Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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Unsurprisingly to no one, Shimmy's part succubus.
I mean with her stereotype of eating like a glutton every single bit of cheap fast food under the sun and still having a killer figure, that was to be expected. But let's be real, what kind of succubus has casual fire manipulation?
WE GOT IT! WE HAVE HER HERITAGE!
The darkness thinks Sunny-buns is a succubus? Boy, has that bastard miscalculated.
She's no mere succubus oh evil one. She's the Phoenix, the fire of rebirth. She's the prodigal sun. And she's your daybreak.
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A succubus raised by a goddess of fire.
I may be getting my fictions crossed, so please let me know if any of this has been countered already.
Sunset is an orphan in Equestria.
Sunset has never found her counterpart on this side of the mirror.
One night, many years ago, a woman races across the city. She flees her "partner". A misnomer of the highest order. No man as controlling and possessive as he, could ever value her as his equal. She carries with her, her greatest possession. The only thing worthy of thanks from him. A newborn child. Swaddled in old towels and upset from hunger, the baby cries out as they cross the school yard. She tries vainly to hush the child, but it is too late. He has heard. In a flash of lightning on a clear night he appears before her; his bellow the thunder that follows. His possessive eyes only for the child. His creation. He is the mastersmith; she is but the forge used to create his greatest work. She sees the glow of power in the Incubus' eyes as his gaze settles on the bundle in her arms. In a rush of fear she pivots back towards the statue she just passed, hoping to dodge around it and gain some distance. Two steps and a sudden blow leaves her legless as she falls towards the monument. Her arms open as her greatest treasure flies toward the concrete base of the proud equine. Her already sightless eyes do not see the rainbow of colors as the infant passes through the ephemeral barrier separating the worlds.
An Incubus stands in the schoolyard and stares at the barrier that he knows will destroy him utterly if he tries to cross. He rages once, loudly. And disappears with his broken kiln in another flash of light. Those who look out their windows at the empty campus briefly contemplate the clear skies and ponder that it almost seemed like the thunder came before the lightning that time.
You know, the more I hear about Twilight being indirectly belittled by Cinch, the more I want Sunset and co. to RainBOOM that school to the ground.
If the Dark Master thinks Sunset's gonna be eliminated, well... we're gonna need an encore of Sunset's comeback from "Welcome to the Show" 'cause Sunny's not going down without a fight. Not with the power of Harmony on her side. She may have been a demon once, but now she's a firey pony-earred angel.
Knowing that Celestia and Luna's family are fae fighters or demon hunters of sorts, their surname makes sense within the context of the story. After all, what is the antithesis of darkness but light? And what better to represent light than the sun? I'm curious to know how much of their heritage the sisters know, and if they'll be able to provide some insight to Sunset of what she's up against.
This also brings to mind Cadance, who seemed unaffected by the sidhe's influence, making me wonder if her family and ancestors fought fae as well.
Heh. I laughed and snerked at big breasted succubus. And yeah, that does make some sense given how she's always felt "different" than other ponies. It would check a lot of boxes.
Ohhhh, Celestia and Luna have and are descended from ancient magic. Niiiice.
I feel a little bad for the former nurse. I knew she was done for but eternal suffering... some people that thought is the only reason they don't go ballistic on the world.
YAY cover art. I know I talked with you about the idea of it sometime ago I'm glad that someone is going to be able to actually come through for you.
Personally I’m really excited to see Sunsets heritage come to light as I have a few theories on it. I know this worlds Celestia was suggested to have a child and then something happened, plus with no counterpart being mentioned- especially with Sunset apparently not even thinking about, I’ve always wondered if orphan sunset correlated to that.
As for her being called a Succubus, I don’t think she is. Yes it’s popular in stories that she eats like, well a teenager, and somehow has a mini kardashin body but with self defense and good workouts by her side I can see it. In this story at least, as it’s been established that she does both regularly. Though I personally do like when the main seven are described with more natural bodies, as I try to do in my own stories. I like the idea of her somehow being human Phoenix. As always I’m very excited for truths about this complex version of Sunset to be revealed! And if I’m completely wrong well then that’s the fun!
Edit: Now that I’ve been thinking about it and read up again about Succubi, it kinda makes sense. A succubus is basically a demon that has ✨intercourse✨ with sleeping bodies. I just realized Twilight has a lot of uhhh.. wet dreams…. Also way back in the early chapters when Sunset claimed Twilight as hers and her eyes were all glowing!!! That was marking!!!! And sunset being demon type creature in Twilights dreams. It’s all making sense!!!!! I take back what I said. My you have surprised me with this realization.
Also yay cover art! That’s so exciting cause I’ve drawn so many of my own fan arts from this fic lol.
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Isnt it?
And gods, its been like 15 years since I played DMC. I was mostly drawing on years and years of Storytelling for some very unsettling stuff.
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Indeed.
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It does seem a tad more complex than that, doesnt it?
And yes, that might be something a commander might consider, but perhaps what he stands to lose is the win condition rather than just an asset.
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Apparently more surprising than I thought it would be, haha.
And yes, thats the joke—people write her as eating like a standard teenager (IE a living food disposal unit) but somehow also impossibly sexy and attractive and almost too perfect physically.
Demons are typically associated with fire. Concubi are no exception—and thats before taking into account Elemental Fire’s association with “passion, anger, and determination.”
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Nope. Her genetic heritage is still an unsolved mystery.
Fun guess though.
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Maybe they are. Maybe they arent. *sips cocoa* Or maybe theres more to it than meets the eye.
Though…yes, they might have miscalculated on her threat level.
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*chuckles*
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Uh…I think you are confusing my story with someone else’s? *scratches head*
Dont get me wrong, youve written up a clever intro to a story, and boy, I’d probably read the hell out of it (Pun Intended), but its not something from this story.
Though I will state that both “Sunset is an orphan” and “Sunset has been unable to locate her human counterpart” are both objectively true statements…they just are disconnected from each other and from “Sunset turned into a demon at the Fall Formal.”
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I figured you’d get a chuckle out of that, given everything.
Sunset is different from most ponies, yes, though that might be a nature vs. nurture argument in some ways.
At the very least, human Luna and Celestia are descended from someone who pissed off the Fae. That never goes well for anyone.
As for the nurse’s fate…yeah…that was the reaction I was hoping for from some of the readers.
And yes, the art is going to be amazing. I cant wait for it to be done so I can show it off.
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*chuckles* its definitely going to get veeeery ugly, yes indeed.
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Sunset’s genetic heritage is completely uninvolved in this part, unfortunately. That mystery remains just that, a mystery. Its been fun to watch people guess about it though. As for how the hints about Principal Celestia’s past may or may not tie in to the orphan sunset and lack of human sunset, I always welcome fan theories and speculation though. Its fun to read what people are guessing.
Yes, that can be true, about the exercise and workouts, but its honestly more true for teenage boys than teenage girls. Female hormones are not conducive to losing weight—just the opposite. And when a gal tones up and gets in shape and does lose weight through exercise, one of the places affected is her boobs.
*smirks* i had wondered if anyone would pick up on the correlation of “saucy dreams” and other clues that have been around all along. Theres more clues—this was a reveal planned from chapter one on.
I didn't quite guess the type of demon still lurking in Sunset but I did guess there was one. I suppose Sunset is technically a light type version of one of those.
Feeling bad for the fae? Nah. That be something along the lines of feeling sorry for the lion if the wildebeest gores it after it tries to take it's calf, and then the rest of the pack killing the lion because it has become to weak to be of use. Only with fae, so that brings the knowledge that their way of thinking, morality, life experiences etc is completely alien to those of humans and vice versa.
A'righ' then, Ah've a plan boyos. Ah'm a mind tae go in, m'iron knuckleduster's in tow. Lock it up b'hind me. Ah'll nae need muir'n five tae rattle th' fae bint's bonce an' leave her spittin' her venom righ' out th' other side o'er face. Puir blood'n'vinegars all th' fool lass's earned, by th' time Ah'm done she'll well 'ave tha' lesson learned.
Pooka's, brownies, kelpies an' all fae, we Scots know iron'll let us have a gay auld day.
Anyhow, brilliant chapter to let me have more and more reasons to want to load up with iron, 12 gauge, hollowpoint, rifled slugs Maj. Good background and great solidifying of the threats and stakes.
Now, gaun an' gee us muir reason tae hate th' fae slag'n her wee shadowy git of a boss.
Awesome update!
That's when they realized, they done Ed up.
Eeeyup.
Funny how many are assuming she was a half demon and not more along the lines of a tiefling at worst or a demon bloodline Sorcerer who's long removed ancestor was a Succubus.
The other possibility is that her sins where leading her soul to become one upon her death and it being sent to thr Abyss, and the Elements simply showed her the fate that was xoming her way.
Either way, if it wasn't for the Batwings her being an Erinyes would have been fun.
As for feeling bad for the Fey? No, not even in the slightest. Given half a chance they would do that to any of us, or their "master" with a smile. Fear is all that keeps them in line. Fear they let control them. They are just as imprisoned as the souls they damaged, they just fool themselves into thinking otherwise. The only difference is while those poor souls have no choice, the Fey could walk out the door and never return, they are just to power hungry and scared to try.