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That ending is a bit awkward. It's either making repairs, or he can "see" (or "feel" or otherwise detect) signs of repair. One or the other.
He's using the present-tense "try" with the past-tense "went." One or the other needs to be changed.
His "increasingly-energized" genitals.
Then "impaled" herself with a cry.
This isn't an error, per se, but I seem to recall her (and other mares) being pretty ticked at using the term "heat," since that's what animals go through.
6099099 Fixed, and Celestia saw fit to be gentle.
6099109 So Silver tries to treat his various wounds, only to confirm his new condition...inside of Shei. And very nearly inside of Amenti, for that matter.
It's notable that Silver's worst wounds seem to be the self-inflicted cuts he made to his aetheric net. Luckily, those don't seem to be any sort of permanent injury, but there's something to be said for the fact that had he not made his ill-considered - and ultimately futile - surgery to his internal network of magic, he'd be in a considerably better state than he is now. The stab wounds, ironically enough, seem to be of secondary concern, despite how deeply they go.
Of course, the main takeaway here confirms what we suspected; that any instance of internal channeling is going to go straight between his legs, which not only makes him ready and rearing to go, but amplifies his natural pheromones to the point where they're a powerful aphrodesiac. What wasn't confirmed was whether his enhanced sexuality has also amplified his fertility. That said, Silver smartly suspects that it will, and I'm in agreement in that regard. While Shei likely feels enough love to make it moot, I suspect that won't really be a consideration anymore (though it's not clear if Silver is simply overcoming that restriction, or if his pheromones are seducing a female to being "in love" with him anyway). The same likely goes for a female being in her season, as well - either his pheromones are "inducing" that even when it's not normally time, or he's potent enough that it doesn't matter anyway.
In which case, congratulations on beginning your broodmare duties, Shei.
(This might not be the case for Celestia and the other alicorns, however. Their internal magic is so heavy that it might require more than even Silver, in his current state, can supply, in terms of making them receptive when it's not time for their heat. That said, this is iffy, since he is an alicorn himself, and has this "enhancement." It will be interesting to see what happens if he has sex with Celestia before her next estrus.)
As for Amenti...wow that was frustrating, and I mean in the visceral sense. Since I can empathize with Silver here, his struggle between what he knew was the best decision, and what he wanted to do came across very clearly. As it was, he wasn't wrong to send her away - knocking her up with a half-cat/half-(lunar)-pony hybrid right before her formal engagement would not have been the best way to conclude their help establishing the stability of her regime. Oh, there could have been soap opera machinations galore from that, but insofar as Silver himself goes, his decision was entirely believable, as well as laudable. (I wonder if her "I'll think of you" line was foreshadowing about a dream-affair before he goes? That seems unsatisfying, on a visceral level - he's never once had a physical release from having sex in a dream - but it's still better than nothing.)
Also, a nice shout-out to the fact that males become more aroused when a new female that they haven't had sex with yet is presented to them. That part definitely felt like foreshadowing, if only of the not-very-subtle hints that Silver is going to be getting a great deal more action in the future. In a way, this is almost karmic; Silver was taking his studding duties very lightly before - now he's not getting much of a choice in the matter. Rather ironically, this erases virtually any distinction between having an affair and doing his duty as a stud. Unless the female is already pregnant, or is barren (and it's amusing to consider that Silver's magic could "repair" a barren female), then he's going to knock her up when he claims her.
As it is, Silver is going to need to get used to the fact that the central "hub" for his aetheric net is through his balls, now. As we were shown, that likely means that any use of magic is going to turn him - and any nearby females - on. What's more interesting to consider is what to do about it. Right now, it seems like Silver is trying to fight the "current." That is, he's trying to redirect his magic away from his groin and towards other parts of him (e.g. his ears). That seems to be about as successful as trying to manually push a river against its own current. I suspect that he's going to need to come up with an alternate plan, since trying to push his magic where it doesn't want to go doesn't seem to be working the way he wants...though that will likely mean accepting that magic and sex are going to be inseparable - at least to some degree - from now on.
EDIT: A thought just occurred to me...Silver's dreamwalking is still, unto itself, a magical ability. Shouldn't his bangle be affecting that too? Will any dreams he touches become wet ones? Could he even knock a female up via dream-sex? Actually, that last part seems a bit too ridiculous to seriously consider (and it would be frustrating, since that seems like it would be "cheating" Silver out of actual sex). Still, the overall point is interesting to think about.
6099179 No one can hurt us like we hurt ourselves. A lesson for the ages right there. The stab wounds were meant to bleed him out, and were doing a fair job of that, but they didn't score major muscle group damage, so hirrah for Silver.
Amenti was an awful temptation, an awful awful one that he wanted to ravish and damn the consequences, but he wouldn't make more trouble for himself just yet.
Injured sex is best sex... right? Well it's the only kind that Silver's getting at the moment.
I don't think Silver can knock things up in dreams. That would be too horrifying to imagine, seeing as if he focuses on it, he could bounce from dream to dream, knocking up an ungodly number of females a night. Let's just not open that can.
6099261 Whew, I'm glad to hear you say that. I hesitated to mention it, since I didn't care for the idea, but I threw it out there regardless. Now let us never speak of it again.
...though the idea of "every dream he touches is a sexy dream, now" is still kinda cool.
a vary informative chapter. "Did you confirm if you're pregnant or not?"
"I am not."
well bummer but I kind of hade that felling. it is going to tack a huge amount of magic to quicken Luna or Celestia I am thinking all 4 of the princess poring there magic in to Silver and with his new bracelet to concentrate it strata to his Jules maybe it will work. but lets get Silver healed first before he try's that.
Harts Fire
6099394 One would hope he'll be feeling better by the time they get back to Equestria.
if they are stopping in saddle Arabia for R n R we can hope.
but with dealing with that dam bracelet he has to learn how to handle his magic all over agene.
Bit of an interesting chapter and onward to Saddle Arabia. Wondering what the sisters' family will think with them being knocked by silver. Also why do I get the feeling that AmentI isn't done trying to get in silver's pants?
6100609 But Silver isn't wearing pants. Maybe that's the problem?
6100631 I ment metaphor...you know what I mean
discreet, indiscreet. Discrete means separate.