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Makani


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Hey! Thanks for the fav!

2448185 I haven't read it personally but I think that the sequel to Project Horizons is at least partially set in Zebrica if you need more ideas. I'm looking forward to it :twilightsmile:

2448177 absolutely agree, Ive been busy lately but I do read lots of stories (mainly foe:twilightsheepish:) to better my writing.

Nows a bit of a spoiler if you want to read:

The story right now is at it's 1° arc, so to speak. If you really like the zebra shamanism, wait until the 2° arc that takes place in Zebrica :trixieshiftright:

Also thanks for the watch! :yay:

2448167 I'll definitely keep reading because I absolutely love the shamanistic and spiritual aspect of the zebras and I hope the rest of the story goes well. Fallout Equestria - The Chrysalis is by far one of the best FoE fics I've ever read. I'm just about to put it over Project Horizons and the original FoE on my list of favorites and it's one of the few fics that I check the site for every day to see if there's a new chapter. The single best thing I think you can do to improve your own writing is to keep reading other stories and try to see what they did right or wrong. Not just the best stories either, I think all stories that anyone writes have a potential lesson in them. You need to see the story through the eyes of a reader to know if you're making a mistake and how to fix it.

2448165 coincidently, the next chapter will happen exactly what you described! :rainbowlaugh:

He'll shock his companions with his powers and this shock will stick with him for the rest of the story. As for the easy trust, basically, the only ponies that trust him are the ones he saved somehow, the others WILL freak out with his summons and some other surprises he has up his sleeves...

I hope you stick for the next chapter so you can tell me what you think! :pinkiehappy:

As for the Fallout: Equestria - The Chrysalis, I've read the 1° 2 - 4 chapters when they were published, that story is really good and I need to get back to it :eeyup:

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