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Every magic have something unique...sooner or later, the whisperer(s) will be tracked, exposed and preferably, killed.
The zealots want the princesses to remain virgins forever... those fiends!
I wonder if Celestia did anything further on that 'formerly a human' thing that was revealed.
So the evil stuff from back in the Crystal Empire is back? Hmmm....
Keep going! ;)
The shadows hiding in Canterlot have gotten cheeky while she was away saving a species from possible extinction... Someone will have to teach them it's not exactly safe to play with fire.
Perhaps this was the doings of a certain unicorn that ran off briefly with Silver's cutie mark tainting and such upon our fair Prince(ss).
It looks like Princess Luna is over joyed to have the old Silver back. Princess Celestia seems to have reservations. Time well tell. over all a good chapter and I am looking forward to the next one. Keep up the good work.
Dragonfox
6606939 Luna, like Night, pushed to have Silver saved. They were the two major drivers.
by opening that spell book more typos will be produced.
"Despoiler of princesses."
Silver Stars, litterally an Immortal Corrupter. New would-be "heroes" have stepped in to stop his/her dastardly plot. Perhaps they should have looked at what happened to all the others who tried before. Another great chapter in my favorite story about my favorite villianous anti-hero! Huzzah! That's a thing, right, "huzzah"? I'm pretty sure it's a thing and I'm rolling with it.
a super good chapter.
and I do believe we have a new Villon poking around the shadows.
There were
Trixie's
for a stallion of Luna's stature.
There are two spaces between "wide" and "and."
There are also two spaces between "that" and "crackled."
There are two spaces between these sentences.
Well, this was a surprise. A new enemy has come out of nowhere! Of course, this isn't the first time there's been an unknown enemy gunning for Silver, but this time...it's personal. That is, this new foe seems to be personally offended by Silver's actions, if not her very existence. Technically speaking, they're not wrong, as Silver has introduced quite a bit of change to Equestria in general, and the princesses in particular. They're also surprisingly well-researched on Silver's past, which makes me wonder if it's someone Silver knows. At the very least, they must have been either moderately close for a long time or made a dedicated effort at researching her, either of which should be a good way to close in on them. And to be able to scry into Luna's boudoir...who could do that?
Obviously, the best person to ask for help from is Nefertiri; she has her own shamanic magic, and is a veteran of battles. I'd bet that she has some experience with assassination attempts too, given the relatively cutthroat nature of the Anubians' old life. I'm surprised that she hasn't been sent for. In fact, I'm a little surprise at how little attention this is being given. An assassination attempt is made on Silver (and Twilight), and they immediately move on to sex talk? Being hit by fireballs isn't exactly low-impact, fellas.
Leaving that aside for the moment, I'm a bit surprised that Silver is willing to settle for just one seat for lunar ponies in "the council." I can't go much deeper into this though, as there's no description as to what this council is, what it does, or how many seats are available. There's clearly some sort of affiliation by type, but beyond that this seems to have come out of nowhere without any explanation. For that matter, why just one seat for lunar ponies, if each tribe has seats of their own? This entire idea needs to be fleshed out.
Also, the idea of Luna using that spell to sire foals of her own with mares is...rather straightforward. Almost too much so, by which I mean "how did this idea not come up before?" I'm half-wondering if this ideas was floated before and was shot down for some reason, but I can't quite recall. Though there's still the idea of this spell being illegal, and I can't see Celestia backing off on that quite so easily. But other than that...I guess there isn't really much problem with Luna siring children via other mares, though I do still wonder about them being able to carry the children to term, since Silver's mares couldn't (or was there another explanation for that? I can't recall).
6919344 I, erm, hrm. I'm... I'm almost certain someone explained what happened with Silver's failed studding... If it hasn't saying so would be a huge spoiler! There is a reason though, I can say that!
"Pass." Hiding in the very first sentence...
Well, isn't Celestia a little creepy around Twilight? I'd've thought a multi-millenia-old person of her already-defined character would have more... presence of mind than that.
7796212 Fix'd!