Every action taken is like dropping a pebble in a pond, creating ripples that extend ever outward. Every choice has consequences, good and bad... Putting on a Crown may have changed Sunset Shimmer's life...but it also Changed two worlds...
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Ooooooooooh so hyped to see you’re back! Looking forward to what you’ve got planned with Wallflower, definitely a different take on her that I’m super intrigued to see unfold. Also while your description of her nasty burrito was top notch, my stomach most definitely does NOT thank you for it lol.
Dang, I have half a mind to reread the story now because I can't quite remember what we left on last time...
Ohhh how I've missed reasing your writing. As always, it's extremely pleasing and sets the scene very easily in my mind. The way you write Twilight's inner dialogue and thoughts is so on brand, I almost forgot how great you are at writing these characters. Also Wallflower! It's her! I wonder how she fits into the role her, seeing as she goes to Twilight's school here and not CHS (at least for now???). Can't wait to see how that works out!
As you know, I've been so excited for more Rubicon and I'm already finding myself drawn into this world. I am looking forward to seeing how the story progresses and how Twi's research is going to play a part on this, and I especially want to know what she'll think, and what Sunset will have to say when she (inevitably) hears about this. Yay for Rubicon!!!
Very glad to see that you're back. Hopeful for some nice sunlight fluff. Also, a bit of intrigue as Sunset fights a losing battle to keep her girlfriend, magic, and origin secret.
Oh, so Wallflower's at CP? That's a bit of a twist.
Of course, now Twi's got data on the paracausal phenomenon, so no telling what's going to go wrong. Both socially or magically.
Welcome back I miss this story and can't wait till the next chapter your story is one of my favorite next to Airship Mauled
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I do apologize to your stomach. I'm glad the nauseating description was effective. :P
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Do eet.
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I'm super happy with the way Twilight is coming out for Arc 2. We've been working super hard on her and her interactions and internal character voice for months--its half of what takes so long, because I can't write her like I do Sunset. I can write Sunny off the cuff, but Twilight is really a three person effort.
As for Wallflower...You'll see. She's here for the long haul, and we tried really hard to take the bits with her from canon to make a believable teenager out of her. I'm just hoping that she'll...come off the way we want.
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There will be fluff. Lots of fluff. And drama. That too. And trouble. With magic. And Twilight being investigative.
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Betcha didn't see that coming. :P Things are happening. Bruhahahah.
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Updates will be weekly, glad to have you back reading! :}
new rubicon!!
hmmm. educational trauma or dream sequence?
like it's obviously the former, the question remains of if the latter also applies
edit after finishing the chapter: oops! all trauma!
"i'm studying magi- i mean 'unusual electromagnetic signals originating from the rival high school'. totally not magic."
oh hi! at crystal prep this time :3 (if this is canon i do not know, i haven't watched that special)
heheheh
thank you mental sunset
well well well, now that'll be fun!
excellent first chapter to the arc, will eagerly await the rest
I was just thinking of rereading my favorite chapters again when this came out, yay!
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Yes, new chapters!
Trauma, dream sequence, something worse, bad eyesight, who knows.
What? Magic? Dont be silly!
Wallflower was entirely a chs student in the canon. Im taking a different track with her.
Mental Sunny is very helpful.
Glad you liked the first real chapter of Arc 2!
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Yeah…um, hi. Author here. I appreciate your attempt to help explain, but just a couple quick notes.
1. I kinda already answered this question for the reader, back when they posted.
2. I appreciate the well thought out explanation, but its not particularly accurate to the story, or the universe I’m setting up. I have things firmly in mind and worked out cosmologically, but at present I have not shared it because of story reasons.
3. The actual major themes of the story are twofold: Destiny VS. Choice, and Choice & Consequences. Thats the secondary reason I haven’t talked overmuch about the greater cosmology.
4. To quote a movie I once saw “the greatest irony of existence is that the concept of Good would be totally impotent without the contrast of Evil.” Order and Chaos, Light and Dark, even things like up and down, you have to have both in order for either to have meaning….otherwise all you have is a flat line with no variation. Besides, who is to say there isnt a little chaos in Order, and a little order to Chaos?
That all being said, the point, as I stated before, of what the voice was saying was not about fate versus choice. In that moment, it was making the point that she is not Twilight, and Twilight is not Sunset Shimmer. They were always different ponies, and would always be their own selves. Just as a fish will never fly like an eagle, because it is a fish. It was, at the time, perhaps a lesson Sunset wasnt ready to understand, but perhaps in time she will.
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Yes! Updates are once again weekly! :) hope you enjoyed!
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Actually 'started' is the verb I wanted. It has a meaning to "give a small jump or make a sudden jerking movement from surprise or alarm." I do appreciate you trying to inform me of errors though--I am not perfect at catching all of them, though I do my best in editing. :}
I love Twilight's mental Sunset acting as a guide but I'm also a tad concerned and Shadowbolt Wallflower whose friends with Sci-Twi this ought to be interesting.
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While the memory stone shouldn't be that far away from the portal, this does raise the idea of Wallflower wanting a different senpai to notice her.
Twilight not knowing who Sunset is at this point in their relationship would be a heck of a gut punch.
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who said it'll be Wallie who erases that memory? it could be Moondancer out of petty jealousy
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Mental Sunny is incredibly helpful.
Wallflower? Trouble? Maybe. Maybe not. Guess you'll have to see.
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...It does open the potential for some very different motivations for Wallflower Blush, doesn't it? Or a lack of motivation, as the case may be. Guess you'll have to wait and see.
Twilight not knowing her would...really wreck Sunset's day, wouldn't it?
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Don't worry, there are plans for Moondancer as well. :} She's doing a year abroad at the moment, so she wont be back for a while, but...there are plans for her in the story.
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*shrugs* I mean, it was just one of those funny images, mostly. Nothing more to it than a bit of humor. I was trying to show the two of them bonding in good ways as well as through their overlapping trauma issues.
Sweeeeeeeeet. Excellent first chapter. Poor Wallflower, ignored even by her family. That's just ouch. Guess Twi forgot to take it slow when the excitement took hold.
Interesting you transferred not just Wallflower from CHS to CPA, but Lyra as well.
Security on the real life power grid is so crap that a query would probably get the info Twilight gathered.