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So Wispy is developing into his own
personalitypony? Side effect of the spell?it look like he is trap by Pinkie Pie sent. is it that Pinkies doing this willingly or not? Keep up the good job you are doing.
Dragonfox
6482125 I think Pinkie is using void contamination mind control on him, probably without noticing. In One Step she's able to command other humans-turned-ponies like a 'princess'.
6482169 It's the softest of traps. Silver does not want to hurt Pinkie, but this is pretty bad, but even thinking about walking away is difficult.
WTF just happened in this chapter? Why is Silver acting like he is on sedatives? Did he have recent brain damage to his frontal lobe altering his sense of inhibition? Or is it that he is suddenly without a spine and is incapable of saying no because it would hurt her feelings? Overall, I still really like this story, but I find the direction of this chapter to be rather confusing.
My working hypothesis is his use of the spell upon himself went a little too far. As a guess.
6483190 Have you read any of One Step, Two Step, Three Hoof, Four Dead?
6483200
No I have not read that one yet. I want to, but I have like 2000 chapters to read in my tracker at the moment and I am loath to add more at the moment. Given that I have a job and as much as I love MLP; I have other nerdy activities I do for fun as well.
Need to catch up a bit with One step two hoof... this chapter sort of confused me a bit.
...But that's for multiple reasons. Anyway, as always awesome chappy man ;)
Definitely getting the "alternate Pinkie" vibe, or changeling.
Aaaand we've left Rough in the dust again it seems.... Poor guy!
Keep going! ;)
this is a good chapter. I really like it.
but I have a pretty good idea what is happening and I am not really sure I like it, but time will tell how this all burns out in the end.
Harts Fire
6483349 I apologize if I didn't describe it well, but Pinkie has a mind control grip on things. Hence her seeming perfection in Silver's eyes. Hence his inability to disobey.
6483955
oh, ok. But, this seems a little out of character for Pinkie. Also, how? Does she get her abilities from Cthulhu?
6484363 That would be telling, but I also tried to imply she wasn't doing it on purpose. She's just asking, neigh, begging, and her overwhelming force of personality as through (UNKNOWN EFFECT) is crushing Silver's abilities to say no, one by one.
6482523
It looks like he now know how the mares felt when his sent was out of control on the ship.
Dragonfox
6485859 He is caught in a Pinkie snare!
There are two spaces between these two sentences.
There are two spaces between "had" and "become."
6498296 Typos baked into delicious muffins.
6483955 *cough* *cough* expository narration *cough*
6498330
There needs to be punctuation at the end of that sentence.
6498409 Fixed!
6498330 Well, that escalated quickly.
So whatever's wrong with Pinkie Pie has made her more than just seductive to Silver (I'm just going to call him that, for the sake of ease), but has given her some sort of mind-control over him. Interestingly, he seems to have some degree of cognizance about it, but that doesn't seem to be helping him much in terms of actually breaking free from it. I'd wager that Pinkie has even less awareness of what's going on with her, since she doesn't seem to realize that her usual pushiness has become something more.
I have to admit that I quirked a grin at Mayor Mare's being clueless about what Pinkie and Silver had been doing, while Fast Change was able to smell it right away. Shouldn't Mayor Mare have also been able to detect that Pinkie was being more than just polite to her new friend? Also, why is Twilight looking for Silver now? Insofar as she knows, he should be out on his date with Tumble (unless she's found Tumble and realized that something's amiss). So maybe there's some hope.
...of course, there's none to be found where Fast is concerned. That was a real -moment on her part...but it seemed in-character for her. Any of Silver's other wives would have called foul on that scene, for one reason or another, but only Fast would just grin, wink, and wander off, content to take a casual liaison at face value. In fact, I have to wonder if Fast has an ulterior motive here, as she seems to have taken this to be permission for them all to have an open marriage, a privilege that is technically reserved for Silver alone...well, sort of. His role as a stud is highly questionable (at best) now, but even so, this particular situation isn't his fault, and Fast's wildly misreading it isn't helping things.
Maybe Silver can crawl out a window while he's in Pinkie's room and run for the castle?
6498425 Fast goes a little far a few times in this arc, naughty Fast.
Crawling out a window away from Pinkie? But... she's so wonderful... It would make her so sad... Silver doesn't want a crying Pinkie! Oh no, that'd be awful! There must be a better answer.
I dunno what's going on, but this is seriously disturbing. Mindrape is no trivial matter.
6541331 It should be disturbing.
I thought he was supposed to be going on a date with Rumble. What the hell's happening right now?
6673832 Silver is thinking much the same thing.
I... What? I don't understand.
6757984 Silver is being mind controlled, but so is Pinkie. They're falling for each other. One of them knows this is so very wrong, the other isn't aware.
Ok. I'm thinking this is a connection. If I'm right, this needs to be contained. Quarantined.
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