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I'm unsure how to feel about this development. it once again feels like this new David was just tossed in willy nilly.
I, for one, am glad that alternate David showed up. Shake things up because I knew the ride back would be little more than bickering between members and attempted members of the harem. Who wants just that? That's like a literary sitcom.
So not a time warping clone but another multiverse David. ..good to hear.
And Nefer is probably confused as all get out.
Great chapter and I can't wait for the herds reaction to what has happened on silver's trip.
So Nefertari claims they acquired humanity. Interesting. It is interesting she worded it like that, instead of something like, uncovered, discovered, found. Yet another of the Text's older paths?
Keep going! ;)
he last 5 chapters are well I should say I am getting a feeling that Silver is really missing his family.
he needs to spend time with his family and just relax and get to know his new foals.
and he defiantly needs to spend time with his other wives I am sure they miss him terribly.
Harts Fire
I think this should be two sentences, with that first comma being a period.
Silver rolled "his" eyes.
6339646 Typos fixed!
6339678 Okay, so this chapter confirms a few things. The big one being that this David is indeed from a parallel universe where some things are indeed different...including that this David is a (closeted?) homosexual. That certainly puts the odd sexual tension between him and Silver in a new light.
Leaving that aside, Silver and David seem to be moving into an odd relationship. I say "odd" because the two of them are clearly playing "therapist and patient," but I'm having a hard time figuring out which of them is which. Silver is getting the chance to see himself, or at least his prior self, the way everyone else does, which goes back to the old adage of "meeting yourself and being horrified by finding out what everyone else already knows." On the other hand, David is getting the benefit of Silver's having already been through the metaphorical fire and the flames.
The scene with Nefertari was appropriate in how much confusion it played up between the various participants. Both Nefertari and David have very different ideas about what it means to be walking around in a human body, and watching them interact while trying to figure that out was amusing enough due to their complete lack of common ground in that area. I was almost sorry that Silver broke things up before the misunderstandings could escalate, even if it was for the best (since Nefertari would have ended up either attacking David or doing him right there). I was also pleased to see Nefertari still insisting that she's pregnant, since I like the idea of that particular plot twist.
From here on out, I'm not sure what comes next, besides the return to Equestria and Silver's long-absent wives (and newborn children). I still think that David will end up with the Anubians, but I'm less confident now. We'll see where it goes.
SO, I am assuming, because this feels close to the point where this was either completed or I dropped it the first time, that the Text dropped him with another human him because he wanted to balance out his harem with another stallion's perspective.
In that vein....how does a David count as another perspective? Sure Silver has grown, but the roots are still there, one would think they are too similar.
7086410 This David is not the David you know!
"Through."
So, um, yeah. I understand David's position all too well. Desperation is an insidious thing; give water to a man stranded in the desert and he'll latch onto you like no other. Hence this reaction to Silver's momentary snuggles. But Silver did it to himself with the best of intentions.
I just know I'd be so much more uncomfortable with the initial meeting. I don't think I could do it.
7783353 Fix'd!