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No privacy time? Nooooooo......
I do hope Princess Celestia can see it Luna's way. That Prince Silver Star life is on the line and tough actions need to be implemented to keep Silver safe. She can't just blame Silver because he was not born a pony like she has dun in the past.
Keep up the good work.
Dragonfox
hallow --> hollow?
6625646 They can still have sex. The warlocks don't mind watching.
6625884 Lol, you made the joke that I was thinking about while posting.
6625884 I laughed for more than I should have at this comment XD
6625879 Typo given over to Nightwing for questioning.
Nightwing's response is slightly alarming, in that it almost sounds like she's in on the coup. We don't think this is the case, but she's not making it easy.
Keep going! ;)
Nightwing's is back in the game so to speak.
will this lead to more training for Silver?
or will Silver be tested first to see ware he stands?
a rather intriguing chapter.
Harts Fire
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Twilight highlighting it makes it sound more suspicious, but she did know Silver as a colt, didn't she?
Actually, I don't remember the order of events... was Nightwing before or after Silver's first gender change?
whiff
There are two spaces between "towards" and "Luna."
There are two spaces between "least" and "he."
6946614 Fixed!
Okay, so the characters are acting somewhat more sensibly this time around, in that the threat is being treated as an imminent danger!
While Luna and co.'s talk about having foals felt a little misplaced, it was nicely juxtaposed by Twilight desperately trying to keep the conversation on target. It's at times like this that I wished the story lent itself to greater exposition, because there was an opportunity to show some great characterization here; to Luna, some minor unrest is probably nothing compared to what she's about to gain in terms of breeding Silver. Luna lived through King Sombra's attack on the Crystal Empire, after all, so she can't be faulted for thinking that this is relatively minor by comparison. Unfortunately, the story doesn't capitalize on this chance to go into more depth regarding her character, and this explanation for her apparent lack of focus on what happened to Silver and Twilight has to be entirely manufactured by the readers, rather than being part of the story itself. It's a missed opportunity.
I also frowned a bit at the idea that Luna doesn't know about using earth pony magic. Granted, there's nothing about that in the show, but that's because the show itself is terrible at getting into what makes earth ponies special compared to their pegasus and unicorn cousins. Still, Luna's been alive for millenia; she should know all about this.
It was also nice to see Silver pull Luna up short when she started treating Silver like an object again. Good to see that the characters are growing from their past mistakes. Speaking of the past, it was a nice call-out to the story's history to see Nightwing again. Her presence was also a nice nod towards the fact that not everypony is ignoring the dangerous situation that's still unresolved. And a good thing too, considering that both of the ponies that Silver brought in were about to be murdered! Of course, Nightwing's irascible nature remains, along with her counterintuitive stance of "take away what Luna loves so that she can have what she deserves." That's overstating things slightly, but it remains true that Nightwing's zeal to serve is so great that she's practically arguing with Luna about what's best for Luna, a situation that's obviously ridiculous to everyone, I imagine, except her.
Ah well, at least those prisoners can be interrogated when they wake up, so hopefully some answers are forthcoming!
6946643 Being long-lived means having a long time to make bad habits, and get ingrained on bad ideas.
Some say there's a very good reason there are no immortals, and certainly a reason every generation confuses the one that came before it without fail.
banish this typo.
6985269 Typo banished!