Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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Yay for flower language. It's such a useful romantic tool and absolutely something that would be in pony Sunset's background.
I'm going to straggle Wallflower if she decide to take this happiness away. It'll be BEYOND petty at that point. No redemption for her if she decide to go through with making Twilight forget Sunset
yeah because being secretive about your relationship goes so well with leaving hickeys everywhere . .
that is the most romantic thing i have ever seen in my life it brought me to tears and i never cry so that's the biggest complement you will ever get. just try not to make it a habit.
Another one of those chapters that makes me really mad at Celestia. All ponies deserve love, yet she failed to give her adoptive daughter any. Indeed, Celestia renounced Sunset as her daughter. While Celestia might not legally be Sunset's parent, her actions toward Sunset earned her the responsibility, one which she did not even recognize or care for.
Some advice for Sunset. If Twilight had asked you to stop, what would you have done? That is the difference between you and past you, between you and some of the men Twilight has encountered.
Well, we've established who's seme and who's uke. Not that it's much of a surprise.
This went from cute, to sweet, to adorable, to thoughtful, to sensual, to erotic, to holy crap I think they are about to pop! Honestly, no disclaimer in needed. I recall those first few dives into intimacy well and it is exactly like this. You are excited and scared and driven by a carnal hunger that you swear is unholy and it is indeed a rabbit hole. However, as has been stated these two have great communication on their limits and a strong friendship foundation. It helps, immensely. Also, I laugh so hard everyone next to me gave me looks when Twi grabbed her ass and she made horse noises. It's just such a funny thing to imagine.
Twi is trying really fricken hard to broadcast her and Sunset's relationship to the world without telling anyone, isn't she?
As much as I want her to be able to say it, and not just walk around with love bites for all the world to see. Sunset doing it for both of them might end up being how this is going to have to go.
Most of this is Twi's own brain. But I can't help but feel that the dark magic isn't reinforcing her hesitancy too. Seems like one of many avenues such magic would use to cut off students from any support network they might have.
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Flower language is super fun, and so much more complex than most people realize, and I love using it in stories. Sunset coming from a culture where a complex and intricate language around plants (not just the flowers, but plants, since ponies can eat so many parts of many plants, including flowers) just was a cool idea we ran with. It'll probably come up periodically.
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Patience, young Padawan.
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Not sure if that was sarcasm or not? *tilts head* In case it wasnt, I will note that Twilight wears pretty high collar shirts outside of her pjs, and with Cadence as a sister, she very likely knows what concealer is, which women have used for decades to hide not just blemishes but also bruises, hickeys, and even signs of beatings and abuse. Theres also the fact that there is this whole undercurrent of "they arent really as subtle or secretive as they think..."
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Aww...I didn't mean to make you cry! *sends hugs and milkshakes* Still, I do take your compliment as one of the highest honor.
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Keep in mind you are hearing only things from Sunset's extremely limited Point of View, from a time when she was very young and likely either missed or didn't understand all of what went on around her. That doesn't mean Celestia wasn't in the wrong anywhere, but it does mean the story is likely more complex than what Sunset herself knows.
On the other hand, yes, this very question about "Would you have stopped if Twilight asked you to?" is an important one to ask. *gives a cookie*
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not gonna lie...I busted out laughing at this. As someone who went to Anime conventions a lot in the early 2000s, and read/watched yaoi/yuri/shonen-ai/shoujo-ai, I got this reference SO DAMNED HARD. Like "I own the Yaoi paddle" hard. Thank you for amusing the hell out of me.
You're absolutely more right than you know, fyi.
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Yeah, but I've already gotten a couple of....weird comments and pms at various points in the story's life from people who had...opinions...about different aspects of the writing and characterization. Or the activities the characters engaged in. I try to cover my bases from the get go though...just because it minimizes unpleasantness due to misunderstanding.
I am pleased to know that "Sunset makes horse sounds" made you laugh out loud.
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They are not as subtle as they think they are, though like I mentioned above, concealer is a thing, and queer youth learn ways to try and minimize public visibility of themselves pretty early.
And yeah, Sunset just saying it probably would be the easiest way, but Twilight is stubborn. Something about seven step plans or whatever.
Hmmm. *gives a cookie* You do get a reward for figuriing out a few things though, yes. The bad magic seems a part of this.
El mejor capitulo la verdad estaba destrozado de los capítulos anteriores dónde se pelearon. Pero este capítulo es como un dulce 10/10
On the topic of the plushies, I guess even something crudely made would have sentimental value when made by someone you love and care about. And the fact that Sunset still has Princess Sunbottom means she's still attached to it, and maybe even Princess Celestia, likewise.
Quite the menagerie of creatures Sunset had. I can pick out an ursa major or minor (depending on colour), a dragon that could be reminiscent of one of the teen dragons in FiM but more likely Dragon Lord Torch, an Abyssinian with possibly heterochromia (if the beads were different colours), a deer from Thicket, the deer kingdom, possibly King Aspen (or just a generic deer), and a manticore with an aurora-like name like Celestia's.
Sunset's gift was quite nice. I do like how her gifts are well-thought-out and are mostly homemade, much like her Christmas gifts prior.
If the flowers weren't a recreation, I'd be wondering if the CHS greenhouse had more Equestrian flora than just Fizzleberry bushes.
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Oh, I'm sure she does. With Candace as a SIL she would have too. Similarly with Sunset, her mean girls phase and Rarity.
But it more along the lines of does she want too? At school? After how Wallflower reacted definitely. But it wouldn't surprise me if she doesn't at home. Subconsciously wanting to get caught just to get it over with.
Granted I don't think her parents would confront her so it would probably fail.
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:}
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Most of them weren't specific individuals, just...generic equestrian beings...though there is a chance some of them were influenced by individuals Celestia may have known in her past. (5000+ years is a long time, after all). But yes, even something poorly made has value when its a thing made with love and heartfelt sincerity.
And yes, Sunset's gifts tend to be personalized because she comes from a culture where there isnt the massive over commercialization in most sectors of the society. Its also a culture that lacks mass production in most areas--no real factories, no heavy duty machinery. Most stuff is made by individuals, and what machines do exist are either powered by magic or the ponies themselves. So gifts would be of a more thought out, personal and homemade nature.
Plus Sunset is actually a sweet and empathetic person who wants people to like their gifts.
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P:retty much. There might be some subconscious bit there at home....but yes. Mom and Dad are deliberately ignoring the accidental signs because they are trying to allow her that control and agency over something personal.
Just wanted to say thanks to the author "Majadin" and everyone else involved thus far in the creation of this wonderful piece of literature.
I'll remain hungrily eager for more!~
Considering Cadance is fairly involved in their relationship, I really hope at some point she sits them both (but specifically Sunset) down and gives them the old sex positive rundown. I feel like Sunset needs some reassurance that a sub/dom dynamic in a relationship is perfectly healthy as long as boundaries are established and it's not taken to extremes. Obviously she has no clue how do deal with human sexuality, and I honestly doubt she has as good of a handle on pony sexuality as she thinks she does.
Everythings going better than expected on a lot of fronts. This worries me deeply. Keep up the good work.
Almost caught up, be glad when I can stop feeling like I'm blowing up your comments section. Hard to stop myself to be honest, I'm pretty invested at this point
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Makes you wonder how smart this dark magic is. Obviously in Twilight's case, with supportive parents, it would be a healthy and safe step to come out to them. Would it be healthy and safe to come out in general, knowing the kind of social environment her school is? Was it influencing Twilight during her conversation with Wallflower, pushing her toward the idea that Wallflower was talking about her relationship with Sunset? What does the magic do to a person in the opposite situation, with bigoted/socionormative obsessed parents? Encourage them to come out? Food for thought I guess.
I read into this that Twi might be a bit of a sub leaning person, and Sunset clearly has some dom desires. I hope Cadence can tell and teach that it's possible to do that healthily as long as its consensual and always something the two of them talk about.
I intended to comment later on and will but absolutely adore this story and Twiset. Stupidly I find myself wishing I had a relationship and family as supportive and nice as the Sparkle household.
So hyped for Friendship Games and Midnight Sparkle. Which I imagine will be heartwrenching.