Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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Nice chapter but we also need pis of the adorable kitty.
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That I can provide!
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From everything we can find, he seems to be about 7-8 weeks old.
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Dawwww.... Well here's hoping you manage to get your kitty acclimated to hugs and cuddles like I did mine.
Oh poor Sunny. Currious what the deal with the red blotches are. Are they stigmata from the shadows, or a manifestation of the demon. Guess we'll find out.
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Or maybe since she was trashing so much, just from hitting the bedpost and such? Probably wishful thinking on my part.
Oof, this chapter was rough. Gives me flashbacks to the breakdown Sunset had quite a while back at her locker. You really know how to portray someone... Not so much hitting rock-bottom (that's usually more someone's own fault) as hitting the bottom of the pit of despair so to say. You really make her go to the wringer in this story, I must say. I can already tell this will most likely be a story I will re-read many times after it's been completed, but there will be some chapters I dread reading every time (just as there will be chapters I will look forward to greatly everytime).
Yeah that was some Grade A trauma. Body wrecked, throat savaged, mind tormented. That's going to be tough to explain especially when you tell your GF oh, I saw you as a possessed winged demon who tortured and murdered me. No biggy. Some truth needs to come to light for sure though.
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Working on it. Right now he's a bit of a spicy purrito. He's less agitated by us being close and now more frantic if we get too far away. Poor little baby.
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Red blotches that are forming bruises. THat was a very violent nightmare, it seems.
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:}
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Over half of storytelling is really the ability to make your audience feel what you want them to feel, to hit them with the right emotions at the right time. I'm pleased to know that I succeed in both portraying the characters emotions the way I'm going for, and for eliciting the right audience reaction! :P
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Just another day in the life of Sunset Shimmer, right?
awwwwwww
sunset going nonverbal and being handled so well by twi and fam
so very good
and oh boy i can understand sunset's fears but at the same time my only thought is "oh wow if she's a demon then once she comes to terms with it she'll be awesome"
because demons? i'm a big fan, love them to bits, red skin, cool pupils, horns and all
and turning demon sunset loose on crystal prep's overlords? wow that'd be such a lovely fight sequence, a fantastic pyrokinetic hellscape
though i highly doubt "just let her loose" is a very good plan as crystal evil inc has had lots of prep time vs sunset's "i just figured this out", and while beginners luck can be potent i wouldn't rely on it when twilight is on the line.
that's not presently relevant though as even if this hunch turns out correct there'll be lots of soul searching and character development before she'll even consider harnessing it
looking forward to whatever direction this goes!
also i will never get off train "sunset needs to come clean before her tower of cards topples on top of twilight" because god damnit sunset, if she doesn't it's going to go so much worse than just explaining it early
Ok, with all those questions Sunset has for Princess Celestia, I am desperate for a reunion, most because I think Celestia misses her Little Sun, and she could possibly put Sunset's mind at ease on some things.
Let the demon loose, Sunset...
That ying yang analogy is getting disturbing