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So, Fluttershy is responsible? Or Silver at least subconsciously suspects that she is...?
6583981 Review the chapter when Silver was brought back.
If my memory serves correctly, since I'm too lazy to actually go back to the chapter, what everyone was supposed to do was imagine what THEY wanted Silver to be like when he was brought back. My theory (if it can be called that) is that Fluttershy wanted Silver to become the way she is now so that she wouldn't be able to harm anyone, namely Twilight, because of all the sex and whatnot. I'm guessing her feelings on this matter were so strong that they managed to overpower everyone else's images of Silver. Again, it's just an idea, and probably has quite a few holes in it, by hey, what can you do. With that out of the way, I'm so glad we're getting somewhere with the whole "asexual" thing.
6584102 I'll helpfully point out that most everyone was unconscious. Fluttershy gave a powerful impression, then Night created the body while everyone else was knocked out. Silver appeared to a room full of unconscious ponies, with even Twilight and Night flopping over when the spell reached the final phase.
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Oh yeah, forgot about that part. It all makes sense now holy shit. I was thinking (while hoping to be wrong) that the whole situation was simply for the sake of the plot or some other bullshit. This actually makes sense!
6584153 Nothing happens entirely 'just because' in this series.
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True enough, from what I've seen. As far as I know, everything (even trivial stuff) seems to tie into something else eventually, with varying degrees of importance.
6584164 It's quite a challenge to keep it all connected properly, especially without a shred of notes. I liked how this chapter turned out.
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I'll say. I would never be able to write anything resembling adequacy, but I suppose that doesn't really matter all that much in the end. I have to agree with you on how it turned out by the way. I was hoping this issue would addressed more in-depth, I just didn't think it'd be so soon.
And then it's BOOM! The tattered wings imagery.... Best chapter to date. And the bar was already set high. Will Silver confront her demons or will she live on the edge of swamp caring for her foals and possibly befriend surounding wild-life. Who knows? Pinkie Pie knows, I'm sure of it.
so close to the answer.
now we have bigger question's who is this Flutter Shy representing???
we are still missing parts of the larger puzzle.
Harts Fire
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Nuh-uh! I said smoothest possible path to male alicorndom. I just figured that the tribulations and pains he had to get there were a natural part of that path. He probably could have found a different way there. It would, in all likelihood, have hurt worse though.
6584445 The Text sweetly promised him just that. Here's a path. It will hurt. But you get to be an alicorn at the end of it!
Silver never said he wanted to go down the path, in fact, I seem to recall him saying he'd rather not, but he went right down it, whistling softly.
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It's true that he said he would rather not go down the path of the alicorn. But I am not sure that the path he did choose, the rank 4 path, was not also the same path as the alicorn path. Might indeed have been just the first leg of it. But that is neither here nor there. Text isn't telling.(If he did don't tell me!I haven't caught all the way up yet. ) It's just idle speculation for me and I enjoy it. Not offense intended to you.
6584506 He is but a puppet, dancing to a master that enjoys seeing him struggle.
Silver gets a glimpse of the source of his disability. Fluttershy will be so upset when she finds out!
Keep going! ;)
Her mental "well-being."
Also, having "well" twice in the same sentence is a bit cumbersome. I'd change that second one to "skillfully" or something similar.
A "well-constructed" painting.
There are two spaces between "smell" and "flooded."
The part "willing" to hurt Twilight.
A "concerned-looking" Fast.
6587246 Typos sent to the Text's realm, to torment him.
6587265 Ah, and finally the mystery is revealed. Fluttershy is the reason why Silver is the way she is, having had an unexpectedly large influence on Silver's resurrection due to a twist of fate placing her in a position to do so. Hopefully, that Fluttershy was the last pony standing during the resurrection process will be directly addressed in future chapters, rather than being left as something to be intuited, rather than stated.
As it stands, this puts a rather interesting take on Fluttershy's character. Silver was sleeping with Twilight, and came close to doing so with Rainbow Dash and Applejack. As a stallion, he also got it on with Pinkie Pie. He never made a pass at Rarity, but even in the show she was looking for love. Of all of the Mane Six, only Fluttershy has been completely lacking in a romantic/sexual side, both in terms of the source material and this story. That's actually eminently believable, as she's the sort who would find the entire idea of sex (and maybe even love?) to be frightening. In other words, while her aspect that Silver witnessed made it sound like she was prohibiting sex because of who Silver was, I have to wonder how much of that is because of what Fluttershy thinks, not just of Silver but because of sex in general. That's just a presumption, of course; her indictment that Silver was "hurting Twilight in all sorts of little ways" was something to consider...what did she mean by that?
It was interesting to consider that it was Fast's dogged insistence on trying to turn Silver on that led to that particular breakthrough. I'm presuming that what we were supposed to take away from that was that Fast was arousing Silver forcefully to the point where it essentially made her confront the missing part of herself. If so, that flies in the face of my presumption that this problem is one that's going to require magic to fix. If this is some sort of "mental block" that Fluttershy set into Silver, then (rather ironically) Fast's efforts could very well be what's needed to fix her. That and the whole thing was rather amusing; that really was just so Fast...even if she was quasi-sexually assaulting Silver.
I also thought the part with Filthy Rich's dream brought up an interesting aspect of his character. While the recent episode with Diamond Tiara made it look like her family was rather uncaring of her, that was largely focused entirely around her mother. When we've seen her father talk to her, he seemed fairly well-engaged in her life, including pushing her to help the Apple family make zap-apple jam. In other words, he looked more like a normal, well-adjusted pony. That he'd be portrayed that way here felt like a very honest take on his character.
6587330 I like Filthy Rich, and Diamond Tiara, and try to represent either well. They're interesting. Filthy is a hardworking stallion that is trying so very hard to do right by his family.
Silver's cure is a multi step thing, but this was a big one, learning of the specific nature of the block and what's behind it. Knowing there's a part of herself fading and miserable is a powerful motivator as well. There's more at stale than just enjoying the company of her loved ones.
Now is not the time to sit on this.
Ok. So this is Fluttershy's fault, even if it was unintentional.
Huh, so it was Fluttershy? I thought that it may have been Tirek that ate his libido.
Tahaha that’s a laugh!!
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Apparently, Flutter's a way more effective cockblock than Tirek.