Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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My gods, this chapter was cute. Like, the bonding moments between Twilight and Sunset we’re so sweet that I think they gave me a cavity. But of course, that only means that I very much so enjoyed reading it.
And the little highlights of Twi’s family were great, too. Especially that last bit. Jokes on them though since they’re already dating.
Anyway, I seriously love this story and can’t wait to read the next update!
Right, I was gonna make a "fix" joke but I think I already did that, so I'm just going to say this was a sweet chapter, which means things are gonna go wrong very soon. Because we know Sunset Shimmer can't be allowed to be happy~
I think I might need to start taking insulin, because I'm pretty sure I've just developed adorabetes. I mean Sunny and Twiggles are just too cute. And, that little moment of hyper-protectiveness she had at the end really shows just how strong her bond with Twi is.
Sunset's single-target sexuality for Twilight is an interesting plot point, because it is something that (despite being a giant SciSet shipper) I've wondered about. After all, Sunny's a unicorn, so unless something got re-written in her brain, being attracted to any human would be odd if her mind is still fundamentally Equestrian.
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The author is not responsible for any dental bills or medical expenses incurred because of the story. :P I am glad you're enjoying the little cutesy relationship moments in the story though, as well as the little bits with characters like the rest of the "Sparkle Family."
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I'm beginning to feel like your drug dealer, friendo. ;} Joking aside, yes. Don't get comfortable, Sunset! Shit's about to hit the fan again!
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>:} Aren't they just so goddamned cute together? And yes, Sunset is incredibly...protective...over what she sees as hers. Mmmhmm. Let's go with that word.
As for Sunset's sexuality in this story, it really came from my world building and the psychology of the fact that she's not human--she's not even originally "humanoid" which would at least include a similar bipedal body plan. Horses and humans have very little in common visually, given that equines are unguligrade quadrapeds designed for running in open terrain, while humans are plantigrade bipedal primates whose major body features came from an arboreal ancestor. So much about the anatomy is drastically different, and given that Sunset was born and raised for a good portion of her life (including her first stint through puberty) as a unicorn, psychologically, what she would be inclined to find attractive would be features her birth species finds attractive, things that both her original biology and her socio-cultural upbringing would have ingrained in her. Hormones can go a long way, but even hormones dont entirely overwrite psychology and higher thinking. I've already touched on it, but the touch of body dysphoria coupled with this unique attraction to the human Twilight will feature in Sunset's character growth, development, and psychological deep-dive, alongside a plethora of other things.
(Why, yes, I study psychology, sociology, and sexuality for fun--why do you ask? :P)
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I mean, if we really think about it, she's got a double whammy going on, in that she's both sexually and romantically attracted to Twi. Sexuality and romanticism are often conflated, but they are separate things. Its not a distinction that gets explored all that often, mostly because I think society at large are still trying to wrap their heads around the idea of sexuality being a spectrum, much less separate from the ability to fall in love or develop romantic interest in another.
Very adorable. It is a wonderful experience to share a loving tradition with someone who had none. I like how you incorporate how strong physically Sunset is. We've seen her sling a sledge hammer around like it were plastic, and pick up Pinkie Pie and not only swing her but also one arm carry her. Equestrian strength seeping through or just good physical shape regardless that woman would have one hell of a grip. Liiiiiittle creeped out by the "you're mine." At the end, but I get it.
Sunset Demon
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You raise a valid point, and are correct. It is a double whammy, in a lot of ways, but in this case, for Sunset, the two are linked. The physical attraction is a side effect of the romantic attraction. Among...other things which will be revealed in due time.
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Mmm...yes. Her strength is definitely more than one should find in a teen girl...There are...reasons forthat. Reasons that will be made clear. Eventually.
Oh yes. The possessive statements. I’m sure they are nothing to be concerned about.
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Hello, darkness, my old friend....
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Possession can be fun in a young relationship where you are both still trying to figure out each other's quirks. I have a fun find memory of being at a convention where my then fiance met my ex-girlfriend. There was only a little akwardness since it was not a bad break but my wife still made sure she always had a hand in me, like marking her territory.
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In my experience, its...one of those delicate subjects and fine lines to walk that really depends on the dynamic involved. Not every relationship is the same, and every partner set is different. Some people, unfortunately, take it in a very unhealthy and negative way (poster child for abusive relationships, for example, or the abusive jerks who style themselves "doms" in the BDSM subcuture as a way to get away with being abusive jerks.) On the other hand, it can simply be part of a relationship that is intimate and meant with love and affection, or a way of reassuring a partner, or even playful and flirtatious.
I guess time will tell where the girls will fall, won't it? *winks and whistles innocently.*
Every single time, when there are Sunset and Twilight moments, I need to read it more than 100x times...and it still isn't enough
I can't wait to see and read, what else you got prepared in your sleeve
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Wow, rereading it already? I haven't even finished posting the first arc. I'm super flattered, friend.
Not going to spoil the truth of what happened to human Celestia, one way or another, because its... Well, honestly, I have plans to play things out in some of the side stuff going on. I can legitimately say, however, that Principal Celestia was not related to, nor has she ever encountered at any point, a human-born Sunset Shimmer, in any fashion. And as for our unicorn, she is, in fact, Equestria born and blooded. I have her origins worked out thoroughly, and some of it will come up during the story. (And if not there, then a side story I have planned that is nothing but slice-of-life shorts of her growing up in Equestria with the Princess, longer versions of some of the flashbacks and other tidbits that get referenced here and there.)
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To be fair, it's not just teens. Its Gilda. And Lightning Dust. Neither one of them is winning prizes for intellect.
Slightly concerned by Sunset's choice of words towards the end of the chapter but I'm hoping nothing major comes of it.
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You never now
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i dont think thats a 'your mine' as in no one will ever get to be around you and you will forever be with me, but more of a 'your mine' as in a more loving and protective way, at least thats the way i ended up reading it xP
See! See!
Fucky sleep/dream shit is still here.
I swear, even if the Longshot is a Longshot, the quirky sleep/dream shit keeps happening!