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Unexpected turkey day chapters are highly unexpected. Hope you're having a mighty fine feast day.
6671799 They can't stop me! 3 updates today.
Wow a good chapter. I wonder if Princess Celestia Know about this Changeling Queen, or have they been working together all this time?
Dragonfox
Wow, im stunned. Cant wait to find out if celestia is a imposter or always been queen
Well that was unexpected. Can we see what happens next, please?
great spired - great spires
My mind - blown
Oh yeah, there is another faction at play here.
Well played sir, well played.
You know...This development isn't quite that suprising...seeing as something feel very wrong.
6672342 Fixed, with a double space typo at no extra cost!
We have competent Queens in this AU? say it isn't so! This is a pretty major development. How in the world does she have that much power? Not to mention that surely Celestia herself would notice the commotion and wonder?
Hmm...
Keep going! ;)
Yeah. Someone last chapter said it best. Celestia is just being a petulant child. After all this, hurting so many just to play hero, I'm afraid she's beyond forgiveness, at least for me.Oh thank god! Damn you and your captivating plot lines. Damn you all to retcon!
Huh. Color me surprised with magic.
We're in the presence of Machiavelli.
It's not so much a typo, and more of an objection to what I feel is the meaning. Plunging Silver's head into the re-frozen rock makes it seem like her head entered the same space as the rock, which is why I initially thought that, despite the re-frozen part, Silver's head had been shoved into more molten rock. (molten rock was also mentioned, adding to the confusion on my end) However, given the outcome, it's clear she just bashed Silver into the ground to knock her out, but representing that more accurately requires more than changing just one word.
I'd suggest something like: "The insect queen suddenly grabbed Silver at the back of the head and plunged her down to smash against the recently re-frozen rock." Or something similar.
7798606 Fix'd!
SEND HER TO THE MOON!!!
I knew something was off but I didn’t see that coming.
Grammar mistake:
The first quotation is said by Silver, the second is said by Celestia. Dialog by different characters should always be in different paragraphs. I suggest splitting it like this: