Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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Well these have been a nice 3 chapters. Sad to hear you are sick as a dog but seeing what will come of a fit Twilight will be interesting.
Well, good to see that some of her fellow Shadowbolts are at least trying to be good people in a pretentious, soul-sucking, private school. Also glad to see that those self-defense classes are coming along nicely for Twilight.
a terrifying day of gym
and a halfway decent conversation with indigo (who really appears to be causing problems purely by accident and may even be a decent person)
neat!
I'm curious about the meeting with Cinch. Will she or her Master know about Sunset? Will they know she destroyed the shades that were sent? Will they have sensed the magic?
I'm pretty sure Sunset's nightmare was brought on by the shades but I can't be certain.
I'm also curious about the Friendship Games. Not everybody from school knows Sunset and Twilight are from a different world. They won't make the connection to a human twilight. That puts Sunset on a timer, to either tell Sparky the truth or the entire school.
Either way things are going to get tense.
Ugggghhh locker room showers. Ugggghhh! The temple of teenage immaturity at its finest. Still, seeing Indigo act courteous and warning Twi... That was a nice unexpected addition.
Feel better soon, happy new year.
Well, good to see that Zap isn't a total ass. Just lacking in tact. Though, this whole thing isn't going to do Twilight many favors, especially in a hornet's nest like CPA.
Also, I hope for your swift recovery. Stay safe.
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Extremely silly. What force would orchestrate something like that?
And yes, the realization that she's dating a unicorn will ultimately be glorious.
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*rainbow hands* Imaaaaagine. And yes, Sunset would totally snack on flowers. In fact, I imagine she does--there are a number of edible flowers that humans can eat.
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I don't think feeding her unicorn will stop the fire. Its always been burning since the world's been turning. :P
And yes, drawing from my experiences, or the experiences of others is useful. There's an extensive amount of research that goes into writing something well, and I cannot overstate how important both parts of that--research and personal experiences--are for any kind of creative writing.
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Thankfully, it seems to have just been a bad cold, so I'm on the mend! :} Glad you're still enjoying our story!
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LIke anything in life, things are very rarely completely black and white. There's always shades of gray and technicolor too. Each of the students at the school has their own motivations and personalities, just like anywhere else.
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Indigo gets very little voice or screen time in the movie, but other than her hostility "defending" her team from the "enemy", she and Lemon Zest are shown as the least hostile and toxic to Twilight. She comes off more as an even more tactless and emotionally oblivious counterpart to Dash more than anything, and thats where I've decided to take her. She's exuberant, gung-ho, but tactless and loud and doesnt always think ahead.
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That's a plethora of million dollar questions, right there. I guess you'll just have to wait and see...
Tick-Tock, Sunny...
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Arent they? Like whoever thought that they were a good idea clearly forgot being a teenager. Because that kind of crap is a recipe for bullying and abuse and ugliness.
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Indigo: Foot taste gud.
And no, CPA is a viper's nest, so the rumor's that the reclusive nerd has a "boyfriend" is going to be a mess.
Honestly, when it came to the Shadowbolt girls, only Sour Sweet and Sunny Flare seemed bad. Indigo Zap seemed like Rainbow Dash (maybe turned up to 11) but still decent and friendly, Sugarcoat was just blunt and not all that bad and Lemon Zest was like a mix between Pinkie and Vinyl Scratch, and also didn't seem that bad.
I like that Indigo complimented Twi's improvements under Sunset and was decent enough to give her a warning about the bad girls.
Indigo and Dash are two peas in a pod i swear. I'm planning to write Rainbow Dash's dialogue in a similar fashion to be honest. Have Dash refer to Sunset as simply "Shimmer" lol
im half tempted to ramble abt similarities i have with sunset and human twilight but im gonna hold that until later (temptation and me dont work out well together )