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lainverse


Short bio is short.

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2757156
That's fine. Life happens. :pinkiecrazy:

2757822
Aaaaand another case of me mistapping star instead of read it later. This time to put it in the aforementioned list. :facehoof:

Sorry about that. Most likely I'll set it back when get to the story. I like very long well written stories and yours seems promising.

Seriously, there should be some delay before site sends notification to the author about the star to make sure it's still there.

Thanks for favoriting my story! New chapters uploaded daily so check back soon! :pinkiehappy:

2757155
Thanks! And sorry for bot replying. I'm rather busy today with life. :pinkiesick: I had to go to several appointnents regarding certain stuff

2757088
Ah, and this time for real, because I actually like it. :)

I like how you interwaving original chapters from the show without reciting them word by word or forcing Franz throug them and let him live his own life instead while dropping fallouts from these episodes on him when he ends up in the vicinity. I like how you made completely overpowered character and yet limited him with his own understanding of possible. I mean, he wouldn't say he can't create Infinity Gems otherwise, would he? I have a sneaking suspicion that he could if he thought even for a moment that they are possible. I like the story you telling so far and I like Franz's flashbacks. They don't feel too often or too large and yet provide a background for him.

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