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Silver's stiffy of stiffness, perhaps its a +4 pole of poking.
Great chapter.
6052177 And he never got to use it. For shame.
Change the "As" at the beginning of this sentence to "Like."
You need a closing quotation mark at the end of this sentence.
There's no actual error here, but a cutie mark for a single pony is always referred to in the singular, despite appearing on both flanks. I'd change that to "nuzzling at the cutie mark on her flank" since it doesn't really matter which flank.
I believe "belly to belly" should be hyphenated.
Ironically, you don't need hyphens for "all too often."
As his "still-erect" member dripped "pre-fluids" to the ground.
He could have killed her in the city square "in the manner" of his choosing.
She thought Equestrians with wings "had" bird wings.
About "half-filling" the tub.
6052347 The typos are scheduled for execution tomorrow. Bring popcorn!
6052400 One more:
This should be "soothe."
6052400 So this is it. This is the chapter where things truly, to my mind, become clop. The Text said that Silver should either clean up his act, or become so debased as to make a whore blush, and now we have an idea as to which way that particular pendulum is going to swing. Rather ironically, poor Silver never gets any satisfaction...let's hope that's not foreshadowing for how things go from here.
To begin with, the assassination attempt on Celestia ends with the typical forgiveness and utter lack of wrath that we've come to expect from Silver. This does seem to have been the right thing to do, since it achieves that most difficult - and most worthwhile - of goals, in that it turns an enemy into a friend. However, I can't help but contrast this with how personally unsatisfying it feels to just let these acts go again and again. I feel certain that at some point this is going to come back around to bite Silver in the ass, either because he'll come up against an enemy that's depraved enough to take advantage of this, or worse, will feel so ashamed at being forgiven that they'll internalize that humiliation and come to hate Silver all the more. It's what happened with Twilight all over again - when people feel guilty, they want to be punished, since that's the road that leads to absolution. If Silver really wanted them to feel better, he'd be more harsh on them before he forgave them, as paradoxical as that sounds.
Of course, Silver had little time to think about that, as Celestia's reaction to the short-lived crisis was to kick-start her libido. I have to say, I'm rather surprised at how aggressive she's being, considering that she seems like the one who's usually more reserved. Of course, that does play into what we've seen previously; I've mentioned before how this contrasts perfectly with Luna, so I need not mention that here.
That said, I think that Celestia's portrayal in this chapter, being extremely aroused and struggling to control herself, was exceptionally well done. We saw her moment of chagrin when Silver reminded her that she was being rather casual about something that could potentially kill him, along with her half-hearted plea that she'd try to hold back; and wow was that ever unconvincing, since she was practically whimpering it at that point, followed immediately by her urging him to gamble it all.
More notable was that there was clearly a power dynamic going on immediately following that, when Celestia was doing everything she could to tempt him - including offering an unprecedented apology! - while he struggled to hold out. What I mean by that is that that exchange felt very much like each of them was attempting to assert their will over each other to make them do what they wanted. What's interesting to consider is that, while I do believe Silver won (he didn't mount her, after all), it's unclear to me how that exchange actually played out. Was Celestia's apology a sign of her losing the contest between them, with him forcing her to submit and give him a concession in hopes of being rewarded? Or was she being seductive by doing that, playing at being submissive in hopes that it'd stoke his fires and he'd be unable to resist her? The scene was very intriguing - aside from the rather heady eroticism - because either interpretation is entirely plausible.
As it was, Silver managed to "win" the conflict, keeping his hormones in check through a massive effort of will, and instead taking the edge off of Celestia's lust by going down on her. I have to say, this also felt like the right choice from a narrative standpoint. Having Silver bag Celestia right off the bat would have been rather premature (pun intended), so this way we not only have delayed the proverbial "money shot" (I can't help with the puns here, sorry), but there's a strong narrative reason for doing so, in that it could be the end of Silver.
Of course, Celestia was rather selfish in not offering him any relief in exchange. The poor guy didn't even get off during his sex dream, which seems rather unfair...and also leads me to a minor complaint about that dream. He was dreaming that he was riding a female alicorn of indeterminate identity, being alternately Twilight, Celestia, and Luna...but not Cadance. That was an oversight, as that would have been a good way to foreshadow him eventually studding her, or at the very least looking at her in that particular light, since you can't help what you dream, after all. She is technically in the circle of princesses, after all, so they're sort of married. Either way, that seemed like a missed opportunity, albeit a small one.
That exchange with Celestia also made me wonder about how much of a disadvantage she must be in, to be undertaking a diplomatic mission in her state. While the ponies and the cats are different species, it's far from absurd to imagine that they can pick up on a mare's scent when she's in her season, and given that Celestia is a pheromone factory at the moment, one can only imagine the subtle barbs that a canny politician could throw at her. I doubt she'd lose her dignity quite so easily, but at the same time it's hardly the best way to solidify her position (oh, and let's not forget that she has that little incident with violating diplomatic immunity a while back, too...really, she's going to be at her diplomatic nadir on this mission...and given how important it is (for whatever reason), that's going to make things tense).
Of course, it's after Silver gets up - still hot and bothered - that Shei walks in. Given Silver's current state, and her gratitude for his saving her sister instead of killing her, I'm still rather amazed that their mutual bath didn't end in anything naughty. Again, I'm not saying the restraint is a bad thing, but I can empathize with Silver's having to continually hold back. One can only hope that good things come (last pun, I promise) to those who wait...particularly since Shei seemed to be giving him a double entendre about wanting anything else when she left.
By the by, it's becoming rather awkward to keep referring to these other ponies as Saddle Arabians. Leaving aside how much of a mouthful that is, it's also a bit of a misapplication, since that's a national term for a different ethnicity of ponies. I would recommend that their name for themselves be "hisan," which is Arabic for "horse."
So Celestia is out now, in what I can only presume is an attempt to marshal her self-control, and Silver has some time off. Maybe it's time to look around the city (which doesn't seem to have its own name? Maybe "Meowmphis"? Or "Caitro"? Blah, no, those are all terrible) some?
6053555 I find it amusing that the story lays opportunities before Silver, but he's trying his best to do his job right, which means not immediately leaping on every available mare, especially the kind that could, possibly in best scenario, put him in bed afterwards for an undefined period of time. Once, long ago, he was called a slut, and yet now everyone's trying to get him into it. Life isn't fair sometimes.
Cadance not appearing was simply because she is not part of the conflict Silver is dealing with. He doesn't want those three (Twilight/Luna/Celestia) to tear themselves, or him, apart, and the possibility of mismanaged bumbling on his part destroying the family he's built is a very real possibility.
Silver is likely to seek out the would-be killer and trying to establish more rapport than simply forgiving her and sending her on her way. It may cut off troubles, and she clearly has some underworld contacts.
did silver escape death , being crippled or just simply a week of totally being drained of his foal making magic?
now if only code rate the amount of magic her body pulls from Silver at a time she code be with foal and Silver would be safe and happy.
in the end Silver made the right decision.
Harts Fire
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6055317 Welcome to the front of the story! We missed you.
6055409 aww <3
i also made some comments with correction to the previous story.
6055502 Thankee. How are you liking the story thus far?
6055507
silly memes aside, the positive points are:
-Silver is male again
-grew balls in both literal and figurative ways
-gets all the mares
-implied hot kinky sex
-bigger princesses seemingly greatly decreased their "wiser than thou" attitude
and i can't count that as negative, but i reached that point of life when i really prefer slice of life over adventure, but that isn't stopping me from reading and loving this story, i just may make breaks from time to time, from this story or from ponies altogether.
also coverSilver is hot.
Is it just me or is the Silver in the cover image look a lot better now that he is a male?
It feel like the image fit him of being a male better.
is not a word. Pre-ejaculatory fluids if feeling formal, precum or pre if not.
make out the details
Man! If I was Silver i'd be banging the sisters silly!! in front of Celestia!! and then take Celestia to!! lol!
6999666 Darn humans and their hangups! Not that ponies don't have their own share.