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So one doesn't negate the other simply help to a degree. I wonder if Silver shall seek the rest to complete the set and be rid of the status only wearing it in part seems to grant.
6230141 Just imagine how things would be if Silver had the necklace version first instead.
So they're not a pair anymore, but a set? Oman, you are quite the jerk for withholding that, what are you playing at? If we didn't know better it would seem like you're planning something....
Keep going! ;)
Light and sweet chapter overall, which is a much needed breather in the story, as well as Exposition!
Good chapter. Looking forward to things to come.
Okay, I think I see how these magic items work. If you have only one, It's a curse. Drawing all your magic into that one aspect of the self. The more you have, the more in becomes a blessing, allowing specific control over where and how one's magic is chanelled. I imagine, among other things, it would allow one race of pony to work with magic in a fashion that would generally only be available to other races/breeds of ponies?
6230141 Perhaps Silver should try to enlist the help of Daring Do before he tries to equip more cursed artifacts.
It just goes from bad to worse. I Wonder if they will ever find a way to remove the cursed objects. Of course if Twilight were working on it that would certainly help. If they are made of gold I wonder if the magic in them so strong as to prevent them from being cut off? I mean the band and not the flesh just to be clear.
Is Silver going to end up covered in artifacts by the time he collects the full set?
Or maybe the set will just finish out his royal accoutrements? A set of hoof shoes? A new crown? A tail bangle similar to the on Celestia recovered? Or perhaps a horn accessory?
Can't wait to see what he finds next!
with 2 out of the 5 pieces now found. There will be more typos to be found too?
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6230480 Collect them all! He's working on it. Hopefully they'll go well together, and not make his life any more complicated.
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Accessories are great, but he needs to be able to remove them. I mean just think about the hygienic issues from being unable to clean under them. Equines still sweat. And just imagine if he starts to get an itch on either of those parts of his body and he can't get a hoof to it to scratch it. All for magic accessories that boost power but one needs to be able to remove them when the need arrives.
It look like that the Text is steel keeping tabs on him. I did not think it wood leave him alone. Whether he like it or not the more powerful the pony's he is with, the more interesting he become to the Text. It can't help itself but keep an eye on him.
What the Text showed him, was it what will happen or is what has happen with his wife. Night Watch is a smart Pony and wood give Silver the time to solve the problems they are having. Can't Luna apologize to her? Luna love Night Watch in her own way and wants to keep her near.
Dragonfox
I really like the feel of this chapter Silver is better but still not wright.
and I was proven right, text was here and now the story has several new quest.
there is three more picas of the magical armor to find and yes I am thinking it is armor of some kind.
would it not be funny if they find 4 of the 5 and it turns out the last pace is hidden in ponyville some ware and only true love will revel its hiding place. AKA Silver Stars and his total herd / wives are required to find it.
just my feeling's and who am I but a simple reader or cynosure of a work of art.
Harts Fire
6232688 Only the fates know what lies in the future for our hero.
There are two spaces between "Stroke" and "laughed."
I'm pretty sure there should be an apostrophe in "could-be's."
He's earned her loyalty "on" this trip.
6233736 Typos, in my fanfic? It's fowl play!
6233754 So overall, I'm not sure what to make of everything that's happening here. The big revelation is that there are more parts to this series of artifacts that Silver has, for five altogether (though there may be more than that).
Overall, I do like the way these artifacts are being portrayed. This is how powerful magic items are, in my opinion, supposed to be; shrouded in rumors and stories, with the information being incomplete and contradictory. Moreover, they should have drawbacks at least equal to their powers, which these do. Not only can they not come off, but their focused nature makes using them a double-edged sword at best. The cherry on the sundae is that they work better when they're together, so there's a built-in reason to go looking for the remaining pieces. This is really great design, where this item is concerned.
I'm half-tempted to try and figure out what the other pieces could be, and I'm a little surprised that Silver, Celestia, and Stroke didn't hit Oman up for more information in that regard. One is obviously a crown that enhances the brain, but as for the others, I'm less certain.
Beyond that, I admit I rolled my eyes a little at Silver's weirdly "I'm fine. My love is going to leave me! I'm feeling better now" attitude here. It's not so much that he was crying about how awful he's been to the people he loves (again) - at this point that's just his character - but that he was rejoicing in his altered state one moment, then sobbing the next, and then so easily cuddled back to peacefulness. It felt almost schizophrenic. If Oman hadn't already identified that this second artifact is affecting Silver's athletic abilities, I'd wonder if it was affecting his emotional state instead.
What he should do is seek out Luna and demand an explanation about what's going on with Night Watch, and figure out how to (have her help him) fix it. If nothing else, Luna can pass messages back and forth, so this shouldn't be treated as a problem that he can't deal with right now. Admittedly, he has a royal visit coming up, but it'd be nice if Silver was capable of handling more than one thing at a time.
6236869 They are proper artifacts in all the good ways, I say. As for Silver's emotional whiplash, well, he was amped up like Rainbow Dash on meth, give the guy a little break? Just because the artifact is not specifically 'of emotions' doesn't mean it has no effect on such, just like his carnal widget certainly had its own impact.
band
Ugh. This is not a solution. I still want the bands gone.
I thought that was “bush.”
*in sarcastic but funny tone of voice* Yes, we want to make a good impression to our bed!
What about go to sleep and contact Luna to tell her her idea already backfiring and she have to apologise and tell what actually going on or what doesn't. Also to check up on Glim Glam and resolve situation before she accidentally whole history. Ye, he doesn't know about that, but revenge from mage could be all kinds of terrible anyway.
Ah right, down we go. At least he's not controlled with his penis anymore. Hope there are no plugs in the set. That will complicate his life in a whole other new way. -_-
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Down into darkness. It only grows dimmer.