well and truly set up.
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I try very hard to keep the characters true to their established personalities while still fleshing them out and making them feel like real people.
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Oh dont worry. Theres a Twilight Sparkle Interlude coming up that will help fill in the blanks on what our adorable nerd has been doing this week. *cackles*
And yes, part of my favorite thing about writing from Sunsets perspective is her back and forth with the stupid voice. A lot of times it proves to just say what we are all thinking.
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*grins* the board is almost set. There are a few pieces left to set up, but...soon. Yesssss. Soooooon. Though, I promise, Sunny here will get a LITTLE downtime before things get bad again.
Sunny being all giddy for when she got her horn back was just too precious for words. Seriously.
And, Celly suffering PTSD from what the Sirens did to her. I hope Sunset's going to be able to help her and Lulu.
Vinyl's car as upgraded by Sci-Twi would be frighteningly cool.
There's no such thing as a harmless teenage girl. Ask any teenage boy.
(I've been looking for an excuse to use that line!)
WEll, it's finally over, now for the *real* part, dealing with all the mess...
Can't wait to see the PoV of Principals Celestia an Luna.
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She's a unicorn at heart. Look at how Princess Twilight freaks out in the first EqG movie because her horn is gone (or how its implied that Tempest Shadow is alienated and ostracized because of her shattered horn). You can't tell me that Sunset wouldnt have some sort of intense emotional response to getting her horn back. Its such a core part of a unicorn's identity and how they interact with the world.
And yes, PTSD incoming. For more than just Celestia.
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Upgraded? Sparky would build her own Autobot from scratch. Probably figure out a way to power it with magic. (You gotta know her brother showed her Transformers. He's a huge nerd too.) ....I'm now having horrible images of her turning Sunset's bike into a Transformer. Ow. My brain.
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This is fair...but I suppose compared to being mind controlling, sadistic, pseudo-psychic emotiphages bent on world domination, the average, petty machinations of a teenage girl is not even in the same playing field?
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Oh yeah. Its a mess. A huge mess. One that isn't going to just...be ignored the way the formal was. Nope. But hey, that's ultimately the theme of the story--Choices and Consequences.
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I wasn't referring to petty machinations but to the indomitable Magical Female Powers(tm) by which they enchant us and make us their slaves.
Come to think of it, there's not much difference, is there?
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Oh you were talking about bidding Breastitude. ;P fair enough.
Got to say great chapter and I have to agree sunset doing the guitar riff and everything was so adorable and she deserves a big hug, but not from me I would be to shy, and I loved sunsets and lunas talk in this felt so real and I hope Luna understands and realizes that it wasn’t her fault,(I might have missed subtle or unsubtle things so please forgive me) great writing as usual
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>:}
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Glad you're enjoying it. We'll see more soon enough with Celestia and Luna's feelings about this whole...magic...mess. ;}
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Yeah, get the feeling "Mirror earth is Cybertron" if that happens!
Not gonna lie, glad that that's over. I like the movie mostly because of the songs and the Dazzlings, but the stupid in the mane six and Sunset is annoying as heck. As close as this follows the movie it gave me the same feeling. Since there is a voice trying to make Sunset see sense even more so. Anyway, still really enjoying the story overall so on to the next chapter.
You're never gonna break this part of me... You're never gonna bring me down!
I also thought Sunny saying "I can also play guitar!" was beyond adorable